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Using a razor till I cut myself
What does that tell you
Travel by night
Just to buy eggs
Organic if you must know
Fame was good
Always got good tables in restaurants
On the subway I'm a regular Joe
Writers get away with that
No annoying fans
No autographs
You're sexy
I'm a thug
It's all good
I wear a wind up watch
Stainless steel
Just like my heart
What does that tell you
Travel by night
Just to buy eggs
Organic if you must know
Fame was good
Always got good tables in restaurants
On the subway I'm a regular Joe
Writers get away with that
No annoying fans
No autographs
You're sexy
I'm a thug
It's all good
I wear a wind up watch
Stainless steel
Just like my heart
Published 26th Sep 2024
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Anonymous
26th Sep 2024 10:14am
There's no way you could ever be a regular Joe. You'll always be famous, my friend. At least in my mind.
Fame is a disaster in the modern world.
I just want good tables in restaurants is all I ask. I can't face the wall either. Need to see the landscape of people.
I am pretty regular.
That's OK with me.
You left suddenly
No warning
Now you're back.
Dup is like that.
Thx for your comment..
I just want good tables in restaurants is all I ask. I can't face the wall either. Need to see the landscape of people.
I am pretty regular.
That's OK with me.
You left suddenly
No warning
Now you're back.
Dup is like that.
Thx for your comment..
26th Sep 2024 11:30am
26th Sep 2024 12:26pm
Yeah, I'm particular about whether I sit.
I'm not as pretty as I used to be so it's a challenge.
Thx Fia
I'm not as pretty as I used to be so it's a challenge.
Thx Fia
26th Sep 2024 1:54pm
Sometimes we have to just tell it like it is for it is necessary to get the point across ✍️🤨👍🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
26th Sep 2024 6:05pm
27th Sep 2024 5:31am
That's forsho indeed I said what I said just don't take it personally 😤😭🤨💯💪👍
27th Sep 2024 11:04am
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26th Sep 2024 6:07pm
26th Sep 2024 3:55pm
I don’t care much about the people but I need to see the entrance. Also a polished thug, but it pays the bills. I dig your writing style. Too cool.
26th Sep 2024 6:08pm
Yeah.
Good to keep an eye out all the time.
Food tasters are good to have also...
Good to keep an eye out all the time.
Food tasters are good to have also...
26th Sep 2024 7:28pm
26th Sep 2024 5:52pm
ooo... this is good... I used to have one of those wind up watches ... Stainless steel... I lost it when I lost my heart... you should be famous
26th Sep 2024 6:10pm
Yeah
I should be famous but I prefer flying under the radar. Keep a close circle of friends.
Don't spread myself thin. That's what my mistress is for ...
I should be famous but I prefer flying under the radar. Keep a close circle of friends.
Don't spread myself thin. That's what my mistress is for ...
26th Sep 2024 7:26pm
26th Sep 2024 8:44pm
27th Sep 2024 8:26am
Dear PS,
I appreciated this write because it’s direct. Having to guess what someone is thinking or worse, not saying, is exhausting. Your gift for directness is a page, or twenty, we should all have in our play books. It does save time. Big Direct Dig! H🌷
I appreciated this write because it’s direct. Having to guess what someone is thinking or worse, not saying, is exhausting. Your gift for directness is a page, or twenty, we should all have in our play books. It does save time. Big Direct Dig! H🌷
27th Sep 2024 11:03am
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28th Sep 2024 4:25am
2nd Oct 2024 1:08am
Oooh, that final line... that's what makes the whole thing poetry. Boom!
Nicely done.
❤k
Nicely done.
❤k
2nd Oct 2024 3:00am
