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Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 00:15am
Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 6:40am
Wow...
The photo works so well...
As it opens into layers...
You have a cup, filling itself up...
Which is an action in the passive voice...
Then just the idea that a cup could
fill itself up...
And the pic makes the cup
look like it is a conscious entity...
The photo works so well...
As it opens into layers...
You have a cup, filling itself up...
Which is an action in the passive voice...
Then just the idea that a cup could
fill itself up...
And the pic makes the cup
look like it is a conscious entity...
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Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 3:17pm
You could be describing my life there ... Lol epic write and pic ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 5:36pm
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Re: Re. Back at Zero
25th Jul 2023 1:23am
Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 10:26pm
Remember that it's not whether the cup is half full or half empty-- it's the fact that no matter what its level, it's always refillable.
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Re: Re. Back at Zero
25th Jul 2023 1:23am
Re. Back at Zero
20th Aug 2023 5:57am
Like drops of wisdom and philosophical ponderings, these spills (no pun intended) bring so much to the table.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re. Back at Zero
26th Aug 2023 6:22am
Your stuff is short but very meaningful, powerful even. Your very good. I tend to make a short story long and I have no idea why. I like your style so much more !!
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Re. Back at Zero
17th Apr 2024 7:00pm
I never understood this half cup thing... you just made my day... knock it over and start from zero... I think I like you
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