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beautiful moments
looking at the proud sun with yellow light
in a mix of daylight and deep shadow
under the cool breeze,
the waving sea and the soft sunshine
i am lying on the crumbling sand
some stories of life,
which are imprisoned in the new moon
i am making the full moon shine on them
look... today some waves
have taken over my bare skin
like i am wearing royal white-blue gown
hey!!!come close to me and
fall on me like a pile of morning
as you know naa,
lotus do not bloom in salty water
moisturize my rough skin suffering
in the salty sand
leave the butterflies playing
in my blue-black shiny hair,
with each passing day
baby... i am getting older
fill some oysters and pearls
of your masculinity in my empty nest
with your poetic hands
teach me the difference between
day and night....
in a mix of daylight and deep shadow
under the cool breeze,
the waving sea and the soft sunshine
i am lying on the crumbling sand
some stories of life,
which are imprisoned in the new moon
i am making the full moon shine on them
look... today some waves
have taken over my bare skin
like i am wearing royal white-blue gown
hey!!!come close to me and
fall on me like a pile of morning
as you know naa,
lotus do not bloom in salty water
moisturize my rough skin suffering
in the salty sand
leave the butterflies playing
in my blue-black shiny hair,
with each passing day
baby... i am getting older
fill some oysters and pearls
of your masculinity in my empty nest
with your poetic hands
teach me the difference between
day and night....
Author's Note
inspired by the image from naaj's poem Cascade...
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Re. beautiful moments
21st Dec 2024 9:51am
“Fall on me like a pile of morning”
I love that line, so beautiful…
And that ending!
RL award as someone says, for sure.
I love that line, so beautiful…
And that ending!
RL award as someone says, for sure.
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21st Dec 2024 10:45am
Re. beautiful moments
21st Dec 2024 9:51am
I could visualise you lying in a tide as the water creeps around and upon you as I read this. Favourite verse (for eroticism):
baby... i am getting older
fill some oysters and pearls
of your masculinity in my empty nest
with your poetic hands
baby... i am getting older
fill some oysters and pearls
of your masculinity in my empty nest
with your poetic hands
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21st Dec 2024 10:44am
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28th Dec 2024 2:23pm
Noticing your avatar, love these lines which sound so apt for you:
leave the butterflies playing
in my blue-black shiny hair,
leave the butterflies playing
in my blue-black shiny hair,
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