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The vexation of all men
What is it that vexes all men?
It can be harsh, changing
and indomitable like a tempest.
Could it be the dichotomy of good and evil?
Since time immemorial
this quandary has been debated,
fore this has started wars
and made great enemies,
crushed armies, made rubble of kingdoms.
Legendary sonnets have been composed;
written, many quatrains and odes,
all to this, that all men seek to hold.
What could that possibly be?
Something that can tear up your world
or make it the happiest it has ever been
you decide what it is going to be
and when you find it care for it lovingly.
So what is it you say?
Simple,
a woman.
Gypsy Red
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Re: The vexation of all men
21st Aug 2012 2:56am
Bravo Gypsy red...Yes indeed. Woman: the boon and the bane, the claw and the poultice, nectar and poison: vex a man, send a woman...I love your Poem...*kiss* Muahsss!!!
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re: Re: The vexation of all men
Haha yes indeed, lol glad you liked this one Grace,it just came at the spur of the moment.lol Smooches back at ya!
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Re: The vexation of all men
21st Aug 2012 3:29am
Yes, and I was all ready to take exception, to offer alternatives and corrections, for necessarily as a male I must be expert on my kind, but then...what am I to say, when you pull the trump card out? Vexed again...by a woman....I relent! Must you ever be so very insightful? Loved it....
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re: Re: The vexation of all men
21st Aug 2012 4:58pm
Hmmm...Let me see, must I be so insightful? Yea realy I must,Lololol I have studied very carefully human nature and especially the male species. I am a watcher, I like to observe everything around me and study carefully the way people interact, so this is the product of one of my many observations.I am so glad that this piece was factual and relatable. It tickles me pink that you had to acquiesce to these facts.Thanks for reading my humble piece.
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Re: The vexation of all men
21st Aug 2012 3:54am
Happily so. I went to the Doc and had a vexanaccion but it didn't take. :(
Love the painting AND your words.
Love the painting AND your words.
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re: Re: The vexation of all men
21st Aug 2012 4:59pm
Hahaha I knew you would like the painting, yea no shots are gonna fix the unfixable. lolol Thanks for stopping by Ken.
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Re: The vexation of all men
21st Aug 2012 4:58am
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21st Aug 2012 5:01pm
Re: The vexation of all men
Anonymous
21st Aug 2012 6:42am
I wish they were that simple, Red.
You outta know!!! Strider :)
Ha ha.....
You outta know!!! Strider :)
Ha ha.....
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re: Re: The vexation of all men
Who me ???? I would NEVER vex a man...Sweet little ol me would NEVER do that.hahahahaa and if you believe that...you are entirely too gullible. hahahaha Thanks Strider.
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Re: The vexation of all men
21st Aug 2012 8:04am
Love it Gypsy. I was always told by my ex's it was my fault (whatever they did in temper) that was only in their own heads.
A great write dear. :)
A great write dear. :)
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re: Re: The vexation of all men
You know Magda, that is the biggest cowardice men do, blaming women for their iniquities, never let anyone blame you for things that they do, we are each responsible for our own actions. Thank you for reading and commenting.Huggs :))
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