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Dream Lover
A delicate wind
brushes across my skin
caressing my senses
lying nude on a beach
under an azure sky
the tide gently lapping
at my inner thighs
arroused by thoughts
of my dream lover
I start to pleasure myself
as the waves rush over me
tenderly licking at my flesh
spread wide I let the sea
and my fingers explore my sex
all the while visions
of you dance in my head
I reach my cresendo
as the tide pulls out
realizing I don't need my dream lover
who is just a phantom
flickering in my mind
I have what I need
the sea pounding against me
a delicate wind caressing me
and my skillful hands
brushes across my skin
caressing my senses
lying nude on a beach
under an azure sky
the tide gently lapping
at my inner thighs
arroused by thoughts
of my dream lover
I start to pleasure myself
as the waves rush over me
tenderly licking at my flesh
spread wide I let the sea
and my fingers explore my sex
all the while visions
of you dance in my head
I reach my cresendo
as the tide pulls out
realizing I don't need my dream lover
who is just a phantom
flickering in my mind
I have what I need
the sea pounding against me
a delicate wind caressing me
and my skillful hands
Published 19th Jun 2012
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19th Jun 2012 8:13pm
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20th Jun 2012 1:30am
20th Jun 2012 5:40pm
Gg ty for the generous comment..I wish I was clever, fierce and talented as you.. xoxoxo
20th Jun 2012 2:08am
this .... is vivid and languid...
I can feel the sea water brushing over my own skin...beautifully written My Crim!
I can feel the sea water brushing over my own skin...beautifully written My Crim!
20th Jun 2012 5:41pm
Anonymous
20th Jun 2012 2:24am
Beautiful write......
a pleasure to read
Peace
Kitty
a pleasure to read
Peace
Kitty
20th Jun 2012 5:42pm
Anonymous
20th Jun 2012 2:04pm
Very nicely penned, adorable in it's sensuality :-) peace, Miki
20th Jun 2012 5:43pm
Anonymous
20th Jun 2012 6:19pm
Unveiling,
Now that's one of the best reasons I've heard for keeping up with the tide tables!
Your line: "the sea pounding against me" was just so awesomely visual! Enjoyed
tornado
Now that's one of the best reasons I've heard for keeping up with the tide tables!
Your line: "the sea pounding against me" was just so awesomely visual! Enjoyed
tornado
20th Jun 2012 10:03pm
23rd Jun 2012 5:12pm
Um...I'm.not sure what to say...i read this...chills went thru my body and I was left here...speachless looking at this little comment box...i almost said nothing but then decided it would be a travesty to read something of such beauty and pass it by without letting the author know how truely beautiful it is...well done love, it is an amazing poem ;) nuff said
24th Jun 2012 9:49pm
28th Jun 2012 9:54pm
No love, the thanks goes to you ;) my comment is nothing more then a byproduct of such beautiful words. Anyone who is capable of feeling would be foolish to not give you the same praise
1st Jul 2012 6:50pm
crim,
i know you encourage 'honest critique'
and i am largely known to speak my mind,
but today the first reaction i have is:
g a s p.
second: its in the wrong category. this is
a gem in the muck one has to wade in that
corner which has a male and a female in close proximity symbol.
third: what wonderful choice of words[verbs]
they enrich this many times.
a simple concept here has been expressed so
sensually. the lack of punctuation and capitalization only adds up to the overall effect.
the phantom can drown in the ocean now.
:) you have got a genuine admirer
sumeet
i know you encourage 'honest critique'
and i am largely known to speak my mind,
but today the first reaction i have is:
g a s p.
second: its in the wrong category. this is
a gem in the muck one has to wade in that
corner which has a male and a female in close proximity symbol.
third: what wonderful choice of words[verbs]
they enrich this many times.
a simple concept here has been expressed so
sensually. the lack of punctuation and capitalization only adds up to the overall effect.
the phantom can drown in the ocean now.
:) you have got a genuine admirer
sumeet
17th Jul 2012 8:47pm
ty for the great critique and the heads up on the category change you're right..wishing you peace Crim :)
26th Oct 2012 4:21am
Love this!!!! I think nature is so sexy. This is such a visual poem. Great write. :)
26th Oct 2012 4:36am
ty kind soul I love nature as well it's so serene and I agree sexy..wishing you peace Crim :)
