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Memory Lane
It’s taken days
But it really doesn’t matter
I’m addicted
I’d do it all over again
Until my eyeballs fall out of my skull
Until my brain numbs
I read every single one of my favorites
The comments
The responses
Everything
The talent residing there is astounding
Went all the way back to my first RL
And happened to find
The very first poet who commented on my first post
His poem is outstanding
As is he
Over the twenty eight months I’ve been here
He has shared himself
Offered advice
Become a friend
So many friends along the way…
So many people who have lifted me on their shoulders
Given a poetic embrace
Blew an imaginary kiss
Given a gentle kick in the ass
Believe me, I’ve felt all of it
Grateful for those who took the time to get to know me
Hell, I’m even grateful for those that have shunned me
And believe it or not
I’m appreciative of those that took advantage
Every single person has shaped me in one way or another
It hasn’t always been pretty but it’s been right
Exactly the way it’s supposed to be
I found myself here
I found my home
DUP
The place where if you let it
The impossible becomes possible
But it really doesn’t matter
I’m addicted
I’d do it all over again
Until my eyeballs fall out of my skull
Until my brain numbs
I read every single one of my favorites
The comments
The responses
Everything
The talent residing there is astounding
Went all the way back to my first RL
And happened to find
The very first poet who commented on my first post
His poem is outstanding
As is he
Over the twenty eight months I’ve been here
He has shared himself
Offered advice
Become a friend
So many friends along the way…
So many people who have lifted me on their shoulders
Given a poetic embrace
Blew an imaginary kiss
Given a gentle kick in the ass
Believe me, I’ve felt all of it
Grateful for those who took the time to get to know me
Hell, I’m even grateful for those that have shunned me
And believe it or not
I’m appreciative of those that took advantage
Every single person has shaped me in one way or another
It hasn’t always been pretty but it’s been right
Exactly the way it’s supposed to be
I found myself here
I found my home
DUP
The place where if you let it
The impossible becomes possible
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Re. Memory Lane
30th Jan 2024 00:12am
Fantastic write. Love the emotion you brought out talking about DUP. Great job Mary.
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30th Jan 2024 1:47am
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1st Feb 2024 1:53pm
You’re beautiful, my friend. I enjoy all that is you and what you bring to us.
Have a great day💕
Have a great day💕
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1st Feb 2024 1:57pm
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30th Jan 2024 4:03am
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30th Jan 2024 5:18am
My Darling, You selflessly give yourself to us in your poems, read, likes and comments; The pleasure really is all ours!
We applaud you dear poetess! May you ink e(0)verflow~
xo~
We applaud you dear poetess! May you ink e(0)verflow~
xo~
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1st Feb 2024 1:55pm
Re. Memory Lane
30th Jan 2024 6:11am
Lovely emotional hymn of praise to the DUP community. I certainly love you being among us!
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1st Feb 2024 1:55pm
Re. Memory Lane
30th Jan 2024 12:59pm
You've carved your name eternal in the pages & halls of the Underground. This is where you belong
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1st Feb 2024 1:56pm
Re. Memory Lane
30th Jan 2024 2:34pm
This place is Home. I've tried to leave more than once...always find myself drawn back. Good & bad, it's like a dysfunctional family. Totally feel this poem 😊
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31st Jan 2024 2:52am
Very nicely penned! For me personally, I've written lots of new poetry since joining this site & went where I didn't think I could or should go at times, lol. 😊
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1st Feb 2024 1:58pm
Thank you, Billy.
I adore your poetry. The honesty and the way your pen flows…yummy.
Have a super-de-duper day, my friend.
I adore your poetry. The honesty and the way your pen flows…yummy.
Have a super-de-duper day, my friend.
Re. Memory Lane
31st Jan 2024 2:56am
I was going to write a long, big brotherly reply. But, you don't need it.
You've come quite a ways over your DUP time. I noticed.
People will come and go. Some will "like" you and then they won't. Don't try to figure out why. Just stay true to yourself. Be sincere with yourself.
When it's all said and done, it's about furthering our writing. And we end up improving ourselves, through the trials of thoughts that we go through.
In here, we are judged by what we write and what/how we comment. This is true in all writing sites. So, who do you want to be? We better ourselves using our identities and writes in here. It carries over into our real life, over time. Writing definitely made me a better person.
And your write here, seems to show that you are feeling that for yourself.
Keep being you. No one else can. You're original, right?
You've come quite a ways over your DUP time. I noticed.
People will come and go. Some will "like" you and then they won't. Don't try to figure out why. Just stay true to yourself. Be sincere with yourself.
When it's all said and done, it's about furthering our writing. And we end up improving ourselves, through the trials of thoughts that we go through.
In here, we are judged by what we write and what/how we comment. This is true in all writing sites. So, who do you want to be? We better ourselves using our identities and writes in here. It carries over into our real life, over time. Writing definitely made me a better person.
And your write here, seems to show that you are feeling that for yourself.
Keep being you. No one else can. You're original, right?
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1st Feb 2024 2:00pm
Thank you for that, Styxian.
I’m proud of what I produce now. My older poems were necessary, they served their purpose at the time, but they aren’t all what I would call my shining moments.
Have a wonderful day.
I’m proud of what I produce now. My older poems were necessary, they served their purpose at the time, but they aren’t all what I would call my shining moments.
Have a wonderful day.
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31st Jan 2024 11:39am
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