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One Minute
Eyes meeting across the room
A look exchanged
A smile replied
With a raised eyebrow
Fingers on lips
Love sets to bloom
A look exchanged
A silent wave
Eyes averted
Smiles tremulous
Touches of fingers
Breakups in process
That one minute
Of acts given away
Decides the path
Of come what may
An over-bright smile
A look, a sigh
In one Minute
They give it away
A look exchanged
A smile replied
With a raised eyebrow
Fingers on lips
Love sets to bloom
A look exchanged
A silent wave
Eyes averted
Smiles tremulous
Touches of fingers
Breakups in process
That one minute
Of acts given away
Decides the path
Of come what may
An over-bright smile
A look, a sigh
In one Minute
They give it away
Published 26th Jun 2012
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26th Jun 2012 3:36am
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26th Jun 2012 3:49pm
in a moment we can see
our 1 true destiny
but only if we pay attention
& use our own intuition
to assess what the moment means
otherwise we just may miss out on a dream....
our 1 true destiny
but only if we pay attention
& use our own intuition
to assess what the moment means
otherwise we just may miss out on a dream....
27th Jun 2012 1:01am
Yes Goodest: life is like that. One missed call, one decision to say no...thanks for reading and commenting.
26th Jun 2012 6:22pm
Grace
Very apt. One can easily relate to it.
I love how you make rather mundane and
fleeting moments seem worthwhile.
Loved this.
Happy writing,
Sumeet
Very apt. One can easily relate to it.
I love how you make rather mundane and
fleeting moments seem worthwhile.
Loved this.
Happy writing,
Sumeet
27th Jun 2012 1:14am
26th Jun 2012 10:55pm
A minute is as precious as hours or days - it can determine life and death....literally and metaphorically. You portray this piece like no other. Thank you for sharing.
Best regards, Butterscotch.
Best regards, Butterscotch.
27th Jun 2012 1:15am
A minute decision can decide the path that follows, you are right Butterscotch. Thanks for commenting.
27th Jun 2012 11:07pm
28th Jun 2012 00:43am
28th Jun 2012 00:56am
28th Jun 2012 1:02am
Thank you Glynis for reading and commenting. Yes, a decision made in a minute have a great impact on what will follow.
