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Valuable lessons in leering
Anticipation
steeps
hot and steady
My skin
sparks
like a live wire
One quick
purposeful glance
from over the shoulder,
catapults
need
Knowing
you'll catch
that look on my face
has me
sharpening my claws
and
it's there,
amidst remnants
of my devious
Cheshire cat-like smile
flaring so
very recognizable
that my
chameleon tongue
tauntingly licks
from the corners
of deep
red
lips
in ready
......
steeps
hot and steady
My skin
sparks
like a live wire
One quick
purposeful glance
from over the shoulder,
catapults
need
Knowing
you'll catch
that look on my face
has me
sharpening my claws
and
it's there,
amidst remnants
of my devious
Cheshire cat-like smile
flaring so
very recognizable
that my
chameleon tongue
tauntingly licks
from the corners
of deep
red
lips
in ready
......
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Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 10:51pm
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 10:53pm
You're far too kind.... and back at ya, MS!
Love your newest... No one does the moon justice like you do!!
Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving me with a big smile.
🌹💙 - 🌒
Love your newest... No one does the moon justice like you do!!
Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving me with a big smile.
🌹💙 - 🌒
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 10:52pm
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 10:57pm
heh heh heh... And the trophy for best comment of the day goes to... 🏆
Thanks for the kindness of your feedback, Me ... I think I feel the vibrations of your Mmmm....Ohh my!
↜(╰ ω)╯ψ
Thanks for the kindness of your feedback, Me ... I think I feel the vibrations of your Mmmm....Ohh my!
↜(╰ ω)╯ψ
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 11:08pm
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 11:43pm
Woo-hoo.... snappy, indeed!!
Thanks for the lovely senryś and your generous list add, Colin.
You're the best.
🌹-💙
Thanks for the lovely senryś and your generous list add, Colin.
You're the best.
🌹-💙
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 11:19pm
Being ready, like....really ready....so edged that the edge is slipping into the....
And a waft of that
.
And a waft of that
.
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 11:48pm
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 5:47pm
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 11:20pm
I thought a woman was leering at me once. Then I realized see was just having trouble with her contacts. Oh well...needless to say, I much prefer your version! 🌼😉
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
Awww... I'm sure she only pretended it was her contacts, to avoid being so very blatant in her leering... ;)
I'd totally leer (in the nicest possible way!) .. just saying... hahaha...
Love seeing you, J
Thanks for the lovely, cute comments.
🌹💙 💙
I'd totally leer (in the nicest possible way!) .. just saying... hahaha...
Love seeing you, J
Thanks for the lovely, cute comments.
🌹💙 💙
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 00:20am
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 11:25pm
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 00:08am
Ohhh my... That's a fabulous bit of feedback, Ron. Love having you under my spell... ✨
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for that generous list add... it means a lot to me.
🌹💙 💙
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and for that generous list add... it means a lot to me.
🌹💙 💙
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
10th May 2023 11:36pm
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 00:04am
Thanks for digging this little impromptu bit of naughtiness... I couldn't help myself... haha.
Your always a lovely sight to see, Debbie.
Much love and warmest regards...
🌹💙
Your always a lovely sight to see, Debbie.
Much love and warmest regards...
🌹💙
Anonymous
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
Daw... (blushes)... Thanks for the very very kind compliment, T.
Glad you enjoyed reading and that you found something sexy here... hubba hubba.... lol!
It's nice to see you, my friend
🌹 💙
Glad you enjoyed reading and that you found something sexy here... hubba hubba.... lol!
It's nice to see you, my friend
🌹 💙
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 00:05am
You are licking those juicy sexy lips and telling me that you want sweet sweet passionate love. I'm ready for you my sexy smart beautiful strong woman. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 4:34am
You're so saucy, Francisco!! Don't forget... You ALWAYS need to be prepared, my dear!
Thanks for bringing your heated commentary, it always makes me chuckle.
I appreciate you, you charmer!
🌹-B
Thanks for bringing your heated commentary, it always makes me chuckle.
I appreciate you, you charmer!
🌹-B
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
12th May 2023 2:29am
Always prepared with chocolate, butterscotch syrups, whipped cream and cherries. I'm your sexy charmer.
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Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 00:37am
Ooooh, Blue 🥵! This was a delicious little slice of anticipation. So well done 💖
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 3:37am
lol... I was just telling AP earlier that I haven't a clue where it came from, either... so I very much appreciate your supportive kind words, J. You've made me really smile and feel better about my little poem...
Much love and gratitude,
🌹 💙
-B
Much love and gratitude,
🌹 💙
-B
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 00:44am
The poem portrays the confidence in your seduction. Very sexy. Like the "Venus Fly Trap" salivating at the fresh meat morsel it has attracted. : )
I also thought of the risk, if you had been unsure of capturing the targeted conquest. The fine line between sultry seduction and desperation, the feedback nearly immediate. But this poem conveyed no risk, as Blue has the object of her desire secure in her seductive web.
I also thought of the risk, if you had been unsure of capturing the targeted conquest. The fine line between sultry seduction and desperation, the feedback nearly immediate. But this poem conveyed no risk, as Blue has the object of her desire secure in her seductive web.
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Damn, Leo... You see with the kind of vision that very few are capable of and doesn't that just leave me feeling spectacular... ;)
My usual self would probably say that my attempt to create something here was at the minimum, which is a hope at 'A wee bit fetching." But since you've felt this piece being at it's apex, worthy of "A Venus Fly Trap", I'll happily and eagerly go with that!!... lol.
Again, you know me! My sniper scope is aligned and expertly on 🎯 target!!
I simply adore you....and I'll be sure to continue to keep that crack in the blinds (perhaps even widen it!)
Much love, inspector 🕵🏻♂️
🌹💙
My usual self would probably say that my attempt to create something here was at the minimum, which is a hope at 'A wee bit fetching." But since you've felt this piece being at it's apex, worthy of "A Venus Fly Trap", I'll happily and eagerly go with that!!... lol.
Again, you know me! My sniper scope is aligned and expertly on 🎯 target!!
I simply adore you....and I'll be sure to continue to keep that crack in the blinds (perhaps even widen it!)
Much love, inspector 🕵🏻♂️
🌹💙
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 1:52am
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 3:19am
Likewise... 🐾
Meow!
Thanks for stopping by and for feeling my little paw prints upon the page...
🌹💙
Meow!
Thanks for stopping by and for feeling my little paw prints upon the page...
🌹💙
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 6:53am
Mmmmm...this is a good one BB❣Filled with sensually succulent, sexy, sweet, and salty imagery. This passage
hit me right between the eyes, "catapults
need." Oh to one more time in life see that desire on a lovers face. 🐻💞🐰
hit me right between the eyes, "catapults
need." Oh to one more time in life see that desire on a lovers face. 🐻💞🐰
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
You always pick out the line that I hope impacts, most... which just makes me smile. ☺ I'm thrilled you found this little piece emanating the desirous allure I tried to convey, that's a relief indeed.
Btw, you're still able to have that face to face delicious 'reveal' many times over, dear BB... Just a reminder!
My heart is full, seeing you 🦋 You have my cherished adoration, always.
Hope things are going as well as they can be,
Much love,
🐻💞🐰
xo
Btw, you're still able to have that face to face delicious 'reveal' many times over, dear BB... Just a reminder!
My heart is full, seeing you 🦋 You have my cherished adoration, always.
Hope things are going as well as they can be,
Much love,
🐻💞🐰
xo
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 2:07pm
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
12th May 2023 3:19pm
Haha... Thanks for the hopeful observation, hear Robert.
I love hearing from you and hope things are going well up north...
xoxo -
🌹B
I love hearing from you and hope things are going well up north...
xoxo -
🌹B
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
12th May 2023 5:02pm
Kisses and more........Things ''heating up'' with warm weather, women removing tons of needless clothes showing nice skin.........
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Re. Valuable lessons in leering
11th May 2023 2:51pm
Dear BV,
Sorry Im late to the party but after I finished reading this I needed a drink, a smoke and a cold shower. 😊
For me, this is a brilliant perspective of all in (borrowing a poker phrase). Nothing ventured nothing gained. You saw, you aimed you conquered. Now youre sharing that conquest with others to boost their confidence to get out there and grab what they want/need. No holds. No prisoners.
Chick power! 💄💋
H🌷
Sorry Im late to the party but after I finished reading this I needed a drink, a smoke and a cold shower. 😊
For me, this is a brilliant perspective of all in (borrowing a poker phrase). Nothing ventured nothing gained. You saw, you aimed you conquered. Now youre sharing that conquest with others to boost their confidence to get out there and grab what they want/need. No holds. No prisoners.
Chick power! 💄💋
H🌷
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
12th May 2023 3:33pm
Hey there, Honoria ;)
Sometimes a lady just can't hold back from becoming greedy in all that is absolutely wanted/needed for the taking.... I think that part of ourselves deserves to be let out, to exercise itself, so to speak.... 😈... In certain situations, it's just an automatic impulse... I do hope it's contagious, indeed!
It feels like a total triumph, knowing you've felt what I truly hoped to put out there. Thanks for that awesome kinship in understanding and for taking that time you do, dear lady...
Yes!! Chick power, unite! ;p
🌹💙 👠
xo
Sometimes a lady just can't hold back from becoming greedy in all that is absolutely wanted/needed for the taking.... I think that part of ourselves deserves to be let out, to exercise itself, so to speak.... 😈... In certain situations, it's just an automatic impulse... I do hope it's contagious, indeed!
It feels like a total triumph, knowing you've felt what I truly hoped to put out there. Thanks for that awesome kinship in understanding and for taking that time you do, dear lady...
Yes!! Chick power, unite! ;p
🌹💙 👠
xo
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
Hoi hoi, Chčre Ms B.,
Hope this finds you well ..?
From a forthcoming cooperation of some 4 years ago, that Im going to post when I come home:
I'm hanging on to every word that you say
Yeah you can ruin my life while making my day
Won't you please move my way
Please move my way
Love your poem to bits.
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well ..?
From a forthcoming cooperation of some 4 years ago, that Im going to post when I come home:
I'm hanging on to every word that you say
Yeah you can ruin my life while making my day
Won't you please move my way
Please move my way
Love your poem to bits.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
12th May 2023 3:41pm
Hoi hoi
I am doing better and I deeply appreciate you for asking, Gus - *♡ᵗʱᵃᵑᵏઽ*♡
I can't help but truly bask withing your lyrics and your beautiful singing, please don't ever stop making that music... it's potent and wonderful felt, dear sir.
Love seeing you 🦋
Just a reminder + know you're always warmly welcomed here...
Much love and all my best wishes sent your way...
(*・‿・)ノ⌒*:・゚✧
xo
I am doing better and I deeply appreciate you for asking, Gus - *♡ᵗʱᵃᵑᵏઽ*♡
I can't help but truly bask withing your lyrics and your beautiful singing, please don't ever stop making that music... it's potent and wonderful felt, dear sir.
Love seeing you 🦋
Just a reminder + know you're always warmly welcomed here...
Much love and all my best wishes sent your way...
(*・‿・)ノ⌒*:・゚✧
xo
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
12th May 2023 8:01am
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Re. Valuable lessons in leering
12th May 2023 3:07pm
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
12th May 2023 3:46pm
From you, that's high high praise... I think my heart skipped a beat, there...
Love you, lady
Thanks.
-💙
Love you, lady
Thanks.
-💙
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
12th May 2023 8:48pm
So hey Blue, your erotica is so tastefully written, no clumsy predictable same ol same ol, or unnecessary vulgar nonsense. And yet your writes are quite erotic :) You write with steel a fine tune instrument nicely greased. I truly always enjoy how you play with your words and put em just right, where they need to be. You could write a book and you should.
Loves you honey
Always Jackie xoxox
Loves you honey
Always Jackie xoxox
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
13th May 2023 1:56am
Hey there, Jackie!
You had me going all 'Awww, shucks'... lol.
Thank you so much for reading and really taking the time to share your perspective with me it's such a kind one. I will take that info and hold it dear, allowing it to seep into my stubborn usual self browbeating mindset!
It's so great to know you're doing well and enjoying the beach.... it'll only get better and better as the summer progresses, good for you! Woo-hoo!
Much returned love and oodles of appreciation,
🌹💙-🏖
-Susan
You had me going all 'Awww, shucks'... lol.
Thank you so much for reading and really taking the time to share your perspective with me it's such a kind one. I will take that info and hold it dear, allowing it to seep into my stubborn usual self browbeating mindset!
It's so great to know you're doing well and enjoying the beach.... it'll only get better and better as the summer progresses, good for you! Woo-hoo!
Much returned love and oodles of appreciation,
🌹💙-🏖
-Susan
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
13th May 2023 1:04am
Here I am trying to elbow my way into this crowded comment section!
I guess summer has you sizzling already?
Along with the self described look, you've written an awesome "come hither" poem!
Tantalizing and yet tasteful. With your unique flavor.
Blue goes boom!
I guess summer has you sizzling already?
Along with the self described look, you've written an awesome "come hither" poem!
Tantalizing and yet tasteful. With your unique flavor.
Blue goes boom!
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
13th May 2023 2:16am
hahaha...
It's unusually crowed by the kindness of those lovely and far too kind folks who I simply adore beyond adequate description... I think maybe the over generous response is due to me being gone a lot within the past few weeks. Life has a curiously ominous way of interrupting what was my status quo of, dare I say, joyfulness and just you-know-what-ing all over it... Uggh. So, I chuckle at your 'elbowing in' but just remember the above.. ;)
Note* I sizzle all the time but only sparingly reveal that, spark, for fear of infernos... heh heh heh...
Thank you for the very kind comments and for feeling and understanding my ink like only you seem to do. It means a lot to me, Mark... - 🌹
Hope all is well and moving along nicely
-x
It's unusually crowed by the kindness of those lovely and far too kind folks who I simply adore beyond adequate description... I think maybe the over generous response is due to me being gone a lot within the past few weeks. Life has a curiously ominous way of interrupting what was my status quo of, dare I say, joyfulness and just you-know-what-ing all over it... Uggh. So, I chuckle at your 'elbowing in' but just remember the above.. ;)
Note* I sizzle all the time but only sparingly reveal that, spark, for fear of infernos... heh heh heh...
Thank you for the very kind comments and for feeling and understanding my ink like only you seem to do. It means a lot to me, Mark... - 🌹
Hope all is well and moving along nicely
-x
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
I love how you took the quintessential male leer and gave it a female face. You my darling made female desire into a tantalizing poem that rosins my bow mightily. I recall jogging across a college campus in my youth and getting catcalled by a pack of women. And I was not in the least disturbed. Such attention did wonders for my young male ego. And your poem is exactly the thing to spice my night with a fiery sauce. I just felt the heat of your feline hunger and loved seeing it through your delectable words. There is nothing like getting taken in by the eyes of a woman for whom the man is the prize. And I can truly relish the womanly desire you painted to the point that I felt a stirring deep down where the sun doesn't shine. Loved every wonderful taste you have me tonight my sweet princess of all things sensual.
Much love,
John
Much love,
John
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I read these comments briefly last night before falling asleep and have totally decided that the wondrously beautiful dreamscapes I can almost remember (more so feel the essence of) were 100% due to your considerate, kind and enormously consequential feedback. For you to be so understanding and in sync with my intent, leaves me utterly breathless, my dear.
I can't help but absolutely wrap my arms around each and every aspect of your thoughtful feedback, in a bear hug hold of the deepest appreciation. You know how much I adore your insight and the weight of your opinions but this reply feels even more weighty, and impactful for some reason. I'm not sure why that's the case but it is and I'm beyond thankful for your ability to see me and evoke that response... It's an amazing feeling you've selflessly left me with - 💙
Having you here with me always deeply inspires, I hope you know that kind of fuel /motivation isn't taken for granted or looked upon lightly. I feel exorbitantly lucky to bask within your keen perspectives and vast array of impressive knowledge... what a phenomenal pleasure!
All my love and huge heartfelt gratitude , John.
🌹💙
-Susan
I can't help but absolutely wrap my arms around each and every aspect of your thoughtful feedback, in a bear hug hold of the deepest appreciation. You know how much I adore your insight and the weight of your opinions but this reply feels even more weighty, and impactful for some reason. I'm not sure why that's the case but it is and I'm beyond thankful for your ability to see me and evoke that response... It's an amazing feeling you've selflessly left me with - 💙
Having you here with me always deeply inspires, I hope you know that kind of fuel /motivation isn't taken for granted or looked upon lightly. I feel exorbitantly lucky to bask within your keen perspectives and vast array of impressive knowledge... what a phenomenal pleasure!
All my love and huge heartfelt gratitude , John.
🌹💙
-Susan
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
13th May 2023 2:49pm
Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
13th May 2023 4:47pm
I like that idea but perfect and I are like oil and water... lol... You're a very bright spot in a gloomy day today, bk.. Thanks so much for that.
Love seeing you here... truly.
🌹💙 💙
-B
Love seeing you here... truly.
🌹💙 💙
-B
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
23rd May 2023 9:38pm
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24th May 2023 3:02am
Mmmm.... I'm thrilled you think so, KP.
Hope you've enjoyed your traveling experiences, I'm curious to hear any good stories you have!
Really lovely to see you 🦋
🌹 💙
Hope you've enjoyed your traveling experiences, I'm curious to hear any good stories you have!
Really lovely to see you 🦋
🌹 💙
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
9th Jun 2023 1:18pm
Echo Goldenmyst in saying you have given a female voice to what is often seen as a male vice, illustrating sparks of sexual anticipation and feline metaphors. Favourite verses:
.My skin
sparks
like a live wire
One quick
purposeful glance
from over the shoulder,
catapults
need
.My skin
sparks
like a live wire
One quick
purposeful glance
from over the shoulder,
catapults
need
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Re: Re. Valuable lessons in leering
9th Jun 2023 3:53pm
Hey there, Solomon.
Sometimes I forget where the motivation for a particular piece that I write comes from, so it was lovely to get to revisit that sensation, when due to your feedback I had the opportunity to reread this poem and the other accompanied comments. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me and for giving me another chance to be taken back to the particular mental space I occupied when I wrote this.... What a treat, indeed.
It's a pleasure to read your favorite lines and know that you derived enjoyment from reading, like you have.
So lovely to see you 🦋
🌹-B
Sometimes I forget where the motivation for a particular piece that I write comes from, so it was lovely to get to revisit that sensation, when due to your feedback I had the opportunity to reread this poem and the other accompanied comments. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me and for giving me another chance to be taken back to the particular mental space I occupied when I wrote this.... What a treat, indeed.
It's a pleasure to read your favorite lines and know that you derived enjoyment from reading, like you have.
So lovely to see you 🦋
🌹-B
Re. Valuable lessons in leering
25th Jun 2023 1:29am
Either my AC went out or it got warm in here...
Dayum! That's all I'm going to say.
Dayum! That's all I'm going to say.
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