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Haiku/Senryu, Nr.10 — Strange Concept
Destroy the planet.
Replace with promises of
new technology.
Written by
Josh
(Joshua Bond)
Published 18th Jan 2023
| Edited 21st Oct 2023
Author's Note
Haiku/Senryu, Nr.09 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/462502-haiku-senryu-nr-08-history-repeat/
Haiku/Senryu, Nr 11 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/485727-haiku-senryu-nr-11----a-question-of/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/462502-haiku-senryu-nr-08-history-repeat/
Haiku/Senryu, Nr 11 can be found here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/485727-haiku-senryu-nr-11----a-question-of/
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Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
19th Jan 2023 3:25am
Dear J,
I don’t think this is a strange concept anymore. Feels more like the norm. Incredible observation and emerging truth in your poem, as per. Terrific write. H🌷
I don’t think this is a strange concept anymore. Feels more like the norm. Incredible observation and emerging truth in your poem, as per. Terrific write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
19th Jan 2023 5:54pm
Thank you H, I'm sure it's not a 'strange concept' to tech-giants; it's their main strategic goal. Having declared war on Nature centuries ago, I think they have forgotten that we are part of Nature. I object to the fall-out they are creating.
Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
19th Jan 2023 5:53am
Greed and myopic self interest have already begun our destruction.
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Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
19th Jan 2023 5:57pm
You are right Daniel, it seems Western Civilisation is in terminal decline and we happen to be living through it - as has been the experience of many before us when civilisations collapse. ("History repeats itself; no-one listens").
Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
To be amidst it and still, day by day, life goes on, we focus on our wellness, making the bills each month, aware of everything unraveling. It's so difficult to really accept the scale of it.
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Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
20th Jan 2023 8:31pm
"... life goes on ..." indeed, whilst all is unravelling before our eyes.
reminds me of Robert Frost, when intervewed in his late eighties, was asked what he had leaned about life. He replied "it goes on". So true.
reminds me of Robert Frost, when intervewed in his late eighties, was asked what he had leaned about life. He replied "it goes on". So true.
Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
19th Jan 2023 10:10am
Dear Josh,
Truth in this poem. Sadly, I don't think the technology will save us.
Truth in this poem. Sadly, I don't think the technology will save us.
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Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
19th Jan 2023 6:02pm
Hello Mel, thank you for commenting. And you are right. Technology will not save us from ourselves - that we have to do by facing our own trauma, karma and inner demons - easily enough to keep one busy for a whole lifetime. I hope you are doing well, and all the best for 2023.
Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
19th Jan 2023 10:18am
Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
I guess it can feel no longer strange when the big-tech media machine has 'sold' to the masses the idea that "technology is progress" no matter what, and that Technology will somehow magically save the situation - having largely created it in the first place. Thank you for commenting, best regards, Josh.
Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
22nd Jan 2023 11:42pm
Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu Nr.10 — Strange Concept
22nd Jan 2023 11:55pm
Hello Rory ... and thank you for commenting.
The ideology of "Technology = Progress" is deeply embedded in the Western psyche ... and if you question it you get labelled a conspiracy theorist. Best rgards, Josh.
The ideology of "Technology = Progress" is deeply embedded in the Western psyche ... and if you question it you get labelled a conspiracy theorist. Best rgards, Josh.
Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.10 — Strange Concept
28th Jan 2023 8:45pm
Every sign in today's world seems to point toward it.
Thought provoking spill.
Thought provoking spill.
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Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.10 — Strange Concept
29th Jan 2023 8:46am
Thank you Wally. It seems that in the past, other cultures subsumed technology as 'in the service of' and 'co-operating with' Nature. But the last 500 years it has been to dominate Nature, making a hell of a mess. And also forgetting that an attempt to dominate Nature goes hand-in-hand with an attempt to dominate humans since we humans are part of Nature - (that's my theory anyway this Sunday morning).
All the best for 2023, Josh.
All the best for 2023, Josh.
Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.10 — Strange Concept
24th Feb 2023 12:28pm
Well that struck a deep cord inside my soul. At the same time it's like a bully punched my gut.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.10 — Strange Concept
24th Feb 2023 7:09pm
Thank you LJ. I hope I can take your reaction as a good sign :))
After all it was Emily Dickkenson who said "If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry"
After all it was Emily Dickkenson who said "If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry"
Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.10 — Strange Concept
21st May 2023 2:26pm
Re: Re. Haiku/Senryu, Nr.10 — Strange Concept
24th May 2023 2:14pm
'fraid so. And thank you for the RL.
If you are interested in a well-written article on AI/technology, this one by Naomi Klein I found to be excellent.
https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2023/may/08/ai-machines-hallucinating-naomi-klein
If you are interested in a well-written article on AI/technology, this one by Naomi Klein I found to be excellent.
https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2023/may/08/ai-machines-hallucinating-naomi-klein