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For the children
beneath
the soul of God
countless
decomposing bones
lay buried
by the weight
of time
little boys
&
little girls
dead & damned
their fragile
hearts
had no hope
in this world
of man
while
in heaven
no one hears
them scream
Harry Rout 2023
Published 8th Dec 2023
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8th Dec 2023 5:43am
hello dearest Harry I hold mankind responsible our government and agencies behind the scenes who just don't care if you are not a financial profit to them you don't matter...my mind will forever be scarred by the atrocities that happen here... very solemn and painful write...
10th Dec 2023 2:03am
8th Dec 2023 7:08am
Dear H,
This poem has such a poignancy it breaks the heart. Makes me wonder the point of life and why there’s so much injustice especially towards children. Wonderful spotlight on the subject. H🌷
This poem has such a poignancy it breaks the heart. Makes me wonder the point of life and why there’s so much injustice especially towards children. Wonderful spotlight on the subject. H🌷
10th Dec 2023 2:04am
9th Dec 2023 11:48am
Cutting words Harry
To ponder the nature of God
Is God good?, is God bad?, is God indifferent? is God like Nietzsche said, “dead”
When buildings fall on the good and bad alike, one must wonder
To ponder the nature of God
Is God good?, is God bad?, is God indifferent? is God like Nietzsche said, “dead”
When buildings fall on the good and bad alike, one must wonder
10th Dec 2023 2:07am
Yes, theodicy means the vindication of God. It is a philosophical attempt to explain the existence of evil in a God-created, good world. Leibniz's Theodicy was the first modern attempt to do so using his Principle of Sufficient Reason, but there have been other attempts to explain evil.
Many thanks MM, I always love your interpretation.
Cheers...Harry
Many thanks MM, I always love your interpretation.
Cheers...Harry
16th Dec 2023 1:23am
Heartbreaking! And unforgiveable. And unbelievable. And yet it's happening. Here and now in the 'postenlightenment' era when allegedly 'our science' and 'our technology' have already solved all 'our problems' and made human life so much better than ever (including the killing of children more efficiently and more brutally than ever).
Very well captured.
Very well captured.
19th Dec 2023 9:03pm
Children have always suffered the
fallout of collateral damage
in any era.
Powerful write indeed
Much respect
Naaj
fallout of collateral damage
in any era.
Powerful write indeed
Much respect
Naaj
23rd Jan 2024 9:00am
Totally awesome Harry...
Deeply impactful, aesthetically
and philosophically...
Deeply impactful, aesthetically
and philosophically...
2nd Feb 2024 5:40pm
Your ink always(usually) makes me stop to take in that which can and does make me emotionally wrought; bruised by the realities of truth and then punctuated by your amazing poetic and poignant way... Unlike any other.
Thank you for shining your poem's spotlight, dear Harry.
I hope you and I will can be here on DUP at the same time... soon.
Miss you.
Happy new year to you
🌹B
Thank you for shining your poem's spotlight, dear Harry.
I hope you and I will can be here on DUP at the same time... soon.
Miss you.
Happy new year to you
🌹B
