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Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 00:15am
Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 6:40am
Wow...
The photo works so well...
As it opens into layers...
You have a cup, filling itself up...
Which is an action in the passive voice...
Then just the idea that a cup could
fill itself up...
And the pic makes the cup
look like it is a conscious entity...
The photo works so well...
As it opens into layers...
You have a cup, filling itself up...
Which is an action in the passive voice...
Then just the idea that a cup could
fill itself up...
And the pic makes the cup
look like it is a conscious entity...
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Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 3:17pm
You could be describing my life there ... Lol epic write and pic ... Bless and love ... .
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Re: Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 5:36pm
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Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 9:24pm
i think what i love most about this little poem is the multifaceted way of reading it, you can actually read it backwards and it can be taken as some glimmer of hope, renewal or starting again in some way or form, there is a balance of reading into as a negative or a positive depending on the way a reader views and digests it, well damnit it's definitely one of those little poems even i didn't see coming and i always love little poems that catch me off guard, this being one of them
thank you for sharing nikki :]
-ethan
thank you for sharing nikki :]
-ethan
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Re: Re. Back at Zero
25th Jul 2023 1:23am
Re. Back at Zero
24th Jul 2023 10:26pm
Remember that it's not whether the cup is half full or half empty-- it's the fact that no matter what its level, it's always refillable.
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Re: Re. Back at Zero
25th Jul 2023 1:23am
Re. Back at Zero
20th Aug 2023 5:57am
Like drops of wisdom and philosophical ponderings, these spills (no pun intended) bring so much to the table.
Well done.
Well done.
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Re. Back at Zero
26th Aug 2023 6:22am
Your stuff is short but very meaningful, powerful even. Your very good. I tend to make a short story long and I have no idea why. I like your style so much more !!
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Re. Back at Zero
17th Apr 2024 7:00pm
I never understood this half cup thing... you just made my day... knock it over and start from zero... I think I like you
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