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Sexy Beast
You hardly notice me my secret lust
i'm not ballsy enough to make your head spin
fair play writer of all writers
who's words sink in and ravage my brain
make their way to my nether parts
making me dream and cream
I get wet when I see your name on screen
pounding me with new ideas
you enter my core
toying with my emotions
though you don't see me
i'm your invisible whore
tickling me then knocking me flat on my ass
your words the assasin
as I lick my wounds clean
feed me more brutality
pleassssssssssssse
you sexy beast!!!
i'm not ballsy enough to make your head spin
fair play writer of all writers
who's words sink in and ravage my brain
make their way to my nether parts
making me dream and cream
I get wet when I see your name on screen
pounding me with new ideas
you enter my core
toying with my emotions
though you don't see me
i'm your invisible whore
tickling me then knocking me flat on my ass
your words the assasin
as I lick my wounds clean
feed me more brutality
pleassssssssssssse
you sexy beast!!!
Published 26th Aug 2012
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2012 10:19pm
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26th Aug 2012 10:27pm
I love your brutal side Christian roar!!! ahhh makes me dream of what you could do..ty for the add to your reading list..peace Crim :)
Anonymous
26th Aug 2012 11:20pm
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26th Aug 2012 11:35pm
26th Aug 2012 11:42pm
You do amaze with your unbridled writing. Whatever the direction... you hit hard!
27th Aug 2012 00:26am
You rang! oh I thought you were talking about me! hahaha great piece sweet Crim go girl!
Red
Red
27th Aug 2012 1:03am
Anonymous
27th Aug 2012 2:04am
Like Soul Man said!
Strider
Strider
27th Aug 2012 11:02pm
2nd Oct 2012 10:18am
This is an intense poem written with a submissive narrative. Not many poets can pull that off. I give this poem a 10 out of 10. I am excited to read more of what you have to offer to this communuity.
27th Oct 2012 6:03am
BRAVO... This left me with such a wicked grin upon finishing.... Your wording of this piece is exceptionally seductive.... Adore it!
Anonymous
30th Dec 2012 2:03am
Think we all have someone like this. Can relate! :)
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