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Summer Redux Naturally
Summer
Contours of lust
All around us
Deep inside Vixen
Secrets exposed
Her vortex
Revealed
She gives all
She doesn't break easily
But
Don’t toy with her heart
She’ll take you down
And leave you broken
Better to treat her well
She’s the real deal
A beautiful soul
Walk with her hand in hand
She’ll be yours for the asking
Vixen
The essence of desire
Flight and elevation
Vixen
A rare wine to be opened
And to consume…
Contours of lust
All around us
Deep inside Vixen
Secrets exposed
Her vortex
Revealed
She gives all
She doesn't break easily
But
Don’t toy with her heart
She’ll take you down
And leave you broken
Better to treat her well
She’s the real deal
A beautiful soul
Walk with her hand in hand
She’ll be yours for the asking
Vixen
The essence of desire
Flight and elevation
Vixen
A rare wine to be opened
And to consume…
Author's Note
Watercolor painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Summer Redux Naturally
Anonymous
28th Jun 2024 7:19pm
Love the soft pastel colors. "Her vortex revealed" is intriguing. I really like both the painting and the poem.
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28th Jun 2024 7:48pm
BIG THANKS PINK
Wrote this in 2014 and am wondering why I can’t write like this now ? Did I use it all up back then ?
Wrote this in 2014 and am wondering why I can’t write like this now ? Did I use it all up back then ?
Re. Summer Redux Naturally
28th Jun 2024 7:40pm
First we thought of the return of the phoenix, but then we thought of pterodactyls and erupting volcanoes hours before that big ball of fire struck earth. Tight work with the pic and the piece dude
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28th Jun 2024 7:49pm
Dig your comment ME
I think I agree with you one on your take …
I’d like to live inside my paintings for a break from reality …
Thx !!!
I think I agree with you one on your take …
I’d like to live inside my paintings for a break from reality …
Thx !!!
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2024 7:48pm
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28th Jun 2024 7:51pm
BIG THANKS PHILIS
An older poem I brought back to life with a painting addition…
Appreciate
An older poem I brought back to life with a painting addition…
Appreciate
Re. Summer Redux Naturally
28th Jun 2024 8:52pm
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28th Jun 2024 10:41pm
Re. Summer Redux Naturally
28th Jun 2024 10:01pm
Okay, here goes my critique:
So, pardon me for saying this, PS
I was a bit thrown off.
The painting and poem are both awesome.
Your watercolor is ethereal and yes, it’s summer-like; I can see her beautiful soul and imagine you walking hand in hand with her. But as I read your poem I kept glancing up at the painting expecting there to be some red in there. I always equate vixen with the color red.
Just my take, I certainly don’t mean to diminish either piece.
So, pardon me for saying this, PS
I was a bit thrown off.
The painting and poem are both awesome.
Your watercolor is ethereal and yes, it’s summer-like; I can see her beautiful soul and imagine you walking hand in hand with her. But as I read your poem I kept glancing up at the painting expecting there to be some red in there. I always equate vixen with the color red.
Just my take, I certainly don’t mean to diminish either piece.
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That's a fascinating comment Mary and I agree with you on the red for vixen. Red and black as well. I searched my paintings and tried to blend the color's of her personality. They certainly weren't my usual colors.
Actually in the dark she used to like a skimpy fuscia negligee that gave me rise from her ample endowments... Alas though I chose different ground. Stay tuned, I might surprise you another day ..
Thx
Actually in the dark she used to like a skimpy fuscia negligee that gave me rise from her ample endowments... Alas though I chose different ground. Stay tuned, I might surprise you another day ..
Thx
Re. Summer Redux Naturally
28th Jun 2024 10:29pm
You need to market your artwork and sell it--people would definitely buy it!
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28th Jun 2024 10:49pm
I have sold my art over the years but not lately. Making Art is easy and selling it is difficult. Sometimes selling art takes all the fun out of making it. I give it away sometimes as presents. It becomes my currency...
Thanks for your endearing comment ML
Appreciate
Thanks for your endearing comment ML
Appreciate
Re. Summer Redux Naturally
28th Jun 2024 10:42pm
Another First Place Prize work of art and an A+ poem. My General is taking his game to a new level. Bravo! Hugs and love, Oral
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28th Jun 2024 10:51pm
Colonel O
You're gonna make me blush...
You're to kind
Thx so much though
Love your comments ❤
You're gonna make me blush...
You're to kind
Thx so much though
Love your comments ❤
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28th Jun 2024 10:52pm
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Re. Summer Redux Naturally
29th Jun 2024 00:07am
Holy shit! You know, some days you knock my fucking socks off.
This was romantic and sexy and lovely and just all the things. I could feel the heat at the admiration.
Beautiful my friend. Both pieces.
The fuck!
This was romantic and sexy and lovely and just all the things. I could feel the heat at the admiration.
Beautiful my friend. Both pieces.
The fuck!
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29th Jun 2024 1:37am
I'd like to see you wearing nothing but socks then slowly removing them ...
Just saying...
Yeah believe it or not this was written in 2014 in my first year writing poetry. I always need someone to write about and she was the one at the time ...
BIG THANKS BETTY
You don't give it away easy but when you do praise me it means a lot to me !
Thx babe
Just saying...
Yeah believe it or not this was written in 2014 in my first year writing poetry. I always need someone to write about and she was the one at the time ...
BIG THANKS BETTY
You don't give it away easy but when you do praise me it means a lot to me !
Thx babe
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29th Jun 2024 3:48am
Mmm. Someone has a praise kink.
Interesting.
Now what on earth could I do with that?!
(I have to make the sweet moments dirty. Because.)
Interesting.
Now what on earth could I do with that?!
(I have to make the sweet moments dirty. Because.)
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29th Jun 2024 4:10am
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29th Jun 2024 10:24am
See, it's not so bad here ...
Ya just gotta know where to look and which beehive to stay away from ...
Thx A
Ya just gotta know where to look and which beehive to stay away from ...
Thx A
Re. Summer Redux Naturally
29th Jun 2024 12:32pm
Such a soft feel to this, both your poem and your painting.
"Contours of lust" is a beautiful find. Love this one :-)
"Contours of lust" is a beautiful find. Love this one :-)
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Yes, I’m a contour kind of guy ..
Always searching
BIG THANKS on this older entry made new again.
If like to think of it as being timeless ..
Appreciate your comment D
You rule !
Thx
Always searching
BIG THANKS on this older entry made new again.
If like to think of it as being timeless ..
Appreciate your comment D
You rule !
Thx
Re. Summer Redux Naturally
29th Jun 2024 1:31pm
So many of us are vixens or we’d like to think we are. As I read your writing, I pictured myself. I noticed a raven and a semi colon in your painting. The raven to me symbolizes rebirth and the semi colon is a new chapter. Wonderful piece! 💜💜
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Re. Summer Redux Naturally
29th Jun 2024 2:00pm
What a beautiful comment !!
I’m always so interested in what people see in my paintings. I write about rebirth often and new starts are part and parcel of that journey.
I appreciate your visit and comment.
Thank you !
I’m always so interested in what people see in my paintings. I write about rebirth often and new starts are part and parcel of that journey.
I appreciate your visit and comment.
Thank you !
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29th Jun 2024 9:54pm
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29th Jun 2024 10:46pm
I've got to learn how to write like this again ...
BIG Praise James
Super appreciate your comment
Thx
BIG Praise James
Super appreciate your comment
Thx
Re. Summer Redux Naturally
30th Jun 2024 2:56am
Ah, one of your early writes… you were in love it seems. Very endearing.
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30th Jun 2024 2:58am
Remind me to tell you the story sometime …
I think you’ll get it !!
Thanks NG
Appreciate your visit and comment !
I think you’ll get it !!
Thanks NG
Appreciate your visit and comment !
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9th Jul 2024 1:47am
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Re. Summer Redux Naturally
31st Aug 2024 4:35pm
it's perfect mix of passion and lust, no need for rhyme, all the colors share the warmth...and heat.
BL
BL
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31st Aug 2024 5:12pm
This was one of my first poems on DUP about 11 years ago. It was time to bring her back again ....
Thanks Wally
Thanks Wally