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if-then
if there is love in
this world
then why so many
broken hearts,
tears of loneliness,
desperation and
suicides.
if there is hope in
this world
then why so much
bigotry, division,
rage, whole sale
slaughter and war
if there is a God of
this world
then why are we
surrounded by
so many
hells
Published 16th Jun 2023
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16th Jun 2023 1:07am
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16th Jun 2023 1:25am
Totally. Dogs/cats should run this world. We would better off playing fetch or lying in the sun .
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
16th Jun 2023 5:25am
keep writing, keep writing keep writing. keep questions for every occasion, for every encounter. keep asking.
16th Jun 2023 5:50am
Absolutely, ds. Question everything. Write about anything. Nothing is too sacred.
Thank you. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
16th Jun 2023 6:04am
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16th Jun 2023 6:14am
Dear BK,
A poem for the ages. This piece just makes me stop in my tracks. The questions you pose in this are heartbreaking. As always you cut right to the chase and make us look at our behaviors. Well done! H🌷
A poem for the ages. This piece just makes me stop in my tracks. The questions you pose in this are heartbreaking. As always you cut right to the chase and make us look at our behaviors. Well done! H🌷
16th Jun 2023 6:38am
Thank you, Honoria. This just "popped" into my head while listening to the news.
Your kind words are much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Your kind words are much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
16th Jun 2023 6:52am
honestly, there's not a better piece to fit for this month, I nominated this for poem of the month hope you don't mind. best to you wherever the words take you my friend.
16th Jun 2023 9:08am
Thank you so much, david. I'm deeply humbled by the nomination.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
16th Jun 2023 8:31am
This poem is so beautiful. I love how vulnerable it is. Truly a beautiful poem :D
16th Jun 2023 9:10am
Thank you, ayleestar. Your kind words are deeply appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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16th Jun 2023 7:06pm
That hasn't been my case; however, some answers have damn sure took their own sweet time manifesting!
17th Jun 2023 1:38am
I can relate to that, for sure.
May your search bare beautiful fruit.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
May your search bare beautiful fruit.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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