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Unusual Success
Foreplay with no friends
Premature until the end
Succumbed to The Bends
Focus, there’s no lens
Kids should never make amends
Left click now and send
Thank you, I ‘am
Premature until the end
Succumbed to The Bends
Focus, there’s no lens
Kids should never make amends
Left click now and send
Thank you, I ‘am
Published 2nd May 2024
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2nd May 2024 11:11am
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2nd May 2024 12:04pm
Most success is unusual until we rewire the circuitry then its on!
Cool poem with the rhyme and rhythm.
Cool poem with the rhyme and rhythm.
2nd May 2024 5:03pm
2nd May 2024 12:22pm
2nd May 2024 5:03pm
2nd May 2024 5:48pm
2nd May 2024 6:02pm
That's what I should have said. "Foreplay with no hands", instead of friends.
Thanks Oral. Your wit is well noticed& received. Always!
Thanks Oral. Your wit is well noticed& received. Always!
Anonymous
2nd May 2024 8:52pm
This made me smile and laugh..enjoyed the rythme sequence 🥰❤️💯🫂
2nd May 2024 10:00pm
