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My Niece and Her Coffee Date
So so afraid of love
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
Author's Note
Fiction write. I only have nephews.
Conceptual
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Re. My Niece
Anonymous
27th Dec 2022 1:35pm
Coming back with adequate comment so don't yell at me for RL'n and not speaking. I got excited LOL
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27th Dec 2022 1:38pm
Re. My Niece
Anonymous
27th Dec 2022 2:52pm
Nothing wrong with a good cup of coffee and jumping head first into exploring possibilities of lust and love. It's the twinkle that will get him
Paused to comment because I needed to resist, yet again, calling you a poet. This was fantastic
(Resist and you do not belong in the same sentence either)
Paused to comment because I needed to resist, yet again, calling you a poet. This was fantastic
(Resist and you do not belong in the same sentence either)
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Re: Re. My Niece
27th Dec 2022 3:05pm
This was a combination of a lot of ideas on dating and attraction....
Took a chance with something different for me.
Thx LF !
Took a chance with something different for me.
Thx LF !
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
27th Dec 2022 5:28pm
You would be an interesting uncle.
I like this dip into imaginary material. Sweet relationship you've conjured, in very few words.
❤️k
I like this dip into imaginary material. Sweet relationship you've conjured, in very few words.
❤️k
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Re: Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
27th Dec 2022 5:41pm
Popped out of nowhere
Though there was inspiration from my own past somewhere in there
Thx k
❤️
Though there was inspiration from my own past somewhere in there
Thx k
❤️
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
28th Dec 2022 00:29am
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28th Dec 2022 00:38am
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28th Dec 2022 00:39am
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28th Dec 2022 00:50am
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
28th Dec 2022 9:37am
Re: Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
Two nephews here
Good guys with good careers and family
Just mixing up my writing for fun a change of pace
Thx DC
Good guys with good careers and family
Just mixing up my writing for fun a change of pace
Thx DC
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
29th Dec 2022 00:57am
Ooh. I was just beginning to think that he must be a special person to make her twinkle like that... only to discover that he's fictional. A nice piece, even though you teased us a bit with that!
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Re: Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
29th Dec 2022 1:04am
I was teasing someone on here and one thing led to another and a poem was born. No regrets, I kind of think it worked.
BIG THANKS ELLIE
BIG THANKS ELLIE
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
29th Dec 2022 2:25am
I like the sincerity in this conversation, bringing out the logical side of emotions in order to grow.
BIG LIKE.
BIG LIKE.
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Re: Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
It's fiction based on fact
We have all had the conversation whether giving or getting
Appreciate Wally
We have all had the conversation whether giving or getting
Appreciate Wally
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
29th Dec 2022 11:25am
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29th Dec 2022 11:43am
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
29th Dec 2022 4:07pm
Very interesting self reflection and contemplative piece.
That fear of love is so easily overcome with a niece.
It's not the commitment of a daughter but perhaps it feels that way.
And you allow yourself to feel that way.
There is just something really loving about this piece.
It's filled with admiration and this kind of playful interaction.
Where it's the niece who is teaching you to love...
That fear of love is so easily overcome with a niece.
It's not the commitment of a daughter but perhaps it feels that way.
And you allow yourself to feel that way.
There is just something really loving about this piece.
It's filled with admiration and this kind of playful interaction.
Where it's the niece who is teaching you to love...
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Re: Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
29th Dec 2022 4:16pm
This write was borne out of so many emotions.
Not something I ever could have imagined writing.
Yet when I started it, like so many like it, it wrote itself.
Yes, the Uncle relationship is one I know well.
It's an honor to have that trust from a family member but not being the parent. I think I do it well.
There's always something to learn about love and wisdom.
Your comment warms me Kx
That doesn't surprise me
Thanks 💥!
Not something I ever could have imagined writing.
Yet when I started it, like so many like it, it wrote itself.
Yes, the Uncle relationship is one I know well.
It's an honor to have that trust from a family member but not being the parent. I think I do it well.
There's always something to learn about love and wisdom.
Your comment warms me Kx
That doesn't surprise me
Thanks 💥!
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
30th Dec 2022 6:35am
Poet,
I love the coffee connotations in the title right off the bat.
BREWtiful write brother.
Who doesn't PERK up when one gets to read some PoetSpeak Love Poetry.
Seriously brother your short and sweet writes are truly compelling.
I love seeing your poetic versatility on full display Poet.
As a big coffee guy myself I must confess that I love seeing a bad ass like you ''Spilling the Beans''
and exposing his sensitive side through poetry.
Big Like!
I love the coffee connotations in the title right off the bat.
BREWtiful write brother.
Who doesn't PERK up when one gets to read some PoetSpeak Love Poetry.
Seriously brother your short and sweet writes are truly compelling.
I love seeing your poetic versatility on full display Poet.
As a big coffee guy myself I must confess that I love seeing a bad ass like you ''Spilling the Beans''
and exposing his sensitive side through poetry.
Big Like!
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Re: Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
30th Dec 2022 11:15am
FEET !
You're back brother !
I was just thinking about you last night when I saw a comment by you on another poet and I checked your profile to see the last time you were on and then here you are with this awesome comment !
This is a WOW !
Many thanks for your kind words. If you give me a situation and it's compelling there's a good chance I can give you a poem.
There is something magical about strangers meeting for the first time over a cup of coffee. Anything can happen and it's no harm,no foul if it doesn't. It's just a cup of coffee.
I hope you will stick around. We need you back.
Happy New Year FEET
BIG THANKS
You're back brother !
I was just thinking about you last night when I saw a comment by you on another poet and I checked your profile to see the last time you were on and then here you are with this awesome comment !
This is a WOW !
Many thanks for your kind words. If you give me a situation and it's compelling there's a good chance I can give you a poem.
There is something magical about strangers meeting for the first time over a cup of coffee. Anything can happen and it's no harm,no foul if it doesn't. It's just a cup of coffee.
I hope you will stick around. We need you back.
Happy New Year FEET
BIG THANKS
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
30th Dec 2022 11:07am
Dear PS,
Sweet and touching. I enjoyed the aspect of the relationship, real and imagined. There is nothing greater than being available for someone to share their hopes with and know it’s okay to do so. Lovely write. H🌷
Sweet and touching. I enjoyed the aspect of the relationship, real and imagined. There is nothing greater than being available for someone to share their hopes with and know it’s okay to do so. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
30th Dec 2022 11:35am
Dear H,
I went on many of these dates when I was searching way back when.
Often they were pleasant but no sparks. Ironically around the same time I realized that the women I was going after constantly were never going to work out. So I gave up looking. Went through a lonely time and tried again. I ended up meeting G who would later become my wife. That was 35 years ago. On that date we sat and talked and had soup at the Oyster Bar at Grand Central. We must have been there for 2 hours. Then we parted. I remember we dated the old fashioned way for 3 months before anything really happened. It was so unusual for me but a true and true way to get to know someone.
We just adopted a dog 2 days ago. A sweet hound mix 5 years old in need of a home. Relationships come in all shapes and sizes. We never had kids but we always connected around dogs. What can I say ? I guess I said it...
Thanks H
Happy 2023
I went on many of these dates when I was searching way back when.
Often they were pleasant but no sparks. Ironically around the same time I realized that the women I was going after constantly were never going to work out. So I gave up looking. Went through a lonely time and tried again. I ended up meeting G who would later become my wife. That was 35 years ago. On that date we sat and talked and had soup at the Oyster Bar at Grand Central. We must have been there for 2 hours. Then we parted. I remember we dated the old fashioned way for 3 months before anything really happened. It was so unusual for me but a true and true way to get to know someone.
We just adopted a dog 2 days ago. A sweet hound mix 5 years old in need of a home. Relationships come in all shapes and sizes. We never had kids but we always connected around dogs. What can I say ? I guess I said it...
Thanks H
Happy 2023
Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
2nd Jan 2023 1:33am
I agree with "her", seems to be the right approach!
Happy New year to y'all and your doggy!
Happy New year to y'all and your doggy!
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Re: Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
2nd Jan 2023 1:41am
Take it slow, right ?
My hound is awesome. She really needed a good home with security and now has it . I will give her my beer from you Styx
Happy 2023
My hound is awesome. She really needed a good home with security and now has it . I will give her my beer from you Styx
Happy 2023
Re: Re. My Niece and Her Coffee Date
2nd Jan 2023 1:50am
Just keep her away from poinsettias! They're poisonous to pets.
I'm sure not everyone agrees for themselves, but I'm a slow burn type. Yet once all is deemed well, it's a fire now!
I'm sure not everyone agrees for themselves, but I'm a slow burn type. Yet once all is deemed well, it's a fire now!
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2nd Jan 2023 1:56am