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Butterfly in the Storm
Butterfly in the Storm
Sometimes the rain burns and you drown in the sun,
Some days are so grey that you blank out everyone,
It’s hard to breathe when you feel nothing at all.
The Butterfly in the Storm.
Sorrow sits in the corner of some eyes,
a thin and false stretch gets added to those smiles,
Water the seed of strength inside.
The Butterfly in the Storm.
In the darkest moments of your life,
In the lowest of the lows, the struggles and the strife,
Look down at your feet, you are not alone,
Those are our footsteps beside you, your friends, your Bros.
You know we look up to you, and your crazy mad world,
But that’s' part of the charm, how legend status is earned. You are stronger than you think, you have overcome before, I’ve seen you move mountains, it’s time to restore...
I’ll fight for you, will you fight with me?
Climb up off the floor, get up off your knees,
Don’t give up, don’t give in, show the fight in the dog... Butterflies can weather the storm...
Sometimes the rain burns and you drown in the sun,
Some days are so grey that you blank out everyone,
It’s hard to breathe when you feel nothing at all.
The Butterfly in the Storm.
Sorrow sits in the corner of some eyes,
a thin and false stretch gets added to those smiles,
Water the seed of strength inside.
The Butterfly in the Storm.
In the darkest moments of your life,
In the lowest of the lows, the struggles and the strife,
Look down at your feet, you are not alone,
Those are our footsteps beside you, your friends, your Bros.
You know we look up to you, and your crazy mad world,
But that’s' part of the charm, how legend status is earned. You are stronger than you think, you have overcome before, I’ve seen you move mountains, it’s time to restore...
I’ll fight for you, will you fight with me?
Climb up off the floor, get up off your knees,
Don’t give up, don’t give in, show the fight in the dog... Butterflies can weather the storm...
Author's Note
My mates marriage broke down. It broke him completely. It pushed him to the brink. I felt pretty helpless. I wrote this song for him.
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Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 6:18pm
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 7:04pm
Thanks a million I_IS_ME, sound for giving a listen, I will check out your work shortly!
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 8:04pm
Just totally loved everything about this. That you would/could create something as lovely as this for a grieving friend just touches my heart in a profound way.
Truly great gift! Lovely write.
Truly great gift! Lovely write.
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Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 8:10pm
Jeez, I appreciate the kind words Mr. D, that means a lot, especially knowing the quality of your work, thank you very much.
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 8:19pm
This is such a beautiful gift to your mate. Production value of the video is great. Thanks for bringing your unique presence to the site.
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Re: Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 8:25pm
Thanks you very much Daniel. Thanks for giving my work a listen. I will repay the compliment shortly. And thanks a million for the kind words.
Re: Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 8:28pm
I make audio poems as well, without a sound studio, so I spend hours deleting little sounds out of the recordings lol spoken word and music lends wonderful dimensions to the writing. 💖🙏🏻
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Re: Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 8:34pm
Good stuff, I look forward to reading and listening to your work... I agree with the spoken word/ music combination, really adds to the atmosphere and allows one to crescendo the climax of the poem.
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 8:36pm
This is just incredible work. Truly resonant and deeply touching. Thank you for sharing!
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Re: Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 8:40pm
Why thank you very much, I'm honoured, I've read some of your work, you are class.
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 9:23pm
This is awesome! i've never seen stuff like this on this site. Great job!
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Re: Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 10:56pm
Hi ASD, thank you very much, I'm obviously new to the site and just finding my bearings, thanks for giving me a listen and sharing your thoughts.
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 9:46pm
This is a new experience for me, I don't stray far from the comfort of my lines, but I'm so glad I did.
I absolutely loved the visuals, the musical flow of it all ( beautiful lines) was brilliant, and echoing the others above, as the reason for it's creation is that much more meaningful.
Thanks for sharing
I absolutely loved the visuals, the musical flow of it all ( beautiful lines) was brilliant, and echoing the others above, as the reason for it's creation is that much more meaningful.
Thanks for sharing
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Re: Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 10:59pm
Thank you for those lovely remarks Kasai, I'm very humbled by the responses, thank you honestly, it means a lot.
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
Great job. I enjoy the extra step - they add value to your words. Loved it
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Re: Re. Butterfly in the Storm
4th Feb 2023 11:00pm
Thanks again for listening and sharing Everavalon, the response has honestly humbled me.
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
5th Feb 2023 5:24am
Always exciting to come across a new talent. Very impressive. Looking forward to more.
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Re. Butterfly in the Storm
5th Feb 2023 6:27am
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
5th Feb 2023 9:57am
Wow... this is excellent... in all of its artistic dimensions... welcome to DUP...
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Re: Re. Butterfly in the Storm
5th Feb 2023 10:39am
Thanks a million LilDragonFly, delighted that I stumbled on the site, great to read everyones poetry, yours being especially top notch, thanks for the comment.
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Anonymous
26th Feb 2023 10:01pm
Omg. Wow
Another 3 views then maybe a response
Remarkable
Another 3 views then maybe a response
Remarkable
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Anonymous
26th Feb 2023 10:06pm
I will just say this
Everytime I see a butterfly I say out loud no matter where I am or who I am with
"Hi Mom"
I am SO touched by this ❤❤❤❤
Everytime I see a butterfly I say out loud no matter where I am or who I am with
"Hi Mom"
I am SO touched by this ❤❤❤❤
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Re. Butterfly in the Storm
27th Feb 2023 7:37am
Hi LadyFancy,
Thanks for taking the time to throw an ear on my efforts.... glad you liked it. I appreciate your kind words. I will delve into your work on my next sit down!!
BITS
Thanks for taking the time to throw an ear on my efforts.... glad you liked it. I appreciate your kind words. I will delve into your work on my next sit down!!
BITS
Re. Butterfly in the Storm
27th Feb 2023 8:43am
Hi BITS,
Beautiful and lovely tribute to a friend. Love it! Keep doing what you do. Bless
Mel
Beautiful and lovely tribute to a friend. Love it! Keep doing what you do. Bless
Mel
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Re. Butterfly in the Storm
9th Dec 2023 4:39am
Re: Re. Butterfly in the Storm
21st Dec 2023 10:19pm
Hi Grace,
Thank you for your kind words...
If you only knew my doubts!! Imposter syndrome is alive and well in me.
Regards,
BITS
Thank you for your kind words...
If you only knew my doubts!! Imposter syndrome is alive and well in me.
Regards,
BITS
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21st Dec 2023 11:53pm