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I got baggage...
don't even pretend you don't
I'm not buying it
so don't try to go there
you know you do
it's not even a question
but this is...
how compatible is it with mine
is your dominant strong enough
...to counter my submissive
your structure firm enough
...to withstand my chaos
are you bold enough
...to encourage my timidity
is your patience up to the task
...of calming my uncertainty
do our interests coincide
we're not meant to be duplicates
but can we share
& enjoy each other's minds
enough similar...
that we can find common ground
our differences should compliment
is it possible our belief systems might align
are we on the same trajectory
will you learn...grow...evolve...with me
watching the sunrise in delight...
until our final sun sets
can we sit by the fire...
...chatting...
...or in companionable silence
do you believe in the goodness...& dangers...
...inherent in humanity
so...
how well does our baggage fit
when placed side by side
are they complimentary
...or do they clash
will you settle in...
...or disappear...
...if I show you mine
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Re. I got baggage...
17th Mar 2025 5:41pm
Wow.. that's a beautiful poem.. honest, truthful, and a bit seductive! Love it!
Great job!
Great job!
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Re: Re. I got baggage...
17th Mar 2025 5:42pm
Re. I got baggage...
17th Mar 2025 6:51pm
I'd RL the hell outta this if I could.
GIIIIIRL...this is the truth right here.
And that last stanza?
Damn.
GIIIIIRL...this is the truth right here.
And that last stanza?
Damn.
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Re: Re. I got baggage...
17th Mar 2025 8:33pm
We all got have it. Just a matter of finding complimentary counterparts. I consider it listed 😂
Re. I got baggage...
17th Mar 2025 7:48pm
You don't get to an age Willow without having any unless you're the Virgin Mary or walk on water haha, it's all about acceptance, excellent piece as always ♥️
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Re: Re. I got baggage...
17th Mar 2025 8:34pm
Ain't it the truth! It's those who believe their baggage isn't real who cause so many problems. Thank you, Pete
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17th Mar 2025 8:12pm
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17th Mar 2025 8:35pm
Re. I got baggage...
17th Mar 2025 10:13pm
The best thing is when we can help each other carry it...
Beautiful concept and truth!
❤️k
Beautiful concept and truth!
❤️k
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Re: Re. I got baggage...
17th Mar 2025 10:34pm
Re. I got baggage...
17th Mar 2025 10:34pm
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Re. I got baggage...
Yesterday 3:05am
Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the list it belongs! I agree with, Speak. A righteous spill, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re. I got baggage...
Yesterday 12:43pm
Wow, you expressed every thought I have about this subject and beautifully so, sis 💖
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Yesterday 7:38pm
Re. I got baggage...
Yesterday 4:31pm
Oh balls, comparing the luggage to determine if it makes a full set. That's incredibly intimate shit you just poured all over the page. The vulnerability of the moment in time when you really look... reaaaaalllly look deeper.
I wish you the absolute best, hottie. In all things.
I wish you the absolute best, hottie. In all things.
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Re: Re. I got baggage...
Yesterday 7:40pm
Likewise! It does bring a smile to my face to know there's a firecracker out there called Betty! Keep them on their toes, girl!