wanted to smell pleasure

A dramatic putting of the ever frantic moments before imminent ejaculation - "the brook came to play on my chubby thigh"

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Pleasure, pain, scent

BIG

🥰 thank you artist

Thank you marry
Hope your health is good now

(deep nasal inhale)

Yo

Choo, choo train is running
Faster down the track
Locomotive steaming
Forward and then back
Power steam is pulsing
To drive the wheels around
The whistle now is blowing
Release is quickly found

Choo choo train 😬

With a steam piston drive

She was given what she got...!

Peaches and cream scent. I like the brook can be two streams merged together.

Thanks

 Choo Choo while you are enjoying orgasmic bliss over and over again.  Keep on writing.

hmmmm

The imagery was exquisite… loved it

Hey
Thanks you for dropping by n reading me :)

I love the train reference in that it sets the rhythm with pulse pounding anticipation, and the use of some strong anchoring words like pushed, hurting, and shivering really bring it to life as you finish with an imaginative metaphor. I really liked this poem.

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Lovely word play.
"n at the end
the brook
came to play
on my chubby thigh'
Fia xoxo

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The intensity, the build up...bring it home

Ha ha
Thinking about that
Well thank you for dropping by...

your  ink captures the intensity and urgency of a charged, intimate encounter.
your poem is a powerful and unflinching exploration of physical intimacy, capturing the raw, unrestrained nature of desire and passion. your language and imagery creates a truly immersive and visceral reading experience.

Thank you for dropping by. .. Appreciate your visit

An excellent short but stimulating poem. Hugs and love,Oral

Thanks very much...