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church fire
I'd walk into a church fire
If it would burn away my sins
I'd let the flames dance on my skin
Until there wasn't any left
If it would burn away my sins
I'd let the flames dance on my skin
Until there wasn't any left
Published 10th Jan 2024
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10th Jan 2024 8:15am
22nd Jan 2024 4:41pm
I've never been to a confession situation lol always wondered what it'd be like
20th Jan 2024 10:14am
The image of fire is easily relatable. Add the church and word play is undeniable with brain imagery.
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