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Worship My Feet
This is a story about a friend named Jack
He has a reputation for wearing all black
He owns a shoe store on the Sunset Strip
The tales that he tells are always a trip
One night we were partying back at my place
About a dozen of us were getting shit faced
The night turned into morning and most went to bed
Except for Jack and I and that’s when I said
“I see the way you look at me, I’m in the mood to play
Come up to my room with me, I want you to stay”
I knew what he liked and for Jack I had a treat
I pulled out his big dick and I rubbed it with my feet
He grabbed my left ankle and began licking my arch
His dick stood at attention and ready to march
He took my right foot and my toes got nicely sucked
I squeezed his dick between my feet so they could get well fucked
He grabbed me by the ankles and he fucked my cute soft feet
Using spit to lube them up for his throbbing meat
Then he grabbed his dick and started stroking fast
He moaned and tensed his body, followed by a blast
His cum covered my feet as he released all his stress
I put them in my mouth, licking up the mess
Now it was my turn and I lied back on my bed
Jack dove in face first and started giving head
He has a reputation for wearing all black
He owns a shoe store on the Sunset Strip
The tales that he tells are always a trip
One night we were partying back at my place
About a dozen of us were getting shit faced
The night turned into morning and most went to bed
Except for Jack and I and that’s when I said
“I see the way you look at me, I’m in the mood to play
Come up to my room with me, I want you to stay”
I knew what he liked and for Jack I had a treat
I pulled out his big dick and I rubbed it with my feet
He grabbed my left ankle and began licking my arch
His dick stood at attention and ready to march
He took my right foot and my toes got nicely sucked
I squeezed his dick between my feet so they could get well fucked
He grabbed me by the ankles and he fucked my cute soft feet
Using spit to lube them up for his throbbing meat
Then he grabbed his dick and started stroking fast
He moaned and tensed his body, followed by a blast
His cum covered my feet as he released all his stress
I put them in my mouth, licking up the mess
Now it was my turn and I lied back on my bed
Jack dove in face first and started giving head
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Re: A Fetish for Feet
27th Oct 2012 7:50pm
How is it that everything u write gives me butterflies?? I can't wait to read the next line. Always written so well with excellent flow. Great write as always Ms. Holly!
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27th Oct 2012 7:55pm
Hi Milky!
There is no next line. That is left to your imagination. Thank you for your comment. I always love seeing you here. By the way, there has been a request for you and I to collab on a poem about us in a hot tub together. I like to write from experience so we may have to act that one out first. ;)
Holly
There is no next line. That is left to your imagination. Thank you for your comment. I always love seeing you here. By the way, there has been a request for you and I to collab on a poem about us in a hot tub together. I like to write from experience so we may have to act that one out first. ;)
Holly
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27th Oct 2012 8:03pm
I don't know where to start with that reply, in a hot tub maybe??? All of our fellow DUPers are loving these comments.
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27th Oct 2012 8:06pm
I wonder if they really like my poems or if they just come for the conversations between you and I in the comment sections. :)
Holly
Holly
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Poems, comments, whatever else you want to post... Please take pictures, or at least paint them in words that even a blind old man like me can see... Holly, love your ability to insert humor into your most passionate moments. Laughs are almost as good as howling screams, lol... And now that I have missed my bus, I will be here at my computer all weekend, just waiting for the next one, or two, or three... Phew, all of the sudden I am feeling a very milky sensation, HA! JJ
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27th Oct 2012 11:31pm
Well, I had things to do and was going to hang out with friends, so it all depends on what happens. One of my friends had tickets to see Cloud Atlas that I now won't likely be able to afford to go see. jj
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27th Oct 2012 11:40pm
I don't mind this being a chat room. I really don't but does anyone have any comments on the poem? :)
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28th Oct 2012 00:24am
OUCH!, I think I just got cyber-spanked... by a foot!
The poem was mentally seductive with vivid, throbbing 3D imagery. And pretty feet too!!! JJ
The poem was mentally seductive with vivid, throbbing 3D imagery. And pretty feet too!!! JJ
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28th Oct 2012 1:29am
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28th Oct 2012 00:35am
god.. just impossibly sexy. Im not even a foot person.
It all just boils down to your style.
sexy
It all just boils down to your style.
sexy
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28th Oct 2012 1:30am
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28th Oct 2012 11:23pm
Is this the same Jack who was "nimble and quick and then jumped over the candlestick?" (laugh)
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29th Oct 2012 11:02am
Poetryman, I think you keep returning under the disguise of play but (like so many other men who are afraid to admit it) you are holding onto a major foot fetish! It's okay. You can tell me. ;)
Holly
Holly
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2012 2:58pm
Holly,
What great flow and I'm not talking about the one over your cute little feet ; ) Now, among all the other places, you also have my ankles aching! LOL!!!
tornado
What great flow and I'm not talking about the one over your cute little feet ; ) Now, among all the other places, you also have my ankles aching! LOL!!!
tornado
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31st Oct 2012 7:54am
Well baby, let's see if we can make your entire being ache for me. J/J.
Holly
Holly
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30th Oct 2012 6:10am
Have a thing for feet, so this is very up my alley haha. amazing detail in what you write
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31st Oct 2012 7:58am
Thanks you Charles. You are the targeted audience. All of you men who love a female's feet kind of turn me on. It's cute but at the same time sexy. Would you believe that I have a regular at the club who comes in and pays for my feet. I swear to God! He pays me $100 to give me a foot massage for two songs which is six minutes. We all win! He satisfies his foot fetish and I make a C note while having my feet massaged!
Holly
Holly
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4th Nov 2012 2:14am
ive always had a thing for gals feet, among other things. Not a huge deal but, if she isn't creeped out it helps.
damn, well you must have some awesome feet then :)
glad it gets you off a little too
damn, well you must have some awesome feet then :)
glad it gets you off a little too
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31st Oct 2012 6:24am
This melody was epic. I was singing and wondering oh this is sick. Now I wonder who would be willing to turn their feet into this little stage play you have here? But amazing write, the tune, the melody, the jingle, wharever way you want to put it magnificent write. Oh yeah the best way towl write is from experience.
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31st Oct 2012 8:00am
Thank you P.S. I agree that the best way to write is from experience.
Holly
Holly
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31st Oct 2012 8:08pm
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1st Nov 2012 8:03am
It is fun being in charge. It is fun being taken charge of too! Thank you for your comment, Broomie.
Holly
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1st Nov 2012 10:55pm
The feet in the poem and the feat of the poem are both sexy and beautiful.
Gurudev
Gurudev
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2nd Nov 2012 10:37pm
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1st Dec 2012 9:32pm
Well manicured feet in sandals, with painted toenails, are a near-turn-on to me. Well, the writer of the Song of Songs starts a chapter declaring: "How beautiful your sandalled feet, O prince's daughter.."
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15th Feb 2013 8:09am
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15th Feb 2013 8:11am
That's the goal, Blocat. Now what do you intend to do with those things I made hard for you? ;)
Holly
Holly
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18th Jan 2013 2:12am
This is fucking sexy. I too love girlie feet. Licking chocolate off a girls toes is the best.
Good write.
Good write.
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15th Feb 2013 8:12am
Thank you, Blake. You can lick chocolate off my toes anytime you like. My only request is that you share the chocolate!
Holly
Holly
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16th Jun 2013 6:20am
lol. Somehow, I don't think I'd have to try too hard for your dick. ;)
Holly
Holly
Re: Worship My Feet
14th Feb 2013 7:34am
While you are writing erotica, (which I usually do not care for) you have made your piece flow with your descriptive imagery and uses of colloquial language and your rhyming scheme all work very well.
For an erotica piece, it was very well written. Great work.
For an erotica piece, it was very well written. Great work.
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15th Feb 2013 4:38pm
I would have dove in face first too...Licky!!!
Great piece sweets!!
You gave good pen!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great piece sweets!!
You gave good pen!!!
Sir Lancelott
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1st Mar 2013 10:48am
I love a man who's willing to dive right in there! Thank you for the compliment, Sir.
Holly
Holly
Re: Worship My Feet
17th Feb 2013 4:04pm
This was so sexy. I too love my feet worshipped and being in control with them ;-)
Great ink...
Great ink...
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1st Mar 2013 10:52am
Yes dear. having my feet worshipped and completely controlling a man as a result is a powerful sensation that appeals to the dominant in me. I could go on and on...
Holly
Holly
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1st Apr 2013 11:35pm
Holly, I am new here and new to your work. This write is immensely hot! I have somewhat of a submissive fetish, basically anything that involves me being completely subservient to the woman, even to the point of humiliation. This would include worshipping her feet! Oh, to have a dominant woman make me kiss her beautiful feet and even let me cum on them, just the thought works me up! My pants are bulging after reading this sexy poem, keep up your incredible work!
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2013 11:25am
I love you
Thank you for describing how to foot
Fuck
I can just see em cumming all over them
Thank you for describing how to foot
Fuck
I can just see em cumming all over them
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29th Oct 2013 11:31am
DEHI TABA PADAPALLBA MUDARAM---its sankskrit...wrriten by ancient poet JAYDEB for loved WOMAM PADMABATI...its mean Queen I do worship of ur feet....so as i...do...when read ds...
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I worship your erotica Holly.. you really know how to deliver!!! making me creamy for you beautiful lady ;) peace Crim
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1st Nov 2013 5:37pm
Thank you, Crimsin. I've read you as well and I love the way you lay it down hard.
Holly
Holly
Re: Worship My Feet
18th Nov 2013 6:19am
yeah you got a flow girl.. I love the way you picture yourself in this piece .. very well written..
cyanide is keen to know the part after he gave the head lol...
write on...
cyanide..
cyanide is keen to know the part after he gave the head lol...
write on...
cyanide..
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3rd Nov 2016 9:06pm
I love this poem. I was truly aroused by it. You need to write a few more poems like this and put it in a book. I think there are other people who would like your poetry.
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27th Aug 2017 3:48pm
Thank you. Gemini was considering adding a few of these poems to his next book but I think that project is at a stand still. If it aroused you then it served it's purpose! ;)
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14th Oct 2018 3:36am
Absolutely exquisite—oh, to be Jack... Well, I suppose I'll have to Jack in my own fashion. All my praise and adoration to you and your sensual words!
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Instant turn on and desire
24th Nov 2019 5:32am
I love this poem, it’s erotic and hot, I damn sure I hope the women that wrote it in person so I could show her imagination a whole other door way to erotic ness from just those sexy feet. I love myself.
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Instant turn on and desire
24th Nov 2019 5:35am
Let do that to your feet and million other things. Let me open your mind to a whole door of imagination and erotic ness.
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22nd Oct 2024 2:01am
Awsum read, I couldn't wait to see what happened next, and it great detail also, I bet you've got a bangin' set of hooves btw😉😏lol
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