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Fucking Fairytales
my fairytale
lies bleeding
to death
on the floor
just
like Bambl's
mother
I'm that
well worn
welcome mat
dirtied by those
who have wiped
their feet on me
to show love
then be smacked
like a naughty Child
punished
for offering
something good
if I come back
and tell you
I just want to
tongue fuck
you too
death
would that
upset you
you broke
my halo
still want you
all the more
maybe just leave
love out of it
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Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 2:32pm
Re: Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 2:39pm
Re. Fucking Fairytales
Ouch!
This packs a ferocious punch, indeed. Hopefully it's a bit of a purge/haggis, if not... (hugs to you )
Just fyi (typo with 'offering' and 'welcome')
Your boldness is ballsy and very motivational, Colin.
I hear you.
🌹💙 - x
This packs a ferocious punch, indeed. Hopefully it's a bit of a purge/haggis, if not... (hugs to you )
Just fyi (typo with 'offering' and 'welcome')
Your boldness is ballsy and very motivational, Colin.
I hear you.
🌹💙 - x
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Re: Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 2:42pm
not haggis worth
as I said to Ron just pissed
at being told im a nice Guy
as I said to Ron just pissed
at being told im a nice Guy
Re: Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 3:09pm
Nice isn't a slander, it's a beautiful endearment and never negates ones own masterful prowess.
A man can be many things...
-♡
A man can be many things...
-♡
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Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 3:46pm
Brother,
this spill encapsulates nearly everything i FELT, FEEL, want to feel anew,
after my Domme died.
i thank You for dripping these drops of memorable thoughts.
i know this is not what Your ink is about, but for me
it's soooooooooooooo MUCH MORE. So, i still say, thank You, Brother.
this spill encapsulates nearly everything i FELT, FEEL, want to feel anew,
after my Domme died.
i thank You for dripping these drops of memorable thoughts.
i know this is not what Your ink is about, but for me
it's soooooooooooooo MUCH MORE. So, i still say, thank You, Brother.
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Re: Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 3:49pm
happy to bring happy memories Theo
just shows that there are always different perspective on any written words
just shows that there are always different perspective on any written words
Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 4:40pm
"My fairytale lies bleeding to death... like Bambi's mother"
Ouch. Wow. Painful but very powerful poetry. I love that you go to those dark, intense places and write about them so well.
Ouch. Wow. Painful but very powerful poetry. I love that you go to those dark, intense places and write about them so well.
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Re: Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 4:44pm
Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 4:44pm
Some people perceive only our surface . People who really Know us perceive the deeper darkness.
Nicely penned.
👍.
Nicely penned.
👍.
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Re: Re. Fucking Fairytales
4th Aug 2023 5:21pm
I am nice was brought to respect others
but I do have a darker side
think we all do
but I do have a darker side
think we all do
Re. Fucking Fairytales
5th Aug 2023 7:47pm
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5th Aug 2023 7:56pm
Re. Fucking Fairytales
7th Aug 2023 8:56am
Why mix the two of you can't uphold the love commitment. Fuck them, boo.
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Re. Fucking Fairytales
7th Aug 2023 3:41pm
Damn, I remember crying about Bambi's mother. :(
We have all felt like a dirtied welcome mat I think...
Punished just for being, or perhaps for being naughty.
Being tongue fucked to death, I can definitely think of worse ways to go. ;)
And demons are so damn seductive, always trying to break the halo...
To pull you in deeper and make you need it more and more.
We have all felt like a dirtied welcome mat I think...
Punished just for being, or perhaps for being naughty.
Being tongue fucked to death, I can definitely think of worse ways to go. ;)
And demons are so damn seductive, always trying to break the halo...
To pull you in deeper and make you need it more and more.
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Re: Re. Fucking Fairytales
7th Aug 2023 3:46pm
my halo choking me
the heart on my sleeve weight heavy
dreams more a strait jacket
the heart on my sleeve weight heavy
dreams more a strait jacket
Re: Re. Fucking Fairytales
7th Aug 2023 3:57pm
you know I am crazy... binding.
as I tighten the halo around your neck
and weigh your heart for the stew
as I tighten the halo around your neck
and weigh your heart for the stew
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Re: Re. Fucking Fairytales
7th Aug 2023 4:12pm
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7th Aug 2023 4:21pm
just add enough spice and hot sauce
and see where the Colinary experience takes you... :p
and see where the Colinary experience takes you... :p
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Re. Fucking Fairytales
7th Aug 2023 5:05pm
Fuck Bambi, Fuck Barbie, only tongue Barbie....
Digging evil AP
BRING IT
BIG LIKE
Digging evil AP
BRING IT
BIG LIKE
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