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Collected Passion
These Lips
Your mouth
The romance that thinks
out loud or in hushed tones
Sitting on the veranda
Sipping tea, my arm around you
Picking up your wild mane
Grazing your neck ever so slightly
Romance
Connection
Electricity
Tension moist in the collected air
Your mouth
The romance that thinks
out loud or in hushed tones
Sitting on the veranda
Sipping tea, my arm around you
Picking up your wild mane
Grazing your neck ever so slightly
Romance
Connection
Electricity
Tension moist in the collected air
Author's Note
Lips by Poetspeak
An early Poetspeak entry brought back ...
An early Poetspeak entry brought back ...
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Re. Collected Passion
Let the lips touch hers while you make love to her really hard. Keep on writing.
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30th May 2024 6:18pm
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30th May 2024 6:23pm
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30th May 2024 6:25pm
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30th May 2024 6:32pm
unaware of the other side ... hope you always remain happy in the shade of that aspect...
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I remember the day I wrote it.
And exactly where I was that influenced the write..
It was a hidden park on the top of a cliff where lovers went to escape peering eyes …
And exactly where I was that influenced the write..
It was a hidden park on the top of a cliff where lovers went to escape peering eyes …
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30th May 2024 7:08pm
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30th May 2024 8:41pm
Yes, I love when the poems write themselves based on a moment .. Happens often
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30th May 2024 7:04pm
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30th May 2024 8:25pm
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30th May 2024 7:29pm
Totally like this one dude, like with your art you're showing that you have range in poetry and it's to tight
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30th May 2024 8:27pm
I think I was more sensitive back in my earlier writing.
Trying to return to that mindset
Thx ME
Appreciate you
Trying to return to that mindset
Thx ME
Appreciate you
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30th May 2024 7:58pm
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30th May 2024 8:28pm
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30th May 2024 8:31pm
YES, the pull of desirable lips. Great write as usual, my General. Hugs and love. Oral
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30th May 2024 8:43pm
Nothing better than lips on lips. The most intimate of acts …
Good call Colonel !
Thx
Good call Colonel !
Thx
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30th May 2024 8:58pm
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Re. Collected Passion
31st May 2024 00:57am
This feels good to read.
Soothing and sensual.
We just booked a cruise, and I got a room with a veranda.
When I read that word (veranda) it gave me a wonderful picture of Mark and Me:)
I might crop the pic and put Mark's lips up there! hahaha
Soothing and sensual.
We just booked a cruise, and I got a room with a veranda.
When I read that word (veranda) it gave me a wonderful picture of Mark and Me:)
I might crop the pic and put Mark's lips up there! hahaha
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31st May 2024 3:30am
Poetspeak knows how to get the women swooning...
Do you think Mark will go for that ploy ??
I guess it's one way for me to get on that Love Boat !!
Bon Voyage Hot Sauce 🔥
Glad you liked my entry Adel !!
Thx
Do you think Mark will go for that ploy ??
I guess it's one way for me to get on that Love Boat !!
Bon Voyage Hot Sauce 🔥
Glad you liked my entry Adel !!
Thx
Re. Collected Passion
31st May 2024 1:35am
A kissing poem
And then you added romance?
And that wild mane?
I had to pick myself up from the floor from that swoon. There’s nothing better then when a man lifts all this hair to kiss my neck or shoulders or back…
Sorry. Had to pick myself up off the floor again.
And then you added romance?
And that wild mane?
I had to pick myself up from the floor from that swoon. There’s nothing better then when a man lifts all this hair to kiss my neck or shoulders or back…
Sorry. Had to pick myself up off the floor again.
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31st May 2024 3:34am
These lips are why women love me.
Fat, juicy and ready to lay them on a tender neck. Under the elms Vampire action without the bite, just a gentle graze ...
BIG THANKS MARY
Watch your step, it's slippery when wet out there on the veranda ...
Fat, juicy and ready to lay them on a tender neck. Under the elms Vampire action without the bite, just a gentle graze ...
BIG THANKS MARY
Watch your step, it's slippery when wet out there on the veranda ...
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31st May 2024 2:45am
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31st May 2024 3:35am
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31st May 2024 6:28am
What a sensual piece, it's nice to see this side of you :-)
"Grazing your neck ever so slightly" > perfect way to seduce a woman!
Great write, PoetSpeak
"Grazing your neck ever so slightly" > perfect way to seduce a woman!
Great write, PoetSpeak
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31st May 2024 12:26pm
Nothing like a wild mane to tame this rogue romantic at heart …
Appreciate that you liked this entry ..
Maybe I’ll post some more
Thx Duende !!
Appreciate that you liked this entry ..
Maybe I’ll post some more
Thx Duende !!
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Anonymous
31st May 2024 9:14am
Speak
This some Casanova vibes. You always spreading that wisdom. Dig it!
This some Casanova vibes. You always spreading that wisdom. Dig it!
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Re: Re. Collected Passion
31st May 2024 12:27pm
Hey Dave
Thanks for checking in on me.
Good to see you back.
Are you going to stay awhile ?
BIG THANKS
Thanks for checking in on me.
Good to see you back.
Are you going to stay awhile ?
BIG THANKS
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Anonymous
1st Jun 2024 6:26am
Speak
I might hang around a little
We'll see how it goes.
I might hang around a little
We'll see how it goes.
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1st Jun 2024 10:39am
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9th Aug 2024 4:22pm
That second stanza shows how meaningful it can be to us. It's like foreplay, or afterglow, we know we got it good and want some more.
BL
BL
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Re. Collected Passion
9th Aug 2024 5:09pm
I remember that very moment of that mane.
I refer back to it often in my mind..
Thanks Wally
I refer back to it often in my mind..
Thanks Wally