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Saturday Night (The Curse Of The Club)
Saturday night, into Town
City lights, hold me down
Half beauties, prop up bars
Chicken fillets, push up bras
Dance floor calls, come n' dance
Night fever, crazy pants
Corny lines, necking wine
Last waltz, yours or mine?
Sweating, stop! I've slept with a minger
Not to mention, a dodgy finger
The curse of the club stripped me clean
If it was light, I could of seen
City lights, hold me down
Half beauties, prop up bars
Chicken fillets, push up bras
Dance floor calls, come n' dance
Night fever, crazy pants
Corny lines, necking wine
Last waltz, yours or mine?
Sweating, stop! I've slept with a minger
Not to mention, a dodgy finger
The curse of the club stripped me clean
If it was light, I could of seen
Published 4th Jan 2025
Author's Note
Sorry girls lol, us men know no better in our youth but now 40 I hope I've matured 🤣
Well you can tell by the way I use my walk
I'm a woman's man, no time to talk
Bee Gees - Night Fever (Saturday Night Fever)
Well you can tell by the way I use my walk
I'm a woman's man, no time to talk
Bee Gees - Night Fever (Saturday Night Fever)
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4th Jan 2025 9:40am
Hahaha, this was fun.
I loved “Saturday Night Fever” when it came out!
(okay, I’m dating myself)
I loved “Saturday Night Fever” when it came out!
(okay, I’m dating myself)
4th Jan 2025 11:40am
4th Jan 2025 12:20pm
4th Jan 2025 2:45pm
4th Jan 2025 3:00pm
I enjoyed this poem I was laughing at the chicken filets, push up bra's. Okay then.
4th Jan 2025 9:19pm
4th Jan 2025 4:11pm
Oh man, took me back a few years with this one. While I'd like the energy of those days, I'm not interested in reversing gears to go back. Lessons learned...& women are not immune to the wilder mentality in youth either 😂
4th Jan 2025 9:20pm
Nor me Willow, it's a young person's game lol and agree with you about the women haha 🤣🙃❤️
4th Jan 2025 4:59pm
4th Jan 2025 9:21pm
5th Jan 2025 1:03am
But you had fun Pete & that's ultimately what really counts. I love the way you wrote this, so easily conveying that alcoholic haze, lol. 🤣
5th Jan 2025 11:00am
5th Jan 2025 5:18am
Brilliantly penned, Pete. Into the list it belongs. I was never a fan of the movie, probably because I don't dance. Love the Brothers Gibb, though. I even like the classic stuff when they mimicked the Beatles. Especially, "New York Mining Disaster 1941" But I love the R&B style they came up with. I know it's called, Disco, and when it died, they were kinda guilty by association. Fortunately, Barry Gibb, was a songwriting genius. That's how he made money in the 80's. Sorry for the tangent, you brought up music. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
5th Jan 2025 11:05am
Thanks Damian, yes I thought they were great, not so much the movie, i have to agree, I think it was their songs what made the movie and just that one scene for me with Travolta doing the dance to 'You Should Be Dancing' and even all the great artists make mistakes, I am talking about 'The Sergeant Pepper' movie they made lol 🤣♥️
6th Jan 2025 3:01am
That was a bad call. They even talked Peter Frampton into doing that flop. lol.
