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Don't Linger On
your ego swells in mirrors
deep within you bask in your pride
your self love are like shadows
a selfishness you cannot hide
your charm is like an after shave
all stuck in you on you and around
you look so gallant and brave
you smile with an air of elegance
you think everything is about you
the sad songs from the radio
the clouds of white on blue
the poem about love so true
sometimes you pass by
giving me that tiny smile
as if its a favour bestowed
a smile for one as I
I smile back, but its not for you
its at you, so sad and unwelcomed
to grace any porch for a cup or two
you're a lonely Karen looking smug
thinking we are all pining for you
we are avoiding you like the flu
deep within you bask in your pride
your self love are like shadows
a selfishness you cannot hide
your charm is like an after shave
all stuck in you on you and around
you look so gallant and brave
you smile with an air of elegance
you think everything is about you
the sad songs from the radio
the clouds of white on blue
the poem about love so true
sometimes you pass by
giving me that tiny smile
as if its a favour bestowed
a smile for one as I
I smile back, but its not for you
its at you, so sad and unwelcomed
to grace any porch for a cup or two
you're a lonely Karen looking smug
thinking we are all pining for you
we are avoiding you like the flu
Author's Note
For that special Karen
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Re. Don't Linger On
12th Aug 2024 5:37pm
Re. Don't Linger On
Awww, this is sweet. I'm blushing, lol. I love the anger & the way the raw truth comes through here. Excellent! ☺
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13th Aug 2024 2:07pm
Hi there Billy, wishing you well. I was actually peeved at a person who thinks I am enamoured with him. I could spit and fart in his general direction:))
I was just letting off steam with that poem:) thanks for dropping by, stay safe.
I was just letting off steam with that poem:) thanks for dropping by, stay safe.
Re. Don't Linger On
14th Aug 2024 2:37am
Great write. Really dig this a lot. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. Don't Linger On
14th Aug 2024 2:42am
Re. Don't Linger On
14th Aug 2024 2:57pm
LOL! I love that you referred to him as a "Karen"! Yes! Men can be a Karen as well!
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Re: Re. Don't Linger On
14th Aug 2024 3:16pm
Hi Ahavati thank you for dropping by and reading. That Karen is another person who is like a dovetail to the man...😁
Re: Re. Don't Linger On
14th Aug 2024 5:43pm
LOL!
I meant to say that the first line reminded of Carly Simon's song: "You're so Vain"!
You walked into the party like you were walking onto a yacht
Your hat strategically dipped below one eye
Your scarf it was apricot
You had one eye in the mirror, as you watched yourself gavotte
And all the girls dreamed that they'd be your partner
They'd be your partner and
You're so vain
You probably think this song is about you. . .
I meant to say that the first line reminded of Carly Simon's song: "You're so Vain"!
You walked into the party like you were walking onto a yacht
Your hat strategically dipped below one eye
Your scarf it was apricot
You had one eye in the mirror, as you watched yourself gavotte
And all the girls dreamed that they'd be your partner
They'd be your partner and
You're so vain
You probably think this song is about you. . .
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Re: Re. Don't Linger On
15th Aug 2024 1:06pm
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Re. Don't Linger On
8th Sep 2024 5:17pm
"you think everything is about you"
I think many of us here know one or two (or several).
Yes, I avoid like the flu too.
Nice work Grace.
I think many of us here know one or two (or several).
Yes, I avoid like the flu too.
Nice work Grace.
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Re: Re. Don't Linger On
9th Sep 2024 1:43am