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Counting Mississippi’s
Lightning.
Count ~
one Mississippi
two Mississippi
three Mississippi.
Thunder.
Three miles at least,
my mom declares,
smiling down at me.
I’m still afraid, though.
How can she know
the mind of the storm?
Maybe Mother Earth
has finally had enough of us,
with our wasting and killing
and our race to consume.
Maybe it’s just a storm,
she says confidently,
smile never wavering.
The sun will come out again,
you’ll see.
Lightning.
Count ~
one Mississippi
two Mississippi
three Mississippi
four Mississippi
five Mississippi.
Thunder.
Count ~
one Mississippi
two Mississippi
three Mississippi.
Thunder.
Three miles at least,
my mom declares,
smiling down at me.
I’m still afraid, though.
How can she know
the mind of the storm?
Maybe Mother Earth
has finally had enough of us,
with our wasting and killing
and our race to consume.
Maybe it’s just a storm,
she says confidently,
smile never wavering.
The sun will come out again,
you’ll see.
Lightning.
Count ~
one Mississippi
two Mississippi
three Mississippi
four Mississippi
five Mississippi.
Thunder.
Author's Note
Woke up to a thunderstorm this morning. Funny how memories wash over me whenever there’s rain. Miss you mom, I’m at five Mississippi’s now.
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Re. Counting Mississippi’s
9th Apr 2023 7:38am
Dear L,
This brought back quite a few memories counting seconds between thunder and lightening strikes. Your pacing in this is fantastic. My mom used to say it was just the angels bowling in heaven. Who knew there were bowling leagues above? Wonderfully reflective piece. H🌷
This brought back quite a few memories counting seconds between thunder and lightening strikes. Your pacing in this is fantastic. My mom used to say it was just the angels bowling in heaven. Who knew there were bowling leagues above? Wonderfully reflective piece. H🌷
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Re: Re. Counting Mississippi’s
9th Apr 2023 11:46am
My dad used to say the same thing about bowling in heaven, and also that rain was the angels crying. So of course I used to imagine god was using the angels as bowling pins; otherwise, why would they be crying so hard? Lol, thank you Honoria!
Re. Counting Mississippi’s
9th Apr 2023 2:39pm
Its raining here too, gently. I love the intimate reverie, counting Mississippi's lends that root resonance to childhood.
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Re: Re. Counting Mississippi’s
11th Apr 2023 00:35am
We’ve had rain here for a few days now. I revel in the peaceful melancholy it brings.
Re: Re. Counting Mississippi’s
11th Apr 2023 3:15pm
Re. Counting Mississippi’s
9th Apr 2023 4:29pm
My mom used to tell all of us kids that when it was raining while the sun was shining that meant the Devil was beating his wife.... Ohh how the times have changed... sheesh!
I was instantly brought back to my childhood reading this totally relatable poem. Such a wonderful idea that you captured to the T!
Excellently poeted... and so so enjoyable.
🌹 💙
B
I was instantly brought back to my childhood reading this totally relatable poem. Such a wonderful idea that you captured to the T!
Excellently poeted... and so so enjoyable.
🌹 💙
B
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Re: Re. Counting Mississippi’s
11th Apr 2023 00:37am
LOL, I haven’t heard that one in a long time! My aunt used to say it when my cousin and I were young 😆
Thank you so much, Blue 💖
Thank you so much, Blue 💖
Re. Counting Mississippi’s
10th Apr 2023 00:44am
I forgot about counting between the lightning and thunder. I would quietly will it to be upon us. There was something haunting about a nighttime thunder storm, and I can still feel the awe and inspiration that came with it.
Thanks for this little trip back in time.
Thanks for this little trip back in time.
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Re: Re. Counting Mississippi’s
11th Apr 2023 00:40am
I always loved the danger of the thing. Living in Florida, we always had a fresh supply of batteries for all the flashlights. I got some of my best angsty teenage poetry done under the light of D batteries lol!
Re. Counting Mississippi’s
10th Apr 2023 11:02pm
In my youthful days, life seemed much easier. At times I feel the silence of memories whispering better times, they were. Don't laugh, but I have a sealed Mason jar with a preserved breath of my wife inside, Thank you for the memories.
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Re: Re. Counting Mississippi’s
11th Apr 2023 00:41am
I’d never laugh, I think it’s quite sweet.
Thank you so much for reading!
Thank you so much for reading!
Re. Counting Mississippi’s
18th May 2023 2:59am
The spec of time of our human lives doesn't compare to the life of Mother Earth. I always think we're just guests for a short time here. Loved the nostalgic and re-assuring memory of counting to understand how far away it is.
Amazing spill.
Amazing spill.
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Re: Re. Counting Mississippi’s
18th May 2023 12:04pm