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Goodbye Summer
She tested us
Every way she could
Burned us to the ground
Sweat, humidity and frowns
That damn sun
Relentless
Long evenings
Moon lit calls
Walking with you
Sweet summer
Margaritas by the seaside
Lust in the air
No cares
Too hot
Too much rain
Too much traffic
Too much
It goes fast
Somewhere in August
Knowing this will end soon
Labor Day
Last call
We love summer
Hate the heat
Complaints
Melancholy has a way
Autumn on the horizon
Damn pumpkin everything
Makes me laugh
Is what it is
September 21st
Summer waves goodbye
We love ya
Curse you too
Already missing you ...
Every way she could
Burned us to the ground
Sweat, humidity and frowns
That damn sun
Relentless
Long evenings
Moon lit calls
Walking with you
Sweet summer
Margaritas by the seaside
Lust in the air
No cares
Too hot
Too much rain
Too much traffic
Too much
It goes fast
Somewhere in August
Knowing this will end soon
Labor Day
Last call
We love summer
Hate the heat
Complaints
Melancholy has a way
Autumn on the horizon
Damn pumpkin everything
Makes me laugh
Is what it is
September 21st
Summer waves goodbye
We love ya
Curse you too
Already missing you ...
Published 21st Sep 2024
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21st Sep 2024 11:05pm
Hey PS
What a great farewell poem. I'm ready for Fall but I know I'll miss
Summer after my first 30-degree forecast and that drink looks so refreshing!!
Well put amigo!
What a great farewell poem. I'm ready for Fall but I know I'll miss
Summer after my first 30-degree forecast and that drink looks so refreshing!!
Well put amigo!
21st Sep 2024 11:23pm
Hey Hot Sauce
Fitting right ?
Hit me today on one of the most beautiful days of summer she'll be leaving at midnight.
Next couple of weeks will still be warm but that cover of darkness earlier haunts me ..
Might actually go south this winter for awhile If I can. I actually like the cold but it goes on too damn long. You know.
The Adel
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Fitting right ?
Hit me today on one of the most beautiful days of summer she'll be leaving at midnight.
Next couple of weeks will still be warm but that cover of darkness earlier haunts me ..
Might actually go south this winter for awhile If I can. I actually like the cold but it goes on too damn long. You know.
The Adel
Appreciate your comment
21st Sep 2024 11:07pm
21st Sep 2024 11:25pm
Yeah, that would be torture.
I'm always ducking the sun, it don't like me anymore. But on a day like today, 80 and low humidity, she's looking damn fine..
Thx LDF
I'm always ducking the sun, it don't like me anymore. But on a day like today, 80 and low humidity, she's looking damn fine..
Thx LDF
21st Sep 2024 11:31pm
not a hot house flower I start complai g about heat above 18 degrees maybe if gets gets hotter because climate change Nessie be out su bathing for the tourists
21st Sep 2024 11:37pm
So many mixed emotions.
We do the best we can
There’s always ice cream though to cool us down …
We do the best we can
There’s always ice cream though to cool us down …
22nd Sep 2024 00:06am
I like all the realism in this. Few things in life are all good, but that doesn't mean they're not good. And yeah, pumpkin spice, waiting in the wings. I've read that pumpkin spice is the universal favorite scent for men. I had a male friend disagree. He said brisket is better.
22nd Sep 2024 00:13am
Hmm
I don't see it as a male scent. Not sure about brisket either but as a Jew that's truly hysterical humor. Has to be first cut brisket too..
I've got nothing against pumpkin especially prone to pumpkin pie. But pumpkin beer is truly offensive as pumpkin lattes more than once a month not to mention the 10,000 calories yo...
Thx Pink Latte 💗
I don't see it as a male scent. Not sure about brisket either but as a Jew that's truly hysterical humor. Has to be first cut brisket too..
I've got nothing against pumpkin especially prone to pumpkin pie. But pumpkin beer is truly offensive as pumpkin lattes more than once a month not to mention the 10,000 calories yo...
Thx Pink Latte 💗
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22nd Sep 2024 00:28am
I love that song.
Don Henly is summer and a lot of other stuff.
I liked his solo stuff a lot.
I know you're in the south but where again?
Don Henly is summer and a lot of other stuff.
I liked his solo stuff a lot.
I know you're in the south but where again?
22nd Sep 2024 00:51am
You must be on the same latitude as me then, PS, cos I too am facing Autumn tomorrow. However... we are still on BST (British Summer Time) here in the UK until the end of October & I made a new rule about Summer recently... that it's never truly over until the clocks go back an hour then... to GMT. 🌞
22nd Sep 2024 1:30am
That's a good call Billy. It's usually nice here in autumn but November on is a bear ...
I may go south for part of the winter.
Enough being a trooper...
Thx for checking in ..
I may go south for part of the winter.
Enough being a trooper...
Thx for checking in ..
22nd Sep 2024 4:11am
Nicely Done 👍✅👍 yet it shall return
as always as we remember that moment we had only been not forgotten 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬🙏📿🪷💪✍️🤗
as always as we remember that moment we had only been not forgotten 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬🙏📿🪷💪✍️🤗
22nd Sep 2024 4:29am
Personally I think Spring is the best month.
Coming out of winter, renewal and all.
Bonus is Summer next ....
Coming out of winter, renewal and all.
Bonus is Summer next ....
22nd Sep 2024 11:11am
Yeah I like the spring it's like opening up the flowers yet waiting up to bloom 👍🤗📿
22nd Sep 2024 12:37pm
22nd Sep 2024 2:14pm
Words so true influence of thoughts and insight and imagination from a positive view 🪟 💯💪
22nd Sep 2024 4:19am
To be honest dude, we have never had this drink. Honestly we only drink with who we're with and we have to stick with the same drink, no switching crap up. This weather that falls between summer and winter is perfect to us. We wish that we could find this temp year round, freaking perfect. Tight write dude
22nd Sep 2024 4:31am
People say Delaware is the place to be for temperate weather. Don't know but its what I hear ..
Thx ME
Thx ME
22nd Sep 2024 8:54am
As an autumn (and winter) girl I can't wait for summer to be over.
...Though that margarita is flirting with me ;-)
BIG HUGE LIKE.
...Though that margarita is flirting with me ;-)
BIG HUGE LIKE.
22nd Sep 2024 12:41pm
Yeah
Feel the same way.
I wear a lot of black and dark Grey so fall/winter is the time for that exquisite combo or just all black. But I wear a black t-shirt in summer almost everyday but sometimes it's a real test in 90 plus and high humidity. Every so often I'll wear a bright cobalt blue t shirt and I'll announce to my wife. " Look,I'm wearing a color " ...
Feel the same way.
I wear a lot of black and dark Grey so fall/winter is the time for that exquisite combo or just all black. But I wear a black t-shirt in summer almost everyday but sometimes it's a real test in 90 plus and high humidity. Every so often I'll wear a bright cobalt blue t shirt and I'll announce to my wife. " Look,I'm wearing a color " ...
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2024 12:14pm
I dig autumn weather. I don’t even mind winter. Summer and I don’t mix so well, Irish skin and all, so I’m perfectly fine with waving her goodbye.
Bring on pumpkin spice, cozy sweaters and blankets, snow that makes me stay indoors…
This is an excellent farewell poem though, in that unmistakable PS style.
Bring on pumpkin spice, cozy sweaters and blankets, snow that makes me stay indoors…
This is an excellent farewell poem though, in that unmistakable PS style.
22nd Sep 2024 12:45pm
I think I'm part Irish, though I'm told my ancestors were from Romania and Ukraine.
I do love high end Irish Whiskey so that must figure in somewhere.
Reminds me, I gotta buy a bottle for upcoming cold months...
I do love high end Irish Whiskey so that must figure in somewhere.
Reminds me, I gotta buy a bottle for upcoming cold months...
22nd Sep 2024 3:46pm
"Damn pumpkin everything" had me laughing out loud. I get that there's this whole pumpkin spice obsession movement but I'm not a card holding member myself. I have one slice of mom's homemade pumpkin in November & that's it. Gonna miss the sunshine...until next summer.
22nd Sep 2024 4:40pm
The pumpkin advertising starts late in summer long before you'd consider that latte. Advertising knows it's a gold mine and they want you thinking pumpkin and cooler weather when it's still 95 and humid as fuck..
23rd Sep 2024 3:04am
Dear PS,
It’ll be nice not to have frizzy hair every single day. I totally dig this write though. Nailed the vibe and brought olfactory sensations to life. 🎃
H🌷
It’ll be nice not to have frizzy hair every single day. I totally dig this write though. Nailed the vibe and brought olfactory sensations to life. 🎃
H🌷
23rd Sep 2024 3:13am
Dear H,
See today was beautiful but already windy.
Nice during the day. Light jacket at night.
Weather speak, I call it the death of hope but we all can't help ourselves...
Universal !!
🤣
See today was beautiful but already windy.
Nice during the day. Light jacket at night.
Weather speak, I call it the death of hope but we all can't help ourselves...
Universal !!
🤣
25th Sep 2024 3:19am
A very lovely farewell! Autumn is my favourite for the beauty and melancholy. If you like spring you clearly don't live where I do!
I was the pumpkin pie baker in my family since about age 10 & always took great pride in it. So I took it as a personal insult when everything started having pumpkin spice in it! 🤣 I'm over it now... my pie still beats the heck out of all the other variants.
❤️k
I was the pumpkin pie baker in my family since about age 10 & always took great pride in it. So I took it as a personal insult when everything started having pumpkin spice in it! 🤣 I'm over it now... my pie still beats the heck out of all the other variants.
❤️k
25th Sep 2024 3:37am
28th Sep 2024 2:32am
Summer is gone but fall is bringing the woman to the stores. Keep on writing.
28th Sep 2024 2:34am
10th Oct 2024 9:10pm
There is something special at the end of the season, when we know cooler days are coming and the hot days are done. I liked this, I liked the bit of nostalgia, looking forward to come what comes next.
Well done Poet.
Well done Poet.
10th Oct 2024 9:19pm
It's a cool little restaurant on York Avenue.
Picnic tables, $2 tacos on Tuesday and powerful Margaritas...
Still doable as the season changes ...
Thx for your great comment Wally
Picnic tables, $2 tacos on Tuesday and powerful Margaritas...
Still doable as the season changes ...
Thx for your great comment Wally
