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I Cut Myself and Thought of You
That's the kind of relationship we have
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
11th Aug 2023 9:44pm
Good thing it wasn't a cheese grater. Clean slice is heaven compared to that
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11th Aug 2023 10:03pm
Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
11th Aug 2023 10:24pm
Perfect pairing with the art. The title made me expect a different direction for this. Well played...
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
11th Aug 2023 10:29pm
I take what's given Red
Wrote itself
Easy as pie and then looked through my paintings for red smear ..
Thx ❤
Wrote itself
Easy as pie and then looked through my paintings for red smear ..
Thx ❤
Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
11th Aug 2023 11:15pm
We think we know the origin of the piece. But dude the pic sets the the piece off. We see an internal war in the piece, things that are kept within angry lines of darken pain. Tight work dude as always
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Re: Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
11th Aug 2023 11:26pm
I really wanted to work the poem with several blood red paintings I have and when I found this one in my collection it jumped out at me. Blood is often unpredictable and my muse whom I wrote this for compliments the words and her actions. I have to watch her carefully as an open wound is red meat 🍖 for her ....
Thanks as always for getting me ....ME
Thanks as always for getting me ....ME
Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
12th Aug 2023 2:20am
You fuck her until you both are cummed out. Please no cutting yourself better to keep on fucking her, driving your sexy woman insane while fucking through her orgasms. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
12th Aug 2023 2:36am
Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
So, I’m just putting this right out there…
There’s a certain kind of honesty and connection in that type of pain where it doesn’t become pain at all.
And your painting rocks too :)
There’s a certain kind of honesty and connection in that type of pain where it doesn’t become pain at all.
And your painting rocks too :)
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Re: Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
12th Aug 2023 3:41am
YES
I cut
I studied
I sucked away some blood
I thought about my muse and our weird comforts to some but to us Heavenly...
YOU GET IT MARY
X
I cut
I studied
I sucked away some blood
I thought about my muse and our weird comforts to some but to us Heavenly...
YOU GET IT MARY
X
Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
15th Aug 2023 2:23am
Styx cut his pinkie the other day.
Work hazard!
Wonder if he though of me!! LOL
Love the painting too!!
Work hazard!
Wonder if he though of me!! LOL
Love the painting too!!
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Re: Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
15th Aug 2023 3:19am
He was probably hoping you'd kiss it and make it better. Guy think !!
Yeah, that painting summed it up
Thanks A !
Yeah, that painting summed it up
Thanks A !
Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
15th Aug 2023 1:50pm
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15th Aug 2023 8:58pm
Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
15th Aug 2023 8:43pm
Definitely that kind of relationship...
You always need a little slice.
But I can definitely go too far.
It can be unsettling, can't it?
Eager to share in the pain.
You know I love gore and perversity.
And there is always tomorrow...
Unless I push the blade a little deeper. ;)
Ooooo, love the painting...
You always need a little slice.
But I can definitely go too far.
It can be unsettling, can't it?
Eager to share in the pain.
You know I love gore and perversity.
And there is always tomorrow...
Unless I push the blade a little deeper. ;)
Ooooo, love the painting...
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Re: Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
15th Aug 2023 8:57pm
Knife cuts are better than paper cuts.
You'd definitely go too far, the question is would I want you to go further ?
His and Her Self Harm, I think the world needs more admission of the thrills.
What do you think?
Bloody smeared painting just for you.
Thx for the RL. Those are coveted these days !!
You'd definitely go too far, the question is would I want you to go further ?
His and Her Self Harm, I think the world needs more admission of the thrills.
What do you think?
Bloody smeared painting just for you.
Thx for the RL. Those are coveted these days !!
Re. I Cut Myself and Thought of You
21st Aug 2023 5:26am
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21st Aug 2023 11:05am
Yeah, keeps me honest. My box cutter is too sharp or else I'm testing fate ....