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Conformity
Fields of green standing in hip high grass untamed free . And all we do is cut away a blade at a time to reveal conformity with stripes of green shaved to be stood upon admired . This Isn't a field of dreams and hide and seek and squeals of laughter escaping
rosy red cheeks . No this is our back yard a
symmetrical green strip that wishes to been seen just as they are .
rosy red cheeks . No this is our back yard a
symmetrical green strip that wishes to been seen just as they are .
Published 4th Sep 2023
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4th Sep 2023 3:20pm
Your poem caught my attention for all the right reasons. Your words were full of reality and the pictures express that. I enjoyed your poem.
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4th Sep 2023 9:40pm
That's a huge relief, Maple. I feared you were looking for someone to mow that! ;-) There's something to be said for just letting nature do its thing, with all the wildflowers, weeds & stuff. :-)
4th Sep 2023 11:56pm
