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A Desert Life
A well abandoned
amongst ripples of
sand
Sun bleached camel
bones litter the
wasteland
Ghosts of nomads
passed haunt the
dunes
A sidewinder glides
across the scorching
grains
As the dung
beatle searches for
remains
amongst ripples of
sand
Sun bleached camel
bones litter the
wasteland
Ghosts of nomads
passed haunt the
dunes
A sidewinder glides
across the scorching
grains
As the dung
beatle searches for
remains
Published 20th Nov 2012
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Anonymous
20th Nov 2012 3:06pm
This is one of your best ones so far.
Wonderful imagery! Loved it!
Wonderful imagery! Loved it!
20th Nov 2012 9:27pm
20th Nov 2012 3:38pm
I agree great imagery reminds me of some of the stories my great grandpa used to tell, he was a Bedouin :)
great write love it!!!
great write love it!!!
20th Nov 2012 9:28pm
Thank you very much. I'm glad this was able to bring up those memories for you.
20th Nov 2012 4:22pm
20th Nov 2012 9:29pm
20th Nov 2012 7:09pm
so visual, wonderfully descriptive of the place, the atmosphere. A refreshing dip into the realm of the senses.
20th Nov 2012 9:29pm
