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It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
Paint me a picture damnit!
Make it shine so I can see it in the dark.
No pressure, just a black hole crushing your soul.
Pulling you into my intensity. It's my physics...
Man, I love it when you hit me hard
Command me to do shit
I need to be pushed around sometimes
My head is locked between your thighs
Only when you beg me to
And I love telling you what to do
But you love to push me so hard don’t you?
You aren’t getting loose until I let you
Don't let me up
Squeeze harder
Artists need to suffer
Pain to pleasure to greatness
I will never let up because I need it
To be squeezed harder, to squeeze harder
Knowing how much artists must suffer
It’s the pain that fuels the passion
There's no middle with you
We work each other bombastic
Deconstructed, stripped down
Passionate pain that's rebirth
You know how I only work in extremes
Now that’s just going to get you hurt
My LEGO sets are made of bones
I can always put you back together again
Extremes brought me to you
Was wary till you bit my shoulder
Learned to love your excommunication
That's the last time I put gum in your hair
It’s the intensity of passion that attracts
Biting when excited is your fault not mine
They wouldn’t let me near the pope damnit!
You are going to burn in hell for that
Make it shine so I can see it in the dark.
No pressure, just a black hole crushing your soul.
Pulling you into my intensity. It's my physics...
Man, I love it when you hit me hard
Command me to do shit
I need to be pushed around sometimes
My head is locked between your thighs
Only when you beg me to
And I love telling you what to do
But you love to push me so hard don’t you?
You aren’t getting loose until I let you
Don't let me up
Squeeze harder
Artists need to suffer
Pain to pleasure to greatness
I will never let up because I need it
To be squeezed harder, to squeeze harder
Knowing how much artists must suffer
It’s the pain that fuels the passion
There's no middle with you
We work each other bombastic
Deconstructed, stripped down
Passionate pain that's rebirth
You know how I only work in extremes
Now that’s just going to get you hurt
My LEGO sets are made of bones
I can always put you back together again
Extremes brought me to you
Was wary till you bit my shoulder
Learned to love your excommunication
That's the last time I put gum in your hair
It’s the intensity of passion that attracts
Biting when excited is your fault not mine
They wouldn’t let me near the pope damnit!
You are going to burn in hell for that
Author's Note
This is my first collaboration with KristinaX since our Black Swans series a awhile back.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
8th Nov 2022 8:29pm
Damn right it's the last time...
What could be more horrible.
You just like getting hurt. * kick *
Maybe I should ignore you, that would be better.
So is my painting done yet? you owe me damnit!
The one that shines in the dark...
Still crushing your soul with my intensity.
Nothing can get lose from my thights. :p
Artists definitely need to suffer.
So I must be an artist too then.
Pain to pleasure to greatness, absolutely.
Definitely the pain that fuels the passion.
Always squeezing harder...
Not sure about the word bombastic. lol
But deconstructed, stripped down... definitely.
So many contrasts and extremes.
I love LEGOS made of bone.
Putting things back together again is fun.
And if you are wary then...
Biting the shoulder works every time.
But NEVER put gum in the hair.
There is a special place in hell for that.
And why do they keep telling me the Vatican is closed? Sad face.
What could be more horrible.
You just like getting hurt. * kick *
Maybe I should ignore you, that would be better.
So is my painting done yet? you owe me damnit!
The one that shines in the dark...
Still crushing your soul with my intensity.
Nothing can get lose from my thights. :p
Artists definitely need to suffer.
So I must be an artist too then.
Pain to pleasure to greatness, absolutely.
Definitely the pain that fuels the passion.
Always squeezing harder...
Not sure about the word bombastic. lol
But deconstructed, stripped down... definitely.
So many contrasts and extremes.
I love LEGOS made of bone.
Putting things back together again is fun.
And if you are wary then...
Biting the shoulder works every time.
But NEVER put gum in the hair.
There is a special place in hell for that.
And why do they keep telling me the Vatican is closed? Sad face.
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No wonder we stopped doing these.
It’s like a car wreck every time.
If that’s not bad enough you mirror me into a psych ward
People have the wrong impression of us.
Yeah yeah, I’ve heard the rumors
Everyone knows I’m vapor fucking …..
Whatever
You have to stop begging me to write with you.
You’re all sweet and sexy and doe eyed and then BOOM, right between my eyes
Well at least I was between your thighs until you sliced and diced me.
Blood and vampires, that’s all you crave
My shoulder hurts
It’s getting dark in here
Fading
Where’s that ambulance
Code Red
It’s like a car wreck every time.
If that’s not bad enough you mirror me into a psych ward
People have the wrong impression of us.
Yeah yeah, I’ve heard the rumors
Everyone knows I’m vapor fucking …..
Whatever
You have to stop begging me to write with you.
You’re all sweet and sexy and doe eyed and then BOOM, right between my eyes
Well at least I was between your thighs until you sliced and diced me.
Blood and vampires, that’s all you crave
My shoulder hurts
It’s getting dark in here
Fading
Where’s that ambulance
Code Red
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8th Nov 2022 8:39pm
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Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
8th Nov 2022 9:06pm
You're right about that Jay
You are what you eat
When she sees me coming towards her chewing a big wad of bubble gum there's real fear in her eyes. And mark my words KristinaX isn't afraid of much. She scares the crap out of me but she's right, I kinda love it.
BIG THANKS
You are what you eat
When she sees me coming towards her chewing a big wad of bubble gum there's real fear in her eyes. And mark my words KristinaX isn't afraid of much. She scares the crap out of me but she's right, I kinda love it.
BIG THANKS
Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
9th Nov 2022 00:45am
I hate bubble gum. lol I have nightmares about it.
Or the people in my dreams have nightmares about it.
Because of what I am doing to them. lol
Jelly A/F... AWW that's so cute... Take back that j/k damnit!
Or the people in my dreams have nightmares about it.
Because of what I am doing to them. lol
Jelly A/F... AWW that's so cute... Take back that j/k damnit!
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Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
8th Nov 2022 11:05pm
Playfully hedonistic spill. Dig deep into that trench PS and make sure to keep that bayonet firmly fixed.
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Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
You know it Rob
Above or below ground she's lightning striking twice.
Would be pretty good in that foxhole though ....
Above or below ground she's lightning striking twice.
Would be pretty good in that foxhole though ....
Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
9th Nov 2022 00:46am
Gee thanks Rob. Keep that bayonet firmly fixed. lol
You are supposed to be on my side. You know where I hid the bodies damnit!
Gum in the hair is a cardinal sin... Very deserving of death if you ask me. Especially in long hair... ugh!
You are supposed to be on my side. You know where I hid the bodies damnit!
Gum in the hair is a cardinal sin... Very deserving of death if you ask me. Especially in long hair... ugh!
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Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
8th Nov 2022 11:09pm
Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
8th Nov 2022 11:29pm
I gave Kx her own room in the Chamber
First cum first served too
She always cums first
Code word: Hitachi
First cum first served too
She always cums first
Code word: Hitachi
Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
9th Nov 2022 00:47am
I own the chamber. My own room my ass. tsk tsk.
I do love an intense workout... I need that and often... ;)
I do love an intense workout... I need that and often... ;)
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Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
You and Ms KirstinaX work well together. You need to give Ms KristinaX orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing both of you.
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Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
9th Nov 2022 00:32am
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9th Nov 2022 4:14pm
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Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
9th Nov 2022 4:19pm
That's a WOW COMMENT
Appreciate your praise Ted
It was a fun one to write and went through a lot of collaboration to get it right. We were both pleased with the outcome.
Your comment means a lot to me.
Thank you Ted
Appreciate your praise Ted
It was a fun one to write and went through a lot of collaboration to get it right. We were both pleased with the outcome.
Your comment means a lot to me.
Thank you Ted
Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
9th Nov 2022 4:22pm
Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
10th Nov 2022 2:57am
This brings me a memory of when I went to the movies with my friends. We were in middle school - and we had our own section in the balcony. I was minding my own business and I feel a wham against my head. And a few of my guy friends at the time ran off. I had really long hair back then - and you guessed it. It was a huge wad of gum. The bazooka pink gum. Must have been two pieces. Talk about a nightmare!!!
Apparently when guys pick on you at that age it means they like you? Ughhh
I found out who did it and quit sitting with him during lunch. LOL
Innocent times back then -
so opposite from this smoking piece. hahaha
Great collaboration guys - you two have a special chemistry that is unique to the two of you:)
Carry on!!
Apparently when guys pick on you at that age it means they like you? Ughhh
I found out who did it and quit sitting with him during lunch. LOL
Innocent times back then -
so opposite from this smoking piece. hahaha
Great collaboration guys - you two have a special chemistry that is unique to the two of you:)
Carry on!!
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Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
10th Nov 2022 3:08am
You mean this stuff happens in real life ??
I only kid Kristina about this because she has such beautiful wavy hair and is a bit of a smart ass. She'll probably try to kick me now lol.
I hope you got revenge on those cretins.
This was a fun one to write and we wanted to do one for awhile so this came together pretty smoothly.
Appreciate the comment Hot Sauce 🔥
You're getting a nice response on your poems lately
Respect
BIG THANKS
🤠
I only kid Kristina about this because she has such beautiful wavy hair and is a bit of a smart ass. She'll probably try to kick me now lol.
I hope you got revenge on those cretins.
This was a fun one to write and we wanted to do one for awhile so this came together pretty smoothly.
Appreciate the comment Hot Sauce 🔥
You're getting a nice response on your poems lately
Respect
BIG THANKS
🤠
Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
11th Nov 2022 00:58am
Wow! I didn't see this one coming! Are you trying to outdo Mr. Sawyer or what with this co-write? Great erotic collab. I think I can partly guess who wrote what, PoetSpeak. I think you were the one concerned with getting chewing gum in KristinaX's hair & KristinaX probably said, 'That's just gonna get you hurt!' Lol. I really don't know to be honest. It feels rather seamless to me in the sense that you're both as bad as each other, in a good way, of course. Well done though. This is excellent.
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Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
11th Nov 2022 1:03am
Yes, Billy, you're spot on !
Putting gum in her long beautiful mane is risky business.
Only I would be crazy enough to even suggest it.
Probably a mistake on my part but thats how our dynamic rolls sometimes. Risk, reward, or murder ....
She's one tough broad and great to collaborate with ...
Appreciate the nod Billy
Thanks
Putting gum in her long beautiful mane is risky business.
Only I would be crazy enough to even suggest it.
Probably a mistake on my part but thats how our dynamic rolls sometimes. Risk, reward, or murder ....
She's one tough broad and great to collaborate with ...
Appreciate the nod Billy
Thanks
Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
18th Nov 2022 6:30pm
It's always interesting when two people with different backgrounds and experiences collaborate to make something so unique, funny and entertaining.
No filters needed, just that raw energy you both produce, it's pretty damn electrifying.
Outstanding work.
No filters needed, just that raw energy you both produce, it's pretty damn electrifying.
Outstanding work.
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Re: Re. It's the Last Time I'll put Gum in your Hair with KristinaX
We had a good time writing this one and I don’t have to tell you that putting gum in Kristina’s hair could be a death wish !!
You don’t want to piss her off, believe me
Thanks Wally
Appreciate the comment and RL
You don’t want to piss her off, believe me
Thanks Wally
Appreciate the comment and RL