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Shattered
Long time ago
I wished to be Chaucer like
I wished to be a fighter pilot
I wished to be wealthy and live in a mansion
Now I only wish to live somewhat happily
And long enough to see another day.
I wished to be Chaucer like
I wished to be a fighter pilot
I wished to be wealthy and live in a mansion
Now I only wish to live somewhat happily
And long enough to see another day.
Written by
robert43041
(Viking)
Published 15th Aug 2023
Author's Note
For the Shattered comp.........
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Re. Shattered
15th Aug 2023 3:02pm
Bold minimalism....I feel the brevity and the semblance of hope through the shards, dear Robert.
Good luck in the comp.
🌹B
Good luck in the comp.
🌹B
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Re: Re. Shattered
15th Aug 2023 7:58pm
Re. Shattered
15th Aug 2023 7:00pm
It's all good but,
Great Last Line.
That's what this stuff is about. Writing something Everyone can relate to!
Great Last Line.
That's what this stuff is about. Writing something Everyone can relate to!
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