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Kiss
I just want a good kiss
Lose my self in the bliss
And abyss
From the nip
Of your lips
Lose my self in the bliss
And abyss
From the nip
Of your lips
Published 13th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Another short and sweet one x
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13th Apr 2024 2:39am
Just a kiss?!? You should aim for more than just a kiss … but I loved your poem from the nip to the lips
13th Apr 2024 2:43am
Well y’know me, ofc I’d like a lot more than a kiss 😏 but for now it would do 😂
13th Apr 2024 6:35am
Hoi hoi
If the start is right, the bed (or wherever) is full of possibilities.
A very promising poem.
Love it!
Kind regards, Gus
If the start is right, the bed (or wherever) is full of possibilities.
A very promising poem.
Love it!
Kind regards, Gus
14th Apr 2024 1:51am
To be kissed so passionately you lose yourself is the best. Love it Fia xoxo
