deepundergroundpoetry.com
You Will and I Have
You are admired as my father figure, my brother, my lover.
You are my disability, disparity, my discipline.
You want, I want.
You are knowing, I've been known.
I want to know you intimately.
I will challenge you. I will influence you. You will want to know me.
You will know me, you will blame me and
I will have you.
You are my disability, disparity, my discipline.
You want, I want.
You are knowing, I've been known.
I want to know you intimately.
I will challenge you. I will influence you. You will want to know me.
You will know me, you will blame me and
I will have you.
Published 4th May 2023
| Edited 6th May 2023
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 4
reading list entries 0
comments 4
reads 257
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
4th May 2023 4:09am
This easily makes me see a confident warrior standing over her "foe", as she proclaims how it's going to be. A lot of strength flexing within these lines.
Awesome write, Elenore.
Awesome write, Elenore.
4th May 2023 3:44pm
Hoi hoi
I really didn’t know exactly what to say.
But instead of words, I just pushed the ‘like this poem’ button.
Overseeing that it lacks: ‘A lot’ button’.
Like the artwork too.
Look forward to your next one.
Kind regards, Gus
I really didn’t know exactly what to say.
But instead of words, I just pushed the ‘like this poem’ button.
Overseeing that it lacks: ‘A lot’ button’.
Like the artwork too.
Look forward to your next one.
Kind regards, Gus
5th May 2023 6:12pm
You're too funny! I appreciate your response, thank you. I'm working on another. Stay tuned!
Elenore
Elenore
