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As tides rise
you backlit
our balcony
so people walking
on the beach
could see
the way my tits
pressed against
the sliding glass
and the way my pussy
left a perfect imprint
as if it had exhaled
hot breath
on a mirror
your need
laps the
back of my neck
as you ride me
hard enough
to challenge
the waves
and my wicked eyes
make ocean eye contact
as you drown
me from within
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Re. As tides rise
11th Aug 2024 7:33am
As tides rise both of sea and sexual passion. You gave the beach goers quite a view there,
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Thanks. I think I’m going to pull it and revise it. I had more of a negative ions thing going in my head and it turned into boob prints on glass
But I’m glad it made you smile
But I’m glad it made you smile
Re. As tides rise
11th Aug 2024 2:45pm
Re: Re. As tides rise
11th Aug 2024 2:48pm
That’s because you’re a perv. I mean that with love
Get a room with a view next to ours and you can take your own pics.
Fuck!
Get a room with a view next to ours and you can take your own pics.
Fuck!
Re: Re. As tides rise
11th Aug 2024 3:14pm
Used your name in vain ....
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/519529-was-tempted-to-put-whip-cream-on-my/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/519529-was-tempted-to-put-whip-cream-on-my/
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Re: Re. As tides rise
11th Aug 2024 8:32pm
Re. As tides rise
11th Aug 2024 9:24pm
my wicked eyes
make ocean eye contact
as you drown
me from within
Tears of release from holding back.
There is a quality of a non-avoidance of pain that vacilates between pleasure and pleasuring, a point of compersion, an empathy, yet, there is this X. Or XX.
It's an interdependence that you enjoy because....it feels good to really be wanted. That romantic side of you really charges things up, which is good. Following some of the heart stopping scenes you drag us through one mountain top experience after another. This is not When Harry Met Sally. This is the Arbian Alamo.
So, the intimacy that you include to give the sensation of resonating with your....expression, is downright inviting. I'm living vicariously, so live it up. Emotional freedom and casting off your defenses and escaping vulnerability, endangering the heart, exposing the soul, and turning your button into a joystick of the imagination allows a sense of ....well, resonation!
make ocean eye contact
as you drown
me from within
Tears of release from holding back.
There is a quality of a non-avoidance of pain that vacilates between pleasure and pleasuring, a point of compersion, an empathy, yet, there is this X. Or XX.
It's an interdependence that you enjoy because....it feels good to really be wanted. That romantic side of you really charges things up, which is good. Following some of the heart stopping scenes you drag us through one mountain top experience after another. This is not When Harry Met Sally. This is the Arbian Alamo.
So, the intimacy that you include to give the sensation of resonating with your....expression, is downright inviting. I'm living vicariously, so live it up. Emotional freedom and casting off your defenses and escaping vulnerability, endangering the heart, exposing the soul, and turning your button into a joystick of the imagination allows a sense of ....well, resonation!
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Re: Re. As tides rise
11th Aug 2024 9:29pm
YOU FUCKING SAW THAT!?
"Tears of release from holding back."
The actual thrill when nuance is recognized is sublime. I appreciate your brain, my dear friend. Your ability to extrapolate nuance is unparallel.
"There is a quality of a non-avoidance of pain that vacilates between pleasure and pleasuring, a point of compersion, an empathy, yet, there is this X. Or XX."
Yes.
Thank you. The rest was so heartwarming, so touching, and so filled with understanding that I'm really overwhelmed. Thank you.
"Tears of release from holding back."
The actual thrill when nuance is recognized is sublime. I appreciate your brain, my dear friend. Your ability to extrapolate nuance is unparallel.
"There is a quality of a non-avoidance of pain that vacilates between pleasure and pleasuring, a point of compersion, an empathy, yet, there is this X. Or XX."
Yes.
Thank you. The rest was so heartwarming, so touching, and so filled with understanding that I'm really overwhelmed. Thank you.
Re. As tides rise
11th Aug 2024 9:42pm
you're so damned sexy lady who wouldn't want to show you off your sexual excursions are intense...you make me blush with the images you conjure its a turn on and I don't really go for a woman women are very territorial and mean about ruling the room with command of their looks and their handle on socializing... you rock and affect me different you rule the room no doubt but Im content to be on the sidelines cheering you on...
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Re: Re. As tides rise
11th Aug 2024 10:37pm
Re. As tides rise
12th Aug 2024 00:32am
Ok maybe my mind runs away with me. I see possession. Wanting people to see he has taken but you have claimed him back.
"as you ride me
hard enough
to challenge
the waves"
The use of turbulent water to show the power of your conviction was well received. Also showing using the depth of the ocean (which I might add is still not discovered) to show what is between you. Nice read. Fia xoxo
"as you ride me
hard enough
to challenge
the waves"
The use of turbulent water to show the power of your conviction was well received. Also showing using the depth of the ocean (which I might add is still not discovered) to show what is between you. Nice read. Fia xoxo
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Re: Re. As tides rise
12th Aug 2024 00:54am
Re. As tides rise
12th Aug 2024 2:49am
Re. As tides rise
12th Aug 2024 5:21am
Watch out for sand in the various cracks though.
Unless you into that sort of thing
Unless you into that sort of thing
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Re: Re. As tides rise
12th Aug 2024 12:44pm
Re. As tides rise
14th Aug 2024 3:30am
(All I want for Christmas is a box full of RLs to give out like goddamn candy. Sigh)
But, in lieu of that, I can dote on your write with accolading sprinkles!
You really do bring a hell of an insight to your lusty writes. It makes it relatable, personable, yet also like we shouldn't stare, but we do. Good writers use all of their abilities, and you definitely do.
You kick ass.
But, in lieu of that, I can dote on your write with accolading sprinkles!
You really do bring a hell of an insight to your lusty writes. It makes it relatable, personable, yet also like we shouldn't stare, but we do. Good writers use all of their abilities, and you definitely do.
You kick ass.
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Re: Re. As tides rise
15th Aug 2024 2:46am
Thank you bro, I appreciate you. Man all those compliments are going to go to my head.
You kick ass too!
You kick ass too!
Re. As tides rise
15th Aug 2024 3:18am
OMG!!
Did you just invent a new way to identify females with pussy prints!!
I can totally see this in CSI Miami starring Betty who replaced Horatio!
You totally did cause you kick serious ass!
You do erotica like no one else my lovely kick ass friend:)
I'm digging the laps behind the neck!!
Did you just invent a new way to identify females with pussy prints!!
I can totally see this in CSI Miami starring Betty who replaced Horatio!
You totally did cause you kick serious ass!
You do erotica like no one else my lovely kick ass friend:)
I'm digging the laps behind the neck!!
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Re: Re. As tides rise
15th Aug 2024 3:45am
LOL! PSI... Pussy Scene Investigation! AHAHAHAHAH! Each set of vag lips is like a fingerprint sworl! I LOVE THAT SO MUCH!
Thank you dear Adelphina. I appreciate you!
Thank you dear Adelphina. I appreciate you!
Re. As tides rise
15th Aug 2024 11:57pm
Dear B,
I’m not smart like runningturtle87 but have I got a story for you…once in a lifetime situation for me…but dang!
This was a sizzler of grand proportion. You can passion like no other. Each time is always more hot than the previous. 🚿🔥
H🌷
I’m not smart like runningturtle87 but have I got a story for you…once in a lifetime situation for me…but dang!
This was a sizzler of grand proportion. You can passion like no other. Each time is always more hot than the previous. 🚿🔥
H🌷
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Re: Re. As tides rise
17th Aug 2024 2:39am
Hon, nobody I’ve ever met is smart like runningturtle. He’s next level.
But you… girl tell me! You have stttoooriiies and I wanna know all the things!
Ah, I do love grand passion, and the heights keep pushing higher. Thank you my dear friend
But you… girl tell me! You have stttoooriiies and I wanna know all the things!
Ah, I do love grand passion, and the heights keep pushing higher. Thank you my dear friend
Re. As tides rise
7th Sep 2024 4:34pm
Re. As tides rise
7th Sep 2024 10:14pm
Hello Betty, how are you; man, great description of intimacy, want an desires... was addicted to readin this... an yes, the perve in me would have made me stop and watch the hot show if was walkin down the sidewalk that day... perhaps takin notes, por que I am kinky like that... Take good care: wolf
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Re: Re. As tides rise
7th Sep 2024 10:57pm
Thanks DW. I’m glad you enjoyed the show, man. Glad you understood the intimacy.
Re. As tides rise
9th Sep 2024 2:33am
You're such a naughty naughty Little Betty, this is so freaking steamy. To tight
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