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I'm in it for the poetry
I'm in it for the poetry
the words
the meaning
stepping into worlds
and dancing to the beat
of you, him , her
relating on many levels
disagreeing but understanding
finding my voice in this world
of foreplay without the regret
or the abandonment
coz when I leave
my words stay
they wait for me
stare and remind me
it's not the readers
tis their words
my own words
that I let go
and stopped beating myself about
those words I can take back
but I know now
I can erase them also
and that'll be why
I'm in it for the poetry
the words
the meaning
stepping into worlds
and dancing to the beat
of you, him , her
relating on many levels
disagreeing but understanding
finding my voice in this world
of foreplay without the regret
or the abandonment
coz when I leave
my words stay
they wait for me
stare and remind me
it's not the readers
tis their words
my own words
that I let go
and stopped beating myself about
those words I can take back
but I know now
I can erase them also
and that'll be why
I'm in it for the poetry
Published 20th Mar 2013
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20th Mar 2013 11:39pm
I like this Gigi, it's real and fresh and it's you
maybe, break this line thus-ly;
and stopped beating myself
about those words I can take back
and foreplay unless you meant four play, which is pretty cool.
great stuff though Gigi, hat tip to ya
maybe, break this line thus-ly;
and stopped beating myself
about those words I can take back
and foreplay unless you meant four play, which is pretty cool.
great stuff though Gigi, hat tip to ya
20th Mar 2013 11:43pm
Lol I meant the dirty stuff :-) lol kidding yeah I'll fix this up a bit!! I can't write lately and this hit me out of no where so I went with it! Now I must clean up lol :-) Ty xoxoxo much respect to you
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24th Mar 2013 2:32am
Thank you scribble I haven't had much time to read anyone's or write. I have catching up to do xoxo
22nd Mar 2013 4:30am
24th Mar 2013 2:33am
Yes me too! The thing with writing is its out then you can take it back. I love that! Xoxo Ty crim
not going to lie,great piece of writing,but completely different to you other poems. really nice still
xx
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24th Mar 2013 2:34am
24th Mar 2013 2:29am
I love the ending Gg where you can come back and erase the words that are here waiting for you..me being an avid deleter can really relate to that..this is a lovely poem..peace Crim
24th Mar 2013 2:34am
24th Mar 2013 2:54am
Gg I just realised I already commented on this piece lol..i'm sorry i've been a little out of it..love you though..peace Crim
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4th May 2013 9:45am
if you can erase all
and i you are able to do that which means you are lucky
and i you are able to do that which means you are lucky
15th Aug 2013 4:21am
I love your work and energy. Your are definitely one of the greatest poets I know.
15th Aug 2013 3:10pm
