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Conqueror of Hearts
Oh, great conqueror of hearts
You are the fire that burns within us all
We dance to the rhythm of your infinite drumbeats
Compose your new melody, and we shall soar into the heavens
We are dragons, and we breathe your life-giving fire
We hear your song, and our spirits reignite into brilliant colours
Our hearts beat as one
Our souls shine together
The cosmic melody brings us to completion
Oh, great conqueror of hearts.
You are the fire that burns within us all
We dance to the rhythm of your infinite drumbeats
Compose your new melody, and we shall soar into the heavens
We are dragons, and we breathe your life-giving fire
We hear your song, and our spirits reignite into brilliant colours
Our hearts beat as one
Our souls shine together
The cosmic melody brings us to completion
Oh, great conqueror of hearts.
Published 1st Apr 2023
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Anonymous
1st Apr 2023 10:15pm
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2nd Apr 2023 2:20pm
Thank you for your honest words, MrBlack. I'm pleased that my poem had such a positive effect on you. We all come from the source, and sooner or later will return to our point of origin. Even though humanity seems to have forgotten our shared path, our souls are connected to one another.
Anonymous
4th Apr 2023 1:02am
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4th Apr 2023 1:07am
Humanity's currently undergoing a renaissance into the new age of Aquarius. The background is filled with darkness, but that allows the light to become much more visible. Humanity's at a crossroad, and it's up to each individual to decide the path they want to take.
Anonymous
4th Apr 2023 1:13am
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4th Apr 2023 1:34am
My pleasure. It's wonderful to exchange words with a link-minded individual. I thank you again for your interest and enjoyment in reading my poem.
5th Apr 2023 5:55pm
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6th Apr 2023 2:31am
Hello, Daniel. What are DUP's rules regarding AIs? What do you expect me to do regarding this comment?
1st Apr 2023 11:43pm
There's such a deep appreciation and reverence, the breadth of which ticks off perfectly from line to well written line...The Imagery that sparks thoughts of power and strength are striking and enchanting, to me.
Love this Ode and found it incredibly enjoyable to read.
Thank you for sharing yourself with us, lovely lady
🌹-🐲
B
Love this Ode and found it incredibly enjoyable to read.
Thank you for sharing yourself with us, lovely lady
🌹-🐲
B
2nd Apr 2023 2:21pm
2nd Apr 2023 2:08pm
Dear LC,
I really enjoyed your poem. It reminds me to enjoy life in a more carefree and spirited manner. You provide beautiful imagery to help that commitment along. Lovely write. H🌷
I really enjoyed your poem. It reminds me to enjoy life in a more carefree and spirited manner. You provide beautiful imagery to help that commitment along. Lovely write. H🌷
2nd Apr 2023 2:22pm
Thank you for your honest words, Honoria. I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. True happiness is achieved from within.
6th Apr 2023 2:38am
6th Apr 2023 2:42am
16th Apr 2023 12:45pm
I like your ideas. They are very serious and deep. They agree with my ideas. Indeed, you have written what is considered as an eye-opener to me. I love your seriousness. J.Z.
17th Apr 2023 3:11am
