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Title, Poem, Refrain
You always come back even though you never left
Heart
Irregular
3:30am love poem
Emotional
Thats the dreaded word
The audacity of wanting
I cant sleep
Better to write
You think youll remember it in the morning
You wont
You always come back but you never left
Great line
Went to take a leak
Did so
Got my phone
Writing this
Maybe Ill sleep now
Maybe not
You always come back but you never left
The refrain
Poets are often song writers that never sing
Title
Poem
Refrain
Heart
Irregular
3:30am love poem
Emotional
Thats the dreaded word
The audacity of wanting
I cant sleep
Better to write
You think youll remember it in the morning
You wont
You always come back but you never left
Great line
Went to take a leak
Did so
Got my phone
Writing this
Maybe Ill sleep now
Maybe not
You always come back but you never left
The refrain
Poets are often song writers that never sing
Title
Poem
Refrain
Published 27th Aug 2024
Author's Note
No painting would do it justice
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27th Aug 2024 1:09pm
No, it wouldn't.
Poets are often song writers that never sing. . .
Now THAT is a great line.
LIKE
Poets are often song writers that never sing. . .
Now THAT is a great line.
LIKE
27th Aug 2024 1:34pm
Thanks A
I wrote this at 3:30am. I often get some good thoughts when I should be sleeping..
I wrote this at 3:30am. I often get some good thoughts when I should be sleeping..
27th Aug 2024 1:31pm
27th Aug 2024 1:35pm
I appreciate your comment ASD..
Didn't want this one to get away without writing it ....
Didn't want this one to get away without writing it ....
27th Aug 2024 3:56pm
The words alone says it all in mere mind thoughts from pen to paper ✍️ nicely done 👍
27th Aug 2024 4:29pm
It's kind of amazing how poets are writing still when they should be sleeping. It's hard to turn off the flow of words ...
Thanks Stoney
Thanks Stoney
27th Aug 2024 7:50pm
Yeah I have to agree with that statement 👍 I get like that sometimes when I can't shut my mind off so I write instead of trying to get some sleep when I finish then I can go back to la la land and dream 🤗🤫😁
27th Aug 2024 7:56pm
After I wrote this poem I fell asleep pretty fast. Writing poetry is a sleeping pill kinda ..
28th Aug 2024 1:46am
That has been proven true for me it's like writing in the wee hours of the morning it's peaceful and relaxing and 🧹 cleaning before the storm gets relaxing a silent whisper of sound 😔🙏🪷📿💪
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
27th Aug 2024 6:58pm
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27th Aug 2024 7:02pm
I take cat naps sometimes...
Just to restore
You say a lot of nice things to me, leave me speechless
Thank you 🌈
Just to restore
You say a lot of nice things to me, leave me speechless
Thank you 🌈
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
27th Aug 2024 7:06pm
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27th Aug 2024 7:08pm
28th Aug 2024 5:50am
Dear PS,
This poem has such a resonating feeling of aloneness for me. Those middle of the night solitude thoughts that only other sleepless poets can feel. I hope tonight will bring you sweet dreams my friend. H🌷
This poem has such a resonating feeling of aloneness for me. Those middle of the night solitude thoughts that only other sleepless poets can feel. I hope tonight will bring you sweet dreams my friend. H🌷
28th Aug 2024 11:12am
Dear H,
Aloneness, what a perfect way to describe this poem. And describe me up to a point.
A poet is always examining the human condition. We get healthy portions of joy and pathos. I knew this poem had to be written so I documented it here.
Sleep this past night was better. I was so darn tired from physical and mental torment I did zone out ....
Thanks H, I'm so happy to see you on this entry 💗
Aloneness, what a perfect way to describe this poem. And describe me up to a point.
A poet is always examining the human condition. We get healthy portions of joy and pathos. I knew this poem had to be written so I documented it here.
Sleep this past night was better. I was so darn tired from physical and mental torment I did zone out ....
Thanks H, I'm so happy to see you on this entry 💗
28th Aug 2024 3:23pm
The refrain is excellent.... but "the audacity of wanting" is the line that grabbed me.
And some poets do sing! 😁 Keeping this one handy, just in case. I'm glad you captured it. I still let far too many poems & songs flit their way out of my head without pinning them down.
❤️k
And some poets do sing! 😁 Keeping this one handy, just in case. I'm glad you captured it. I still let far too many poems & songs flit their way out of my head without pinning them down.
❤️k
28th Aug 2024 3:29pm
Ah yes
You are a poet that sings and a damn fine singer at that. All styles. All tenderness and plenty of angst to fill the soul ..
I do some of my best writing when I should be sleeping. So this one wasn't getting off easily.
Appreciate your comment and RL.
KEEP ROCKING RED ❤
You are a poet that sings and a damn fine singer at that. All styles. All tenderness and plenty of angst to fill the soul ..
I do some of my best writing when I should be sleeping. So this one wasn't getting off easily.
Appreciate your comment and RL.
KEEP ROCKING RED ❤
28th Aug 2024 7:05pm
"Poets are often song writers that never sing"
Wonderful line....love it 💘
Great piece, dear PS ❤️
Wonderful line....love it 💘
Great piece, dear PS ❤️
28th Aug 2024 7:59pm
28th Aug 2024 10:30pm
29th Aug 2024 4:28am
Perhaps we are always searching for the one and the relationship that fits our fantasy. May you keep those dreams until they come true. I love this song/poem.
🥂 to the refrain.
NG 💗
🥂 to the refrain.
NG 💗
29th Aug 2024 11:07am
Thank you so much NG.
I send you selected poems and I know I've scored when you give me a comment and an RL.
I'm pretty lucky in my relationships.
I draw on different people to add up to the perfect mate. Because in reality, your perfect mate is really yourself. I think you know what I mean ...
BIG appreciation on this poem. This one has a special meaning to me for some reason !!
Thank you always 💓 💛 💖
I send you selected poems and I know I've scored when you give me a comment and an RL.
I'm pretty lucky in my relationships.
I draw on different people to add up to the perfect mate. Because in reality, your perfect mate is really yourself. I think you know what I mean ...
BIG appreciation on this poem. This one has a special meaning to me for some reason !!
Thank you always 💓 💛 💖
30th Aug 2024 4:31am
30th Aug 2024 2:22pm
Yes ...
I'm in the audience of one watching you on stage and in admiration of your self confidence. Ultimate SELF !
I'm in the audience of one watching you on stage and in admiration of your self confidence. Ultimate SELF !
31st Aug 2024 10:40pm
29th Aug 2024 11:12am
i hope your wishes will never remain unfulfilled.... i can see many have given their hearts to you, there are many who love you. you won't feel sad if someone leaves...
29th Aug 2024 11:19am
You leave
You come back
You leave
You come back
I track you when you leave
How many times will it be before dimpy comes back ?
And you come back because you need to have people connections here. DUP is community. And there's joy and disappointment in every society.
Yes, I want to know you're okay and it's always good to see you when you come back. 💗
You come back
You leave
You come back
I track you when you leave
How many times will it be before dimpy comes back ?
And you come back because you need to have people connections here. DUP is community. And there's joy and disappointment in every society.
Yes, I want to know you're okay and it's always good to see you when you come back. 💗
29th Aug 2024 11:26am
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30th Aug 2024 11:59am
Your words are the fruit of a great in-depth experience, i love your style PoetSpeak. stay safe my friend. Hamid
30th Aug 2024 1:16pm
I'm really digging your comment Hamid.
Thank you so much !!
Stay tuned for more
Thank you so much !!
Stay tuned for more
31st Aug 2024 1:47am
31st Aug 2024 2:17am
31st Aug 2024 11:21am
Love this... excellent flow... captures the emotion... shares it crisply...
31st Aug 2024 11:31am
I had a feeling others would be able to connect with this one.
Your comment is high praise.
Appreciate it so much Lil
Thank you
RL TOO
Wow !
Your comment is high praise.
Appreciate it so much Lil
Thank you
RL TOO
Wow !
5th Sep 2024 4:23pm
Hahaha, this is us to a "T" dude, we have lost so many good poems and lines thinking that we will remember them later. Tight piece dude
5th Sep 2024 4:30pm
Yeah ME
I'm a literary giant at 3am
And shining Bukowski's shoes at high noon.
He was high and laughing all the way to the bank.
Thx Mister
I'm a literary giant at 3am
And shining Bukowski's shoes at high noon.
He was high and laughing all the way to the bank.
Thx Mister
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Dec 2024 5:45pm
16th Sep 2024 6:29pm
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16th Sep 2024 7:41pm
I actually got up and wrote this one down in the early dawn before it slipped away. Sometimes the ones I write in the middle of the night should skip away.
Appreciate the comment Tim
Welcome back to the machine..
Appreciate the comment Tim
Welcome back to the machine..
Anonymous
- Edited 19th Dec 2024 5:45pm
16th Sep 2024 10:31pm
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24th Sep 2024 2:53am
24th Sep 2024 3:26am
Kinda crazy what kind of poems you can write at 3:30am. Personally I think it's my best writing. Most days I don't write them but this one was insistent...so I got my phone and pumped it out.
Happy that you liked it and awarded it an RL.
Must appreciated Wally.
I'm thrilled....
Thank you Sir !!
Happy that you liked it and awarded it an RL.
Must appreciated Wally.
I'm thrilled....
Thank you Sir !!
