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Cream Me
The subtle machinations
of the kiss
you blew to me,
were like the curling shafts of light
that swirl and sprint for free
when stirring up my coffee
with a little cream to go
and letting slip a glance at you
as then you’re turning slow
and I like it.
runningturtle87
of the kiss
you blew to me,
were like the curling shafts of light
that swirl and sprint for free
when stirring up my coffee
with a little cream to go
and letting slip a glance at you
as then you’re turning slow
and I like it.
runningturtle87
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Re: Cream Me
10th Sep 2012 11:37pm
Oyes! There are many ways to cream, however. Good read, indeed, runningturtle.
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11th Sep 2012 00:23am
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11th Sep 2012 2:39am
I think in terms of pure thought forms; they are concrete to me. In my art work I often paint states of consciousness. My work is direct and illustrates the point at which transfers of information take place. One of my most closely documented visuals is the point of contact of awarenesses of any new or novel idea or event. The moment at which a new awareness takes place, a biochemical transformation takes place by bathing the neural network with the chemistry and energy needed to do a reformatting of a sector of the brain. I find this intriguing and very drawing. For that reason, I can assign textures and patterns to mental processes. And creaminess is the swath of emotional interchange between innocence and awareness of one's previous naiveté. A golden molten tint of moist stickiness. It's like that. As a single drop, it makes a circle, as in the middle of the symbol I use as an avatar for DU. And that is exactly what it is. There is nothing about that symbol that has not been documented on 1000 pages, Grace.
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11th Sep 2012 9:09am
I have noticed it, runningturtle. Textures and thoughts patterns have always been an interesting subject. I am not too well versed in your avatar: but for me its folding velvet; and the circle a nexus; of what? who knows, maybe a self, a you, a pin prick of how one can see oneself, a personality within a person so to say.Anyway, I believe that the expression of you, evoke different feel from every readers: one to one's own. Doesn't it.
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12th Sep 2012 1:00pm
Just to make sure, I have opened the door on that subject in today's writing.............Just for this occasion.
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11th Sep 2012 00:25am