Falling Stars

hello beautiful one this is so lovely ❤️

Hi Crimsin:)

I was in that zone lovely:)
Had to post it!
So happy you enjoyed.

Thanks for stopping by and the RL!!

I agree! lovely!
Stay in the zone!

Hi NG!!

It feels good right?
The love zone.
I'll take it where I can get it! LOL

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We simply love your writing, you don't rush selecting quality over quantity. Tight write you

Well now Meme - that is the best comment I have ever
received from you - and it's heart felt:)

Thank you so much because
I'm a huge fan of your writing as well!!

Hello You!!

I'm so happy you enjoyed this.
Wasn't sure if it was finished so I appreciate the encouragement
to post it as is. You're a great friend and writer so thank you!!

Had to think for a minute IMHO?
Then I figured it out!! hahahaha

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Woop Woop!!

Wonderful work...

Hi Cipher!!

So glad you enjoyed my Falling Stars buddy:)
Wanted it to come across like people who
are falling in love.
Hope I got it!!

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Hi Rianne,

Thank you! What a wonderful comment:)
Metric is one of my all time favorite bands.
The whole album is good if you liked the song.
Emily Haines is one of my all time favorite songwriters.
I love how creative she is with her lyrics and she's 5 1" like me!!! LOL

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Dear A,

It’s always a good and right time to write about love. It lifts the soul and makes life worth living. Unless there’s a sale at Bergdorf’s. Then all bets are off…😉
I loved the rebellion in stanza three. Love has no boundaries or time line. Delightful write. H🌷

There's my girl H!!

Love is that double edged sword!!
Sometimes you just gotta say F*** it and go for it. hahah
Hope for the best!

When I see falling stars it looks like they are being thrown
from the sky to me. So I wanted to blend that thought into
this write. It's my favorite stanza too:)

So happy to see ya amiga
Thanks for the RL and stopping by:)

I found it captivating from the opening stanza, which drew me into an image as of a falling star in the sky, leaving behind a glowing dust trail, a sense of motion and trajectory, that I immediately begin to consider from an emotional perspective. The metaphors follow this emotional course of starlight in the throws of passion, which I think goes deeply into the process of being and loving, for me it was like a powerful light energy. Beautifully struck I think.

Hi Daniel,

So happy you found this captivating. What a beautiful comment!
Yes - I wanted it to look and feel like the stars were people falling
to their loved one from the sky. Searching for their other half
and being struck with star lightening.  hahaha

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Now thats a love poem !

Crisp and celestial
No filler
Full throttle

Damn

BIG LIKE

Hi PS

So you caught the full throttle falling stars huh!
I love that!
I even got a damn from ya!
Which gave me a big toothy smile:)
So happy you enjoyed this.

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So beautiful Adel.
Following the trail of falling stars.
That collision is so euphoric, addicting.
Snorting lust from star dust, I love it.
Always refusing to behave,
because the sheer rush of love is what we need. ;)
Oh those spears of destiny that impale...
You definitely sent my mind somewhere with that. lol
Your shine is so brilliant.
Someone would be very lucky for you to keep them close. :)
I know that would be very addictive.
A beautiful expression of love...
The imagery reflects your beauty, playfulness, and seduction so well.

Hi Kristina:)

I love your poetry but your comments are
just as amazing chica:)

You had me snicker with your take on the
spears of destiny! hahaha
It's only fair since your poetry sends me places too!!

You know that feeling when it's all going good.
Wanting to talk all the time
Trying not to be too intrusive but you can't
help but be a pain in the ass and send messages anyway!

I love this comment,
You got it!!

Thanks for stopping by and the RL lovely one:)

Hmmm.  Something about seeing you write under the "love poem" category.  You belong in it.  And how you made this write "celestial", shows that you are looking up, and holding a high standard to what it is you value.  
BTW, Wonder Woman doesn't use a spear to impale. She uses a lasso to snare.  Just saying.  Maybe she's squeamish about blood?  Or she's nice about the capture.

This write of yours makes me smile.  Do more along this theme.

Hi Styx:)

Awh -  thanks for saying that. Was feeling in a mood so I went
with it. We should all have high standards with love. It's a beautiful thing - just like falling stars:)

BTW, Wonder Woman uses her lasso to get people to tell the truth!!
It's literally called Lasso of Truth. hahaha
And what happened to Magnificent Woman? How quickly they
forget!!  LOL

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Are hearts become one when we burning with passion.  Keep on writing.

Hey Sisco!

Ah yes - the merging of burning passionate hearts!
Well said amigo:)

Strike while you're losing your infinity. Correct call! 🤣

Hey Billy!

As everyone should do!! hahaha
Before it's all gone!

Thanks for stopping by. LOL

there is something so reverent about this poem. penitent and pure. this was deeply felt.

Hi Adagios

So sorry it took me so long to respond to your comment.
I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for this
amazing comment:)

Stunning, I can feel your heart shooting across the sky x

Hey you!

Thank you for checking this out. I would love to shoot
across the sky. I bet if feels exhilarating!!

Thanks for stopping by buddy:)
Sorry it took me so long to repy to this.
It's been a crazy month!

Oh my.. that 2nd stanza is lovely.  Nice piece Adelphina.

LJ

Hi LJ

I'm so happy you enjoyed reading this.
i was in a romantic mood so I let my feelings
lead with this. So happy you enjoyed!!