Like Water

glad your mot drowning

kind of stuff ive been writing myself but dont post id weigh everyone down lol

It’s good catharsis :)

Thank you for reading, and for the RL, it’s good to see you here!  

Seems like a therapeutic way to purge, we should all do that. Maybe just a little antiseptic on a thorn.
Thanks for sharing;)

Thank you so much for reading!

Your figures of speech are so suggestive, so impressive,
i love your style.

Thank you so much!

Water is a really good metaphor for mental health. You write this well and admire the economical style. The capture too, of how water can offer salvation & redemption. Rob

Thank you so much for reading, and for your kind words.

I’m still learning how to live
Not despite,
Alongside -

There’s such depth in this verse. This poem sums up living with bipolar with such strength. Loved it

Thank you so much for reading and for seeing me.

Thank you so very much, Rianne!

Sounds like a poem of rebalancing syntropy & entropy, yin & yang, centrifugal & centripetal, breathing in & breathing out ...  I'm glad you're not drowning; tomorrow will gift a new vista with water's memory in your soul.

Thank you so much, Josh!

I love this :) Very nice writing and I relate to it with my own struggles in this area. Enjoyed very much

Thank you so much for reading!

You give from such honest intention that it's immediately warm and open. Even our struggles are beautiful in the courage of sharing them. Your audios are steadily improving. I love how you maintained the elemental theme and metaphor throughout the dimensions of the write and audio pairing.

Thank you, Daniel 💖

I still get soaked but at least I'm not drowning... What a way to close this spill.
I feel like it's resignation to the turmoil but not really. I feel overwhelmed but not overpowered.
The final line is a powerful and poignant conclusion, providing a sense of hope and determination in the face of difficulty.

This has become one of my go to listen-ins. Thank you.

Love
NuBorn

Overwhelmed but not overpowered, I really love that.  Thank you so much for your kind words and for finding resonance here.  

I hear this, listening on repeat and each thought rising, is welcomed, pulled alongside the river bank from it's multitude of different scenes..

The highest praise a writer can receive, thank you so much 💖

Beautifully written.

if I can direct that flow
somewhere oddly specific
anywhere but inward
then, can I hope?

I identify with this stanza so much. Well stated. I completely relate to this write. Thank you for sharing. Bless:)
Mel

Thank you so very much!

"I still get soaked
but at least I’m not drowning"
I like the resonance the visual and emotional pouring.
Wonderful spoken word Luna.