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Deceivers
Hit me with your worse
While I’m still going strong
Hit me with a love that’s a curse
When life just can’t go wrong
I’ll be there before you can text
Although my phone is never on
Telepathy is how I connect
These feelings are just that strong
And I, I will do, I will do
Everything to and for you
I will wrestle with death
Until he has nothing but good health
Drain you of ego and fill you with myself
Although I’m a thousand miles away, you’ll swear I never left
Destiny says it’s you for me only
And what I’m willing to do is for you only
Like swim across land and walk across the sea
Whip depression’s ass one handed and gave him anxiety
Feel the wind pick up boo, as I lift your hair
Feel Niagara cascading as I kiss you right there
I shine like the sun, yes a spotlight focused on you
All of my light prismed to show that my emotions are true
Yes, and I, I will do, I will do
Everything to and for you
My feeling for you are Mt. Vesuvius that dreadful night in Pompeii
But they are bound to go super nova if you decide to stay
Fucking shadow chains forged of the cosmos broken holding you here
Is your desire not to be here being restrained by your fears or my tears
I’ve restrained time, but I can’t turn back it’s clock
Past the point that I fucked up, back to when we first start
To when we were everything and everything was deep down within
Before you found deceit within my offered big bang, our universe could begin
But I, I will do, I will do
Everything to and for you
While I’m still going strong
Hit me with a love that’s a curse
When life just can’t go wrong
I’ll be there before you can text
Although my phone is never on
Telepathy is how I connect
These feelings are just that strong
And I, I will do, I will do
Everything to and for you
I will wrestle with death
Until he has nothing but good health
Drain you of ego and fill you with myself
Although I’m a thousand miles away, you’ll swear I never left
Destiny says it’s you for me only
And what I’m willing to do is for you only
Like swim across land and walk across the sea
Whip depression’s ass one handed and gave him anxiety
Feel the wind pick up boo, as I lift your hair
Feel Niagara cascading as I kiss you right there
I shine like the sun, yes a spotlight focused on you
All of my light prismed to show that my emotions are true
Yes, and I, I will do, I will do
Everything to and for you
My feeling for you are Mt. Vesuvius that dreadful night in Pompeii
But they are bound to go super nova if you decide to stay
Fucking shadow chains forged of the cosmos broken holding you here
Is your desire not to be here being restrained by your fears or my tears
I’ve restrained time, but I can’t turn back it’s clock
Past the point that I fucked up, back to when we first start
To when we were everything and everything was deep down within
Before you found deceit within my offered big bang, our universe could begin
But I, I will do, I will do
Everything to and for you
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Re. Deceivers
12th Nov 2023 9:36pm
This is amazing, Me. I keep reading it. Any woman would be lucky to receive such words.
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12th Nov 2023 10:42pm
Hahaha, these words don't matter after you've been caught screwing up. Thanks for reading and comment on this one
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12th Nov 2023 11:19pm
Yes life itself is a fifty-fifty shot in the dark, we can't see around corners and so we take chances. Thanks dude
Re. Deceivers
13th Nov 2023 1:01am
You had me cracking up on this line!!
Whip depression’s ass one handed and give him anxiety
This had your swag all over it Meme. Great song!!
Also loved the reference of Pompeii amigo:)
Whip depression’s ass one handed and give him anxiety
This had your swag all over it Meme. Great song!!
Also loved the reference of Pompeii amigo:)
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4th Dec 2023 2:04pm
'' Drain you of ego and fill you with myself ''
Well damn, Sir
Where do I sign up?
What a lovely write
Thia
Well damn, Sir
Where do I sign up?
What a lovely write
Thia
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1st Jan 2024 6:05am
Hahaha, you like mushy poetry, surprising. Thanks Lady for all of your support
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2nd Jan 2024 1:55pm
Wow! Talk about packing a punch! You words are genuine and I love people who speak straight talk. There is also a power in your words that is undeniable. I will be following you because you have a cool writing style I find intriguing.
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18th Jan 2024 00:47am
My favorite line, as already stated by one other commentor, is "Whip depression’s ass one handed and gave him anxiety".
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18th Jan 2024 1:06am
Dude, we can only dream of being on your freaking level. Thanks for the read and comment
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1st Apr 2024 5:23pm
Don't call it that, we thought that we was putting out some real hardcore street crap. Thanks Lady for you support
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