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Tension Moist
These Lips
Your mouth
The romance that thinks
out loud or in hushed tones
Sitting on the veranda
Sipping tea, my arm around you
Picking up your wild mane
Grazing your neck ever so slightly
Romance
Connection
Electricity
Tension moist in the collected air
Your mouth
The romance that thinks
out loud or in hushed tones
Sitting on the veranda
Sipping tea, my arm around you
Picking up your wild mane
Grazing your neck ever so slightly
Romance
Connection
Electricity
Tension moist in the collected air
Author's Note
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Re. Tension Moist
25th Sep 2022 00:05am
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25th Sep 2022 00:25am
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25th Sep 2022 00:10am
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I've always been a romantic, other stuff gets in the way sometimes..
Yeah, glad you got a laugh on the note !
Thx Steve
Yeah, glad you got a laugh on the note !
Thx Steve
Re. Tension Moist
25th Sep 2022 00:48am
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25th Sep 2022 00:56am
Re. Tension Moist
25th Sep 2022 1:20am
You should run a comp and have everyone write about your lips--would be great fun to see what people come up with . 😁
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25th Sep 2022 3:15am
That would be interesting...
Might get some comments that would crush me.
But I appreciate the thought
Thanks ML !!
Might get some comments that would crush me.
But I appreciate the thought
Thanks ML !!
Re. Tension Moist
25th Sep 2022 6:57am
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25th Sep 2022 8:59am
Now that's a different kind of comment ...
I'm glad you enjoyed it PD
Dipping back into my roots of romantic writing.
There was a time everything wasn't so violent
Thx
I'm glad you enjoyed it PD
Dipping back into my roots of romantic writing.
There was a time everything wasn't so violent
Thx
Re. Tension Moist
25th Sep 2022 8:17pm
Grazing a beautiful neck is pretty amazing
Seeing goosebumps
Reveling in the moment
Love ❤ your comment...
Thx ID
Seeing goosebumps
Reveling in the moment
Love ❤ your comment...
Thx ID
Re: Re. Tension Moist
29th Sep 2022 3:03pm
I didn't get notification of your reply....
Just happened to check n saw your response.
Oh yes... N women love it ☺
Just happened to check n saw your response.
Oh yes... N women love it ☺
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29th Sep 2022 3:15pm
Re. Tension Moist
25th Sep 2022 10:25pm
Hey PS
Sipping tea - wild mane - grazing the neck.
You are giving me goosebumps!!
Love a good neck nibble. hahaha
Totally shocks the spirit's senses within gifting those
little mini bumps. LOL
Great piece!!
Sipping tea - wild mane - grazing the neck.
You are giving me goosebumps!!
Love a good neck nibble. hahaha
Totally shocks the spirit's senses within gifting those
little mini bumps. LOL
Great piece!!
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25th Sep 2022 10:47pm
Nothing like those nibbles, I agree
Of course give me access and of course I'll be back for more, DAILY !
THANKS A
🤠❤💯
Of course give me access and of course I'll be back for more, DAILY !
THANKS A
🤠❤💯
Re. Tension Moist
26th Sep 2022 12:43pm
Ah, the romance... it's always so lovely when you step into the light.
❤️k
❤️k
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26th Sep 2022 1:00pm
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26th Sep 2022 5:45pm
Yeahh a sexy romantic poem, dreamy and nice to read. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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26th Sep 2022 5:51pm
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8th Oct 2022 6:04am
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8th Oct 2022 11:17am
The women like this idea, I do top.
Could be like a water fountain soon ...
Thanks Wally
Could be like a water fountain soon ...
Thanks Wally