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cool breeze by the window
cajole
flatter
fill the void
of your emptiness
favorite song on the radio
a cool breeze by the window
the first glow of libation
a scent of yesterday's cologne
vibe, sensation, city life
wearing black till the brink
your deacon of passion
bringing it all back home
for you ....
flatter
fill the void
of your emptiness
favorite song on the radio
a cool breeze by the window
the first glow of libation
a scent of yesterday's cologne
vibe, sensation, city life
wearing black till the brink
your deacon of passion
bringing it all back home
for you ....
Author's Note
Redux ..... my beginnings
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 1:21am
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23rd Sep 2022 2:12am
Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 1:28am
The second stanza took us back to a time we lived exactly like that, work, home, and then to our window. That neighborhood got like crazy bad we really had to relocate. This piece and that pic are kinda like a hearty favorite stew, comforting things. Tight work dude oh yeah did you paint the pic
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Re: Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 2:15am
Yes, the painting is mine.
It's kind of an autumn stew
Lots of burnt leaves and quality single barrel bourbon
City Life always entertains ....
Thx
It's kind of an autumn stew
Lots of burnt leaves and quality single barrel bourbon
City Life always entertains ....
Thx
Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 1:36am
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23rd Sep 2022 2:17am
This poem goes way back to my poetry beginnings
I like to re-examine it in the fall
You're too kind Brenda
Im just a guy with a pen
❤
I like to re-examine it in the fall
You're too kind Brenda
Im just a guy with a pen
❤
Re: Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 3:56am
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23rd Sep 2022 4:03am
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23rd Sep 2022 4:15am
I made Thai peanut sauce with chicken tonight for the first time it was quite good...I love when you let us get to see parts of your life ❤️
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23rd Sep 2022 12:03pm
I eat a lot of chicken, probably too much
Will be growing feathers soon.
Your dish sounds delicious
Hope all enjoyed it.
Thx Brenda ❤
Will be growing feathers soon.
Your dish sounds delicious
Hope all enjoyed it.
Thx Brenda ❤
Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 1:52am
Fall is the best season. Cool vibes, scent of death, red leaves...
❤️k
❤️k
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Re: Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 2:19am
Hopefully no scent of death but merino wool sweaters and vivid colors. Lots of Orange, my favorite....
Thx k
🤠🧡
Thx k
🤠🧡
Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 6:08am
Dear PS,
Nailed it. Everything about this piece captures the change of season, romance, cool evenings. Beautiful write and painting. H🌷
Nailed it. Everything about this piece captures the change of season, romance, cool evenings. Beautiful write and painting. H🌷
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Re: Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 12:06pm
Dezr H,
Can't deny autumn it's time
I'm ready for less heat
At least that kind of heat.
This was one of my first poems.
I like to show it off in early autumn
Thx,
PS
🤠🧡
Can't deny autumn it's time
I'm ready for less heat
At least that kind of heat.
This was one of my first poems.
I like to show it off in early autumn
Thx,
PS
🤠🧡
Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 12:59pm
cutting and honest.
"a scent of yesterday's cologne" is a brillant line.
james
"a scent of yesterday's cologne" is a brillant line.
james
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Re: Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 1:10pm
An early poem of mine I brought back
There are certain cologne scents that play well the next day
Faint reminders
Appreciate your comment and RL add !
Thanks James
There are certain cologne scents that play well the next day
Faint reminders
Appreciate your comment and RL add !
Thanks James
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23rd Sep 2022 2:11pm
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Re: Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 2:25pm
I appreciate your comment greatly.
This is an older poem I bring out at the start of autumn.
It was an early poem of mine. I think my best writing came at the beginning of this journey so it's nice to get your praise. The painting is very recent so it was good to merge them.
Thanks so much Steve
Appreciate
This is an older poem I bring out at the start of autumn.
It was an early poem of mine. I think my best writing came at the beginning of this journey so it's nice to get your praise. The painting is very recent so it was good to merge them.
Thanks so much Steve
Appreciate
Re. cool breeze by the window
Love the wistful feel in this piece.... There is certain calmness and a hint of reflective mood which I find appealing... And yes, a very beautiful painting ❤
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Re. cool breeze by the window
23rd Sep 2022 9:34pm
It's a special poem to me
Written several years ago when I first started writing poetry.
At the time I didn't see myself as a poet and probably still don't, I think in a sense I do narrative writing.
I very much appreciate your comment....
Thank you
Written several years ago when I first started writing poetry.
At the time I didn't see myself as a poet and probably still don't, I think in a sense I do narrative writing.
I very much appreciate your comment....
Thank you
Re. cool breeze by the window
While reading this, scotch neat in left hand, I am feeling the breeze dance across my skin tickling me, due to Im outside enjoying this beautiful fall weather with some sexy ass poetry. love this, love you. <3
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24th Sep 2022 1:17am
I'll be doing some bourbon soon
The cool breeze intact
Thx for your love
Always..x
The cool breeze intact
Thx for your love
Always..x
Re. cool breeze by the window
24th Sep 2022 1:08am
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24th Sep 2022 1:18am
Re. cool breeze by the window
24th Sep 2022 4:08am
Hey PS:)
Love all the carefully chosen words in this.
The first glow of liberation!!
I'm feeling that line right now.
For me this has a urban vibe feel to this.
Alone and anticipating arriving home:)
Love the art!!!
great color scheme
Love all the carefully chosen words in this.
The first glow of liberation!!
I'm feeling that line right now.
For me this has a urban vibe feel to this.
Alone and anticipating arriving home:)
Love the art!!!
great color scheme
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Re: Re. cool breeze by the window
24th Sep 2022 4:14am
Yo Hot Sauce,
Yes, definitely an urban scrawl ..
An older poem of mine merged with new art !
You're rocking those stripes Adel, Wowsa
Thx kid
Yes, definitely an urban scrawl ..
An older poem of mine merged with new art !
You're rocking those stripes Adel, Wowsa
Thx kid
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24th Sep 2022 4:17am
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24th Sep 2022 4:21am