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Love So Deep

Lying lonely in this grave,
it's too late my soul to save,
For Ravens flock and fly around,
just to hear my lonely sounds,
 
Claustrophobic in the ground,
Darkness clothes me all around,
Many souls do lurk above,
The ones who didn't praise God enough,
 
But Why am I still here alone?
Because evil in my heart had grown,
Jealousy and greed did follow,
Because of them my heart is hallow,
 
Punished with my guilt and shame,
Only I can feel my pain,
No one else to care but me,
Will God have pity on thee?
 
For what I did was wrong,
But in doing it was right,
It didn't take me very long  
To take a life that night,
 
That life I took was minute in that hour,
For my wife was taken with nasty power,
Sorry im not but sad am I,
For she is gone up to the sky,
 
My sacrifice was without measure,
For my wife was my greatest treasure,
Our love still strong through space and time,
Forever she'll live deep in my mind
Written by Sapphirewolf
Published | Edited 1st Apr 2023
Author's Note
No inspiration I just start thinking at random and this is what was made. This did not happen to me or anyone I know.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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