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on my birthday...
my clitoris started singing a birthday song
his hard cock was staring at me
N the sky lit up with an explosion...
his hard cock was staring at me
N the sky lit up with an explosion...
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Re. on my birthday...
9th Apr 2024 9:44pm
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10th Apr 2024 4:49pm
Thank you marry
Well birthday is on 27th
So I will definitely get what I wanted...:)
Well birthday is on 27th
So I will definitely get what I wanted...:)
Re. on my birthday...
9th Apr 2024 9:50pm
your poem is a bold and unapologetic celebration of female sexuality and sensual pleasure. you use of vivid, evocative language creates a palpable sense of the visceral and the carnal, drawing the reader into an intimate and captivating moment.
you command of language and imagery creates a truly immersive and visceral reading experience, one that lingers in the mind long after the final line is read. happy birthday
you command of language and imagery creates a truly immersive and visceral reading experience, one that lingers in the mind long after the final line is read. happy birthday
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10th Apr 2024 4:49pm
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9th Apr 2024 10:23pm
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10th Apr 2024 4:50pm
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9th Apr 2024 11:15pm
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10th Apr 2024 4:53pm
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9th Apr 2024 11:50pm
Happy Birthday Mis Dimpy. Hope you enjoyed your wild birthday love. Keep on writing.
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10th Apr 2024 4:55pm
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10th Apr 2024 1:44am
Let's finish the bottle and have some more...
Happy Birthday dimp
All good things ...
Happy Birthday dimp
All good things ...
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10th Apr 2024 4:47pm
Hey artist
Of course I have a lot to taste... hope you know that ha ha... Many Thanks you for wishing me, well you know about birthday... ❤
Of course I have a lot to taste... hope you know that ha ha... Many Thanks you for wishing me, well you know about birthday... ❤
Re. on my birthday...
10th Apr 2024 4:47pm
Re. on my birthday...
10th Apr 2024 5:02pm
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10th Apr 2024 5:10pm
Yup
I am naughty by nature, that's why I do mischiefs somewhere or the other... Well thanks for your wish...
I am naughty by nature, that's why I do mischiefs somewhere or the other... Well thanks for your wish...
Re. on my birthday...
11th Apr 2024 2:43am
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11th Apr 2024 5:01am
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11th Apr 2024 9:06am
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11th Apr 2024 9:50am
And happy birthday and I hope your clit isgoing to help you to celebrate it.
:)
Richard
:)
Richard
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Re: Re. on my birthday...
13th Apr 2024 3:10am
Re. on my birthday...
Your poem is loaded with orgasmic promise! Could agree with Moroccan Poet's comment. And what more intimate way to celebrate a birthday than in a hot bath with a hot lover drinking blood-warming wine!
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13th Apr 2024 3:12am
Ya really... I like this way, more than celebrating my birthday in public...well thanks for adding my stuff in your Reading list...
Re. on my birthday...
13th Apr 2024 6:49am
I could not resist RLing it, it is so beautiful both picture and provocative words of the poem.
"I like this way, more than celebrating my birthday in public" - to your words I would reply "You wouldn't want to celebrate your birthday THAT WAY in public!" LOL
"I like this way, more than celebrating my birthday in public" - to your words I would reply "You wouldn't want to celebrate your birthday THAT WAY in public!" LOL
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13th Apr 2024 10:24am