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The Breeze
I watched the wind take with it a soul.
Where they went I'll never know.
She was just gone.
Where they went I'll never know.
She was just gone.
Published 26th Jul 2023
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The wind takes the pollen to fecund a flower somewhere.,for the flower will surely give a fragrant breeze..
Happiness to you.
Happiness to you.
26th Jul 2023 5:29pm
26th Jul 2023 5:37pm
Great picture. Death seems to be the most mysterious subject on people's minds. If we only knew what we were in for. :)
26th Jul 2023 6:18pm
28th Jul 2023 11:38am
sometimes writing the thought process and bringing it to the surface is necessary especially when it comes to the loss of a loved one, i was a little bit cheeky and tagged it under minimalist because it does encapsulate universal thoughts and emotions in three lines and you always do that so well in your short poems and stories, i really wish you would write a book because i'd definitely buy it
thank you for sharing nikki :]
-ethan
thank you for sharing nikki :]
-ethan
26th Aug 2023 6:19am
