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Draw me
You wanted fire
to burn your insides.
Something to inspire...
You to express yourself
Draw me
on the subway wall.
I can be your next stop
Where you get off.
Draw me
The attraction is visible.
I am naked
in curvy sensual lines
And also weave in
some wavy golden strands
with dark shadows cast
along the body and soul
Trace the edges.
Press hard against me,
Baring down
bold and defining
Drawing you inside me
touching, kissing, more
And then you will understand
how much you need me!
to burn your insides.
Something to inspire...
You to express yourself
Draw me
on the subway wall.
I can be your next stop
Where you get off.
Draw me
The attraction is visible.
I am naked
in curvy sensual lines
And also weave in
some wavy golden strands
with dark shadows cast
along the body and soul
Trace the edges.
Press hard against me,
Baring down
bold and defining
Drawing you inside me
touching, kissing, more
And then you will understand
how much you need me!
Author's Note
Wow, it feels like it's been forever... Time is going faster and faster the more I have to do. But I miss you guys so I wanted to say Hi! ;) X
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The intensity of this piece was well worded. Love it and the pic. Fia xoxo
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5th Aug 2024 1:27am
Hey Fia! Yes I knew you would get it. :) I am so happy you love it and the drawing in the picture definitely matched what I was thinking of in regards to the writing. So happy to see you and damn you look so hot. ;) xoxo I really hope I get around to reading some things soon too.
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5th Aug 2024 1:27am
Scooby!
It's about time!
I'm sure there are minions of men and women "drawn" to you. You gotta write something sometimes to feed your masses!
It's good to see you posting something. And its very clever and done so well.
Stay creative!
It's about time!
I'm sure there are minions of men and women "drawn" to you. You gotta write something sometimes to feed your masses!
It's good to see you posting something. And its very clever and done so well.
Stay creative!
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5th Aug 2024 1:31am
Haha! Oh yes, being called Scooby! I love that so much. lol Look at you and your puns. Well I don't want to disappoint the minions of men and women so I have to put something out there. :p And you know how much I love hearing from you Styx so I really appreciate you stopping by to say hello! If you think it's clever and creative then maybe I did something write. ;) xoxo
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5th Aug 2024 1:33am
"..did something write". Check you out, going all double meaning punningly. Lol
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5th Aug 2024 11:51am
Well just following after you my dear Styx. You are always quite the wordsmith.
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5th Aug 2024 1:49am
Quite the dare to throw at a man in need of a muse. I'm afraid, like Pygmalion, my quest would be to bring art to life and live your poem. 🔥
Which is to say, "Brava!" My friend 🌼
(sadly, I'm temporarily out of RL's)
Which is to say, "Brava!" My friend 🌼
(sadly, I'm temporarily out of RL's)
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5th Aug 2024 1:59am
But it's always so fun to dare a man because he just can't help himself but take the dare right? :p Look at you and your knowledge of mythology. Color me impressed. If anyone could bring art to life it would be you AJ but to live in my poem or my head for that matter, now what would be a truly crazy time. You might go insane but it would be one hell of a ride.
Brava! I love that. ;) xoxo
(Aw, I love knowing you were thinking about it though, that's awesome)
Brava! I love that. ;) xoxo
(Aw, I love knowing you were thinking about it though, that's awesome)
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5th Aug 2024 2:12am
As long as it isn't Vincent Van Gogh crazy, I'm in (just kinda fond of my ears is all) :D
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5th Aug 2024 11:24am
Yeah I do like ears too, especially licking them and making everything tingle. ;)
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5th Aug 2024 1:54am
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely beautiful!! Nice 👌 work I enjoy your musing queen 👸 appreciate 🙏 you!+
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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5th Aug 2024 11:27am
Hey Richy... You are so skilled with those emojis, always bringing out the message. I love that you found it beautiful and there is just something about being called queen that definitely makes me feel appreciated. :) xoxo I will try to keep on writing for you. And peace and blessings back at ya... great to see you!
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5th Aug 2024 2:03am
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5th Aug 2024 11:29am
Hey Pink, it's great to see you and so happy you liked it. What could be better than sensual and erotic, that's what keeps us going right? ;) xoxo
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An artist needs inspiration.,
Call it what you want, muse or otherwise.
You haven’t been around in light years but you came back blazing.
Hot formatting and dazzling expenditures of lust.
One can’t help but to trace your lines and jump into your fantasies.
The writing is on the walls.
Next stop … dance and romance.
I’m jumping the turnstiles to see what comes next ..
BIG LIKE
Do you remember those ?
RL Award too !!
Call it what you want, muse or otherwise.
You haven’t been around in light years but you came back blazing.
Hot formatting and dazzling expenditures of lust.
One can’t help but to trace your lines and jump into your fantasies.
The writing is on the walls.
Next stop … dance and romance.
I’m jumping the turnstiles to see what comes next ..
BIG LIKE
Do you remember those ?
RL Award too !!
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5th Aug 2024 11:35am
Oh yes, an artist definitely needs inspiration because it infuses the art with soul and feeling doesn't it? But I think for men, the inspiration of a woman will always be strongest above anything else. Light years? geez, has it been that long? lol Well I like blazing. My typical impatient formatting but somehow it works I think. :p I love it when someone traces my lines lightly driving me crazy, and jumps into my fantasies as scary as they can be. lol Dirty dancing and hot sex perhaps. Jumping the turnstiles brings back memories.
I do remember those, I love them... and RL damn! thank you. xoxo
I do remember those, I love them... and RL damn! thank you. xoxo
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5th Aug 2024 3:02am
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5th Aug 2024 11:48am
Hey Betty! I really appreciate your read and comment so much. That you felt it was perfect in sensuality and execution has me really stoked. (Yeah my Mom used that word a lot). :p Thanks again for the wonderful comment. xoxo
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5th Aug 2024 3:22am
Kinda makes me wish I could draw... my stick figures would not do you justice!
It's lovely to see you again... I understand about being busy! Haven't been around here much myself.
❤️k
It's lovely to see you again... I understand about being busy! Haven't been around here much myself.
❤️k
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5th Aug 2024 11:50am
Ah, I would be curious to see how you would draw me BT. ;) But hey stick figures are cool... remember doing those as a kid. lol It's lovely to see you too BT and I hope the year is treating you awesome. I can't believe it's friggin August already. But anyway, hope to see you around more! And all the best always. xoxo
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5th Aug 2024 9:53am
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5th Aug 2024 11:53am
Haha, hell yeah you do damnit. I hope you are doing great DC. Well, how are you doing? :p This year has gone by crazy fast and work is trying to kill me but it's an interesting way to die. lol I love the double awesomes, the more the better. It's so great to see you DC and sorry I haven't been around. :( xoxo
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6th Aug 2024 9:53am
I'm doing well. My job is going great. I been managing and training new workers on this new machine we got. Well not really new, we had it for 7 months, but they only recently signed off on it for I could start training people on it. A lot of boring work stuff Yeah, I'm in a better place in life then before. Unfortunately lost a few loved ones, but I'm trying to be grateful for life's gifts.
Try not to kill yourself with work hehe. Try to find time for the important things.
And you are double awesome haha.
Try not to kill yourself with work hehe. Try to find time for the important things.
And you are double awesome haha.
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6th Aug 2024 9:14pm
So happy to hear the job is going so well. That's exciting. My job has been trying to kill me but it's definitely exciting. lol So happy to hear you are in a better place, that's what I hoped you would say. Losing loved ones is definitely hard as I know all to well also. I am sorry to hear that but like you said it's important to be grateful for life's gifts and I suppose that reminds us even more.
Haha, yeah... Finding balance at the moment is not easy and it's causing problems outside of work. :( But I am trying...
Hell yeah!!! ;) xoxo
Haha, yeah... Finding balance at the moment is not easy and it's causing problems outside of work. :( But I am trying...
Hell yeah!!! ;) xoxo
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5th Aug 2024 12:30pm
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5th Aug 2024 1:29pm
Hey Ron, it's always great to see you and I really appreciate you reading and of course the awesome compliment. I hope you are doing good this year, I tell you it has been a crazy fast year... Much love and light back ya. xoxo
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6th Aug 2024 12:42pm
Hey adagio, absolutely, have to keep it hot for things to remain exciting. I have seen flowing lava and it's definitely very hot. I love the huge plume it creates as it flows into the sea ultimately creating more land. I am really glad you could feel the heat. Thanks for stopping by to share your thoughts. xoxo
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6th Aug 2024 9:43pm
The love you give has me want more of you. You deserve to be given love all over your sexy naked body. Keep on writing
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6th Aug 2024 9:56pm
Hey Francisco, I have so much love to give! ;) And a ton of passion too. So I need to be given love all over my body and mind because I can't get enough... I will try not to be such a stranger and keep writing. As always I love the encouragement and thanks so much for sharing your thoughts with me. xoxo
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7th Aug 2024 10:29pm
Hahaha, you and trains it's as if you're forever in pursuit of the darkened unknown, hahaha what's around the next bend. Could that be I IS ME with a paint can spraying graffiti on someone's soul. Tight piece here Lady
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8th Aug 2024 00:51am
I had some interesting experiences on trains in the UK and Europe. ;) And I am definitely always in pursuit of the darkened unknown, I love going off the beaten path into the weirdest places now knowing if I will make it out alive. No doubt you are always spraying graffiti on someone's soul and that's what I love about you. That and being a tight piece for you. :p
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10th Aug 2024 2:02am
Hell yeah! damnit Trome you know how to get me all excited now don't you? ;p That's not fair but I love it. And everyone knows how fiery and passionate latin kisses are. I will be looking forward for what's to come. ;)
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11th Aug 2024 2:03am
You are a clever clever young lady. Brilliant interweaving of art and seduction. The nuances that have double meaning, yet the reader gets it.
You as the subject, evaporates any artistic block. Be advised, I use finger paint. : )
Like in many of your works, the authority figures (the artist in this case) find themselves addicted, and not really in control. You may need to be registered as a “Controlled Substance”, Ms. KX.
You as the subject, evaporates any artistic block. Be advised, I use finger paint. : )
Like in many of your works, the authority figures (the artist in this case) find themselves addicted, and not really in control. You may need to be registered as a “Controlled Substance”, Ms. KX.
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12th Aug 2024 4:39pm
Ah yes! I do like being clever. And art and seduction make perfect bedfellows. Everything I write has more than one meaning so I am glad you get it. ;)
Got to get rid of those artistic blocks. And a good set of fingers is worth it's weight in gold, well more so but that's the saying right? If you can play that *** like a piano then you will have her eating out of your hand.
I do find that people get addicted and that can be dangerous and challenging. Haha, a controlled substance. Yeah, that makes sense... Addictive and dangerous for sure. ;) I love how intuitive you are DaVinci! I guess they don't say genius for nothing do they?
Got to get rid of those artistic blocks. And a good set of fingers is worth it's weight in gold, well more so but that's the saying right? If you can play that *** like a piano then you will have her eating out of your hand.
I do find that people get addicted and that can be dangerous and challenging. Haha, a controlled substance. Yeah, that makes sense... Addictive and dangerous for sure. ;) I love how intuitive you are DaVinci! I guess they don't say genius for nothing do they?
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13th Aug 2024 12:21pm
For reasons I need not detail here, it would be impossible to draw you. Throughly enjoyed the write!
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13th Aug 2024 3:19pm
Well damnit now I want to know the reasons. :p I hope they are good reasons. Usually you give me at list one song so I was trying to think of one, and I thought of 'Take on me' because the video has drawing in it and such... plus you said it would be impossible to draw me. Love that you enjoyed the write Jazz and it's so good to see you!
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22nd Aug 2024 3:25pm
the picture will never do you justice... but i'll cheat and get the camera out...say "cheese" !
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22nd Aug 2024 8:13pm
Aw that's such a sweet thing to say. :) Ah, the camera... I suppose that can be artistic but damn a good drawing or painting is really art isn't it?
Cheese! (and why do people say Cheese anyway? :p)
Cheese! (and why do people say Cheese anyway? :p)
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23rd Aug 2024 2:27pm
I'm sure photography can be artistic...but always thought of art as drawings/paintings and sculptures.
Try saying "Cheese" without smiling! ;-)
Try saying "Cheese" without smiling! ;-)
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23rd Aug 2024 7:40pm
True, photography can be artistic. I have seen some awesome photos. But drawings, paintings, and sculptures are definitely something different.
Ah, I guess you are right about that! now I get it. I suppose it does lend itself to smiling. :p
Ah, I guess you are right about that! now I get it. I suppose it does lend itself to smiling. :p
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8th Sep 2024 4:42pm
"some wavy golden strands
with dark shadows cast
along the body and soul"
I liked the palpable sensual lines nicely weaved through and through.
Excellent work Kx.
with dark shadows cast
along the body and soul"
I liked the palpable sensual lines nicely weaved through and through.
Excellent work Kx.
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27th Sep 2024 7:14pm
Hey Wally!!! I love that you could feel the sensual lines.. the wavy golden strands that flow among the dark shadows. Perhaps gold is always found in the deepest darkest mines and meant to suffer the elements before being uncovered. I love that you thought it was excellent work. You always make me feel good! ;) Thank you...
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Anonymous
27th Sep 2024 7:10pm
Eya, no comment..well actually of course, well written.
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27th Sep 2024 7:17pm
Well hey Alex!!! if I tickle you do I get a comment? actually well written makes me feel pretty good so I appreciate that a lot. ;) Thank you so much for taking the time to comment!