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Slippery When Wet
~~~°~~~
Drifting in and out
on the cusp
edging close
closer,
coiled tensions
evaporate
into wanton mist
Sense memory
alights the night
lucent vagueness
foggily takes shape
of that mouth
and
the taste
of her
Tingling fingers and toes
are harbingers
to the steady throbbing
between my legs
incessantly
increasing
Wild cadences climb
building
beat after beat
after
beat
My heart
rushes blood
flushing pure fantasy
escalating
sensation
tenfold
.
.
I feel her
drenched desire
perfectly meeting mine
I feel her
grinding....right there
I feel her
sliding up and down
twisting together
our dire ache
.
.
Smells of rich
intoxicating lust
magically perfume
our essence
I can't help but moan her name
and press into
the lust swirling
lure of my greed
Tornadic and wicked,
she matches
demands more;
soft powerful bodies
find rhyme and rhythm
through smoggy confusion
dazed in wet decadence
Lost to all else
pleasure swells;
we stormriders canter well
bringing time
to stand still
in one dreamily caught
moment
a kiss
long, deep
exquisitely earth shattering
She drinks deep
my moan
which turn to begs
then prayers to God herself
The flavour of her—
us
on my lips
heightens
my arousal
I dangerously
teeter
on the
crumbling brink
.
.
.
she whispers
just
out
of
earshot...
Written by
Bluevelvete
Published 17th Sep 2022
| Edited 18th Sep 2022
Author's Note
For the wet dreams competition https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/12359/
Why is it always riiight at the best part when you wake yourself up?!!?
©Blu2022
Why is it always riiight at the best part when you wake yourself up?!!?
©Blu2022
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 1:58pm
Wonderful!
That's exactly what I hoped for... awesome.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, A
I'm exhaling a sigh of relief 😌
It's lovely seeing you 🦋
🌹 💙
B
That's exactly what I hoped for... awesome.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, A
I'm exhaling a sigh of relief 😌
It's lovely seeing you 🦋
🌹 💙
B
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 1:36pm
Holly fxxk girl that was super hot, a lust filled kinkfest
You had ne at the tittle
Great job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron heart pounding faster xx
You had ne at the tittle
Great job gorgeous
Love and light
Ron heart pounding faster xx
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
I love love love your comments, my dear!
If you see a beaming off in the distance it's just me grinning!! 😁
I wasn't sure if this would go over like I wanted it to and it's a comp piece, so your comments gave me a boost of much needed 'atta girl!' Anytime I can get your heart pounding... it's a good erotic day! ;p
I'm thrilled you found this semi autobiographical ink super hot, I'll have to possibly fill in the blanks with a close version of the real events in another write one day.... ohh how the wheels turn...
Deepest thanks and much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 💙-⚔️
If you see a beaming off in the distance it's just me grinning!! 😁
I wasn't sure if this would go over like I wanted it to and it's a comp piece, so your comments gave me a boost of much needed 'atta girl!' Anytime I can get your heart pounding... it's a good erotic day! ;p
I'm thrilled you found this semi autobiographical ink super hot, I'll have to possibly fill in the blanks with a close version of the real events in another write one day.... ohh how the wheels turn...
Deepest thanks and much love from across the pond ✨ 🌊
🌹 💙-⚔️
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 2:47pm
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 4:31pm
Mmmm.... that's the age old ask, eh? ;p
....Sometimes though, girls just wanna have fun!!
Love the visit, MS
I'm all smiles your imagination is as boundless as it is. Thank you for sharing your delicious thoughts...
🌹💙
B
....Sometimes though, girls just wanna have fun!!
Love the visit, MS
I'm all smiles your imagination is as boundless as it is. Thank you for sharing your delicious thoughts...
🌹💙
B
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 3:12pm
I loved its slow and steady climb when fantasy is just the frozen video, in the virtual reality of the erotic consciousness
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 4:59pm
Ohh, slip!
Your thoughts are wonderfully felt. The slow steady climb, building anticipation with deliberate intensity is really the best kind of decadent dreaming.
I adore seeing you and thank you so much for stopping by.
Much love, my dear
🌹 💙
B
Your thoughts are wonderfully felt. The slow steady climb, building anticipation with deliberate intensity is really the best kind of decadent dreaming.
I adore seeing you and thank you so much for stopping by.
Much love, my dear
🌹 💙
B
Re. Slippery When Wet
Anonymous
17th Sep 2022 3:40pm
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 4:26pm
lol...
Hey there, Philis ;)
It's always a deeply pleasurable experience to tantalize; I'm thrilled you felt a bit of sensuous enjoyment and took the time out to share your thoughts with me.
Purrrr.... ;p
Much love and warm thanks,
🌹💙
B
Hey there, Philis ;)
It's always a deeply pleasurable experience to tantalize; I'm thrilled you felt a bit of sensuous enjoyment and took the time out to share your thoughts with me.
Purrrr.... ;p
Much love and warm thanks,
🌹💙
B
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 5:07pm
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 5:23pm
Waiting?
Luckily there are no lines within my vast sensual dreamscape; time and space moving in strange and unusual patterns make anything and everything a possibility. Art imitating life.... taking a page of it's essence... The results of flashing upon a heady memory and then the sandman taking control of my debaucheristic libido...
Yes, tornadic.... was the only word to almost do it justice....
-💙
;p
Luckily there are no lines within my vast sensual dreamscape; time and space moving in strange and unusual patterns make anything and everything a possibility. Art imitating life.... taking a page of it's essence... The results of flashing upon a heady memory and then the sandman taking control of my debaucheristic libido...
Yes, tornadic.... was the only word to almost do it justice....
-💙
;p
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 6:05pm
Wow, this is such a well written poem. Really captured each erotic moment before the awakening hehe.
Fantastic job my friend 😁
Fantastic job my friend 😁
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 6:25pm
I love the 'Wow', DC.
It's a treat to get your pov; it means a lot to me that you felt like this piece was well written. I truly take that to heart and hope that I was able to convey that dreamy quality along with the eroticism.... doing it some justice.
I appreciate you stopping in to leave your thoughts me your feedback. Some of my favorite!
Much obliged, my friend
🌹 💙
B
It's a treat to get your pov; it means a lot to me that you felt like this piece was well written. I truly take that to heart and hope that I was able to convey that dreamy quality along with the eroticism.... doing it some justice.
I appreciate you stopping in to leave your thoughts me your feedback. Some of my favorite!
Much obliged, my friend
🌹 💙
B
Re. Slippery When Wet
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
Hi, Solomon
The mind takes us where it takes us whenever we dream. A union of twin desires made fortuitous and utterly scorching in it's need to be felt, experienced and fulfilled, is where my own mind took me, when traveling upon the ethereal tracks of this particular dreamy night-train.
Glad you enjoyed the opportunity to take a peek inside and the visual accompaniment, too.
Thank you for stopping in to share your thoughts.
🌹 💙
B
The mind takes us where it takes us whenever we dream. A union of twin desires made fortuitous and utterly scorching in it's need to be felt, experienced and fulfilled, is where my own mind took me, when traveling upon the ethereal tracks of this particular dreamy night-train.
Glad you enjoyed the opportunity to take a peek inside and the visual accompaniment, too.
Thank you for stopping in to share your thoughts.
🌹 💙
B
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 7:35am
Rhyming:
When someone arouses erotic emotions,
in your sleep your mind sails on dreamy oceans,
when you see yourself with them realising
a yet to be consummated desiring
that sets your most erectile parts growing
and inner juices from your depths overflowing,
.
When someone arouses erotic emotions,
in your sleep your mind sails on dreamy oceans,
when you see yourself with them realising
a yet to be consummated desiring
that sets your most erectile parts growing
and inner juices from your depths overflowing,
.
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 7:16pm
Bravo, Solomon!
I appreciate you sharing your inspired ink!
Well done!
🌹 💙
-B
I appreciate you sharing your inspired ink!
Well done!
🌹 💙
-B
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 7:12pm
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 9:42pm
I love eliciting a 'Mmmm' from you, KP. That's a reward in itself and leaves goosebumps
Like I alluded to Solomon in the comments above, a fortuitous adventure into a rapturous dreamland. Drenched in pure debauchery ;p
Love your comments and I deeply appreciate the list add.
Much love,
🌹 💙
Like I alluded to Solomon in the comments above, a fortuitous adventure into a rapturous dreamland. Drenched in pure debauchery ;p
Love your comments and I deeply appreciate the list add.
Much love,
🌹 💙
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 7:54pm
Your poem my darling is the embodiment of perfection. There is nothing more beautiful, more compelling, or synchronized than two women in the embrace of their sisterhood. Your words celebrate this art in feminine motion in the golden heat of a Sapphic song of love. The sheer matching of the female embrace is yours to create in this poem of womanhood shared. I love what you made here my friend. And that title had me happy as a lark. ;-)
An embodiment of the Feminine
The mysterious heart of the sexual lotus
Where male fantasies dream of Sapphic love
Neath, the sweaty sheets
Primordial yearnings spurred by breast to breast
Mouth to genitals
The misty eyed lust of two women
Consummated in orgiastic kisses
Golden rules broken in taboo defying joy
Male mind tripping the light fantastic
Wishing to partake in a heavenly trio
Profuse gropings in the dark
Strange crevices of the mind
Where visions of sisterhood
The blending of genders
In total oneness
Taunting invitations
To the rituals of hunger
Gripping scenes of hand caressing derriere
Ruby lips on nipple
Teeth nipping at bud
Like a movie unreeling in the mind's eye
The essence of beauty
Distilled in pure female love
No taint of male peccadillo
Only the transcendence
Of woman engorged in woman
The complete embodiment of male ideals
Michelangelo like perfection
The virgin purity
Un-sullied by male ejaculations
The perfect geometry of symmetry
Realized in female union
An embodiment of the Feminine
The mysterious heart of the sexual lotus
Where male fantasies dream of Sapphic love
Neath, the sweaty sheets
Primordial yearnings spurred by breast to breast
Mouth to genitals
The misty eyed lust of two women
Consummated in orgiastic kisses
Golden rules broken in taboo defying joy
Male mind tripping the light fantastic
Wishing to partake in a heavenly trio
Profuse gropings in the dark
Strange crevices of the mind
Where visions of sisterhood
The blending of genders
In total oneness
Taunting invitations
To the rituals of hunger
Gripping scenes of hand caressing derriere
Ruby lips on nipple
Teeth nipping at bud
Like a movie unreeling in the mind's eye
The essence of beauty
Distilled in pure female love
No taint of male peccadillo
Only the transcendence
Of woman engorged in woman
The complete embodiment of male ideals
Michelangelo like perfection
The virgin purity
Un-sullied by male ejaculations
The perfect geometry of symmetry
Realized in female union
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 10:11pm
Dearest John,
I hardly know where to begin, my darling! You've left me gobsmacked and completely taken aback with your outpouring of understanding, astute awareness and honest contemplation.
Your appreciation and reverence to the beauty of unrestricted love between two ripe souls, two divine feminine entities is wholly refreshing and makes my heart sing.
I giggled that the title worked so well for you. I love the hinted dirty aspect in juxtaposition of the poem itself which isn't blatant but I hope, somewhat nuanced in it's delivery.
Your comments are a true poetic tribute, that I'm so humbled and honored by. I hope you post them on your page as a new poem offering because they deserve to breathe out loud, reflecting their own potent intrinsic value (you may have already, I haven't checked!)
I deeply adore you, my kindred soul.
A thousand thank you's
🌹 💙
-Susan
I hardly know where to begin, my darling! You've left me gobsmacked and completely taken aback with your outpouring of understanding, astute awareness and honest contemplation.
Your appreciation and reverence to the beauty of unrestricted love between two ripe souls, two divine feminine entities is wholly refreshing and makes my heart sing.
I giggled that the title worked so well for you. I love the hinted dirty aspect in juxtaposition of the poem itself which isn't blatant but I hope, somewhat nuanced in it's delivery.
Your comments are a true poetic tribute, that I'm so humbled and honored by. I hope you post them on your page as a new poem offering because they deserve to breathe out loud, reflecting their own potent intrinsic value (you may have already, I haven't checked!)
I deeply adore you, my kindred soul.
A thousand thank you's
🌹 💙
-Susan
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
I am overjoyed that my offering to the Sapphic Goddess embodied in your words gave you joy. I found that my two posts for the day put my poem in the drafts section. But with your heartfelt encouragement, I will certainly post it as soon as I can. Thank you my love for your endorsement of my sincere support of the physical realization of feminine love.
Much love and deep sensual rhythms,
John
Much love and deep sensual rhythms,
John
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Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 8:31pm
I like it, Riders of the Storm. Like two surfers catching that “O”_ffshore wave.
Well, I can scratch your “friend” off the list, I got no shot compared to the sensual feline amorous femme. With her azure eyes, the giver and receiver of celeste, percolating cyclone gushers. Leaving both damsels quite lubricious.
A very revelatory write. I could almost smell the candles, vanilla, sex, perfume, perspiration and the stormy petrichor.
Entry into the 00 files.
Well, I can scratch your “friend” off the list, I got no shot compared to the sensual feline amorous femme. With her azure eyes, the giver and receiver of celeste, percolating cyclone gushers. Leaving both damsels quite lubricious.
A very revelatory write. I could almost smell the candles, vanilla, sex, perfume, perspiration and the stormy petrichor.
Entry into the 00 files.
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
That's where stormriders came from, you caught me!! *wink!
For it to be an immediate entry into the coveted 00 files is simply enough acclaim and praise, but to have you feel/experience the visceral impact of my (usually undercover) wilderness caught in all her bellowing animalistic dances of debaucheristic delight and glory, is a true joy. Getting you that littlest peek into the depth of that particular bounty of beauty, makes me one very very happy Blue, indeed.
I hope you had huge.... smiles, too! 😏
To understand and savour one's own proclivities for varying experiences and appetites is to be in tune, honest and open to all things in life; making you more rounded and understanding in general the more you explore and come to understand yourself.... are just my own thoughts and opinions.
I cherish your comments here, dear Leo... you see and comprehend much.... I deeply love that about you and sincerely adore feeling that amazing energy.
Hugs and kisses, dear soul💋
🌹 💙
For it to be an immediate entry into the coveted 00 files is simply enough acclaim and praise, but to have you feel/experience the visceral impact of my (usually undercover) wilderness caught in all her bellowing animalistic dances of debaucheristic delight and glory, is a true joy. Getting you that littlest peek into the depth of that particular bounty of beauty, makes me one very very happy Blue, indeed.
I hope you had huge.... smiles, too! 😏
To understand and savour one's own proclivities for varying experiences and appetites is to be in tune, honest and open to all things in life; making you more rounded and understanding in general the more you explore and come to understand yourself.... are just my own thoughts and opinions.
I cherish your comments here, dear Leo... you see and comprehend much.... I deeply love that about you and sincerely adore feeling that amazing energy.
Hugs and kisses, dear soul💋
🌹 💙
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 11:36pm
Loved the reading of this as you always have such a way with words although with poets such as you my dear always makes this poet more inspired to try harder to capture such beauty as you have spilled here, Wet dreams are always so good until one wakes up to the sound of an alarm.
Cheers
Cheers
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 5:36am
It's humbly moving to feel like I can inspire or influence creation in another, so I thank you for that generous information/feedback. I will piggyback on that and also take inspiration from your comments and pov.... there's true motivation there, too... so, thank you ☺
I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your takeaways with me. I hope you enjoyed exploring this piece as much as I did dreaming it and doing it.
Much love and warmth,
🌹 💙
B
I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your takeaways with me. I hope you enjoyed exploring this piece as much as I did dreaming it and doing it.
Much love and warmth,
🌹 💙
B
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 11:45pm
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 00:15am
Awww... I sincerely love that you think so, Lj.
Thank you so much, I really appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹💙
B
Thank you so much, I really appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts with me.
It's always a pleasure ✨
🌹💙
B
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Sep 2022 11:58pm
Oh my !!!!
Cat’s got my tongue….
Or maybe just wishing :)
Intoxicating write …you definitely turned up the heat my dear poetess.
Cat’s got my tongue….
Or maybe just wishing :)
Intoxicating write …you definitely turned up the heat my dear poetess.
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
hahaha... Ohh Yesss, love it!
Thanks for feeling the fire, Keith. 🔥
I appreciate the visit and your very enthusiastic response, it was smile inducing feedback, all the way!! ;p
Much love and appreciation,
🌹-B
Thanks for feeling the fire, Keith. 🔥
I appreciate the visit and your very enthusiastic response, it was smile inducing feedback, all the way!! ;p
Much love and appreciation,
🌹-B
Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 5:57am
I'm in your naughty wet dream give you orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 7:21pm
You're supposed to be good!! haha... but I do know love the wet dreams, too!! My very very naughty charmer... I knew you would!!.... ha!
Thanks for commenting, Francisco.
appreciate it
🌹
Thanks for commenting, Francisco.
appreciate it
🌹
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 7:55pm
I'm good to you. I'm your sexy charmer. 😘 I'll be waiting for the thong/panties to drop. LOL.
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Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 6:08am
Bluevelvet,
The flavour of her, us on my lips heightens my arousal. I dangerously teether on the crumbling brink. She whispers..............just out of ear shot. Blue, that part of this thy ah poem is so steamingly eye stunning to me. And, the eye catch of this part of the poem had me screaming for more in ecstacy of mind. U truly enraptured me within this piece Slippery When Wet. The poem as an ah whole is so damn ah wonderfully written and expressed. Great penned typed ah mind work upon this one Blue! 🌷👅💋🍑🌈👁️💋👅🍑🥃🍺🍹🍻🥂🥂🥂🥂🍻🍹🍺🍺🥃👍🍜🥦🌽🥬🥂🤜🤛🛳️🤎🤍
The flavour of her, us on my lips heightens my arousal. I dangerously teether on the crumbling brink. She whispers..............just out of ear shot. Blue, that part of this thy ah poem is so steamingly eye stunning to me. And, the eye catch of this part of the poem had me screaming for more in ecstacy of mind. U truly enraptured me within this piece Slippery When Wet. The poem as an ah whole is so damn ah wonderfully written and expressed. Great penned typed ah mind work upon this one Blue! 🌷👅💋🍑🌈👁️💋👅🍑🥃🍺🍹🍻🥂🥂🥂🥂🍻🍹🍺🍺🥃👍🍜🥦🌽🥬🥂🤜🤛🛳️🤎🤍
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 7:33pm
Dang, Birchel!!
You definitely know how to make a girl feel like a million bucks! Because your comments are stunning and like gold to me, they're so generous and valued! I love to keep to you mentally screaming and ecstasy, Mmmm what a thought!!
My heart is full, knowing how much you enjoyed my beautiful and very satisfying dalliance into the softer side of my erotic needs. It's a pleasurable place to really find yourself.... I know I come..... back.... again and again ;p
Always such a joy to see you 🦋
All my warmest thanks, Birchel
🌹 💙🤎🤍🍁🍂👍🏻✨🔥
⑅✩♡ᵗʱᵃᵑᵏઽ*♡♬*°
You definitely know how to make a girl feel like a million bucks! Because your comments are stunning and like gold to me, they're so generous and valued! I love to keep to you mentally screaming and ecstasy, Mmmm what a thought!!
My heart is full, knowing how much you enjoyed my beautiful and very satisfying dalliance into the softer side of my erotic needs. It's a pleasurable place to really find yourself.... I know I come..... back.... again and again ;p
Always such a joy to see you 🦋
All my warmest thanks, Birchel
🌹 💙🤎🤍🍁🍂👍🏻✨🔥
⑅✩♡ᵗʱᵃᵑᵏઽ*♡♬*°
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
19th Sep 2022 00:53am
Re. Slippery When Wet
18th Sep 2022 9:25pm
Hi B:)
So seducing this write. So much dreamy sensuality with vivid detail. The long deep kiss (my favorite) - the
flavored moaning all so lusciously captured in this. Loved how it all ended within an earshot whisper.
Kinda like how I'm reading in my mind to myself.
Really brought the reader into your intimate mind. I'm kinda bumbling around for a seat in there.
Don't mind me - just looking for a place to sit. LOL
Good luck in the comp!!!
On a lighter note - I read the title and thought
about the Bon Jovi album!! hahaha
So seducing this write. So much dreamy sensuality with vivid detail. The long deep kiss (my favorite) - the
flavored moaning all so lusciously captured in this. Loved how it all ended within an earshot whisper.
Kinda like how I'm reading in my mind to myself.
Really brought the reader into your intimate mind. I'm kinda bumbling around for a seat in there.
Don't mind me - just looking for a place to sit. LOL
Good luck in the comp!!!
On a lighter note - I read the title and thought
about the Bon Jovi album!! hahaha
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
22nd Sep 2022 6:20am
Hey there, A.
I can't believe I missed your comments .... what a knucklehead I am🤭... my bad!!!
Trying to pen a sensation like being lost within a dream so vivid it spurs even your deep subconscious into having sensual lightning strikes of awareness seemed like a task that I needed to at least attempt.... and was definitely a lure. I appreciate you seeing and feeling what you detailed, that's awesome to read and I'm so glad it worked for you.
lol.. Ha!!.. Nahhh, there's more than enough room up there in noggin'.... I'll be sure to save you your own reserved seat to avoid any further bumbling... 😂
(yes, I took all I could not to use that Slippery When Wet BJ album cover... hahaha... hysterical!)
Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts with me, A. You are a welcomed voice that I truly enjoy hearing from.
Much love and appreciation,
🌹 💙
B
I can't believe I missed your comments .... what a knucklehead I am🤭... my bad!!!
Trying to pen a sensation like being lost within a dream so vivid it spurs even your deep subconscious into having sensual lightning strikes of awareness seemed like a task that I needed to at least attempt.... and was definitely a lure. I appreciate you seeing and feeling what you detailed, that's awesome to read and I'm so glad it worked for you.
lol.. Ha!!.. Nahhh, there's more than enough room up there in noggin'.... I'll be sure to save you your own reserved seat to avoid any further bumbling... 😂
(yes, I took all I could not to use that Slippery When Wet BJ album cover... hahaha... hysterical!)
Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts with me, A. You are a welcomed voice that I truly enjoy hearing from.
Much love and appreciation,
🌹 💙
B
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Nov 2022 6:45pm
18th Sep 2022 9:31pm
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
21st Sep 2022 4:56pm
Hey there Os... I'm so relieved you're back!!
Well, I do like pushing the limits a bit, my dear poet. ;p Thank you for taking the time to stop by and for leaving me your thoughts, as well.
I can't help but deeply adore knowing of your enjoyment at teetering along with me. This is a competition piece that I created commingling fiction with a bit of luscious reality.... so your comments definitely make for those awesome grinning smiles.
Much thanks and much love,
🌹 💙
B
Well, I do like pushing the limits a bit, my dear poet. ;p Thank you for taking the time to stop by and for leaving me your thoughts, as well.
I can't help but deeply adore knowing of your enjoyment at teetering along with me. This is a competition piece that I created commingling fiction with a bit of luscious reality.... so your comments definitely make for those awesome grinning smiles.
Much thanks and much love,
🌹 💙
B
Re. Slippery When Wet
23rd Sep 2022 7:48pm
Let me polish that trophy for you...
Phenomenal work Blue. It has all the components of erotic fantasy and uncontrolled dreamy desires. And Judging the many RL, likes and comments, most folks would agree, this is a winner.
Standing ovation.
Phenomenal work Blue. It has all the components of erotic fantasy and uncontrolled dreamy desires. And Judging the many RL, likes and comments, most folks would agree, this is a winner.
Standing ovation.
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
You made me giggle and feel a lovely sense of accomplishment, Walter... thanks so much for that.
There are a myriad of self protective reasons why I have slowly taken steps back, lessening my participating here on DUP. Me, being the type of person that prefers the comfort of residing in shadows to the the bs artificial glow of a much concocted and completely fabricated spotlight, makes for skepticism, at best... but you and your generosity of heart and spirit restore my faith by reminding me of how there are those, like yourself, who are filled with sincerity, goodness, compassion and considerate kindness. I just wish there were more of that to spread around.... I continue to hold out hope...
I am humbled that you believe in me and support me like you do and I won't ever take that awesome fact for granted.
In gratitude, my friend
🌹💙
-Susan
There are a myriad of self protective reasons why I have slowly taken steps back, lessening my participating here on DUP. Me, being the type of person that prefers the comfort of residing in shadows to the the bs artificial glow of a much concocted and completely fabricated spotlight, makes for skepticism, at best... but you and your generosity of heart and spirit restore my faith by reminding me of how there are those, like yourself, who are filled with sincerity, goodness, compassion and considerate kindness. I just wish there were more of that to spread around.... I continue to hold out hope...
I am humbled that you believe in me and support me like you do and I won't ever take that awesome fact for granted.
In gratitude, my friend
🌹💙
-Susan
Re. Slippery When Wet
23rd Sep 2022 11:06pm
This will date me since this was something my brother listened to, The Commodores, “Slippery When Wet”:
If you dig on what you got
'Cause what you got can sho' nuff mean a lot
If you aint takin' care of business
This you must expect
Love gets slippery when it's wet
You know hangin' loose
Can be outta sight
But hangin' loose
No it just ain't right
You see slippin'a tippin'
Havin' fun ain't no good
Leavin' homework undone
You've got keep your thing together
If you dig on what you've got
'Cause what you've got can sho nuff mean a lot
If you ain't takin' care of business
This you can expect
Love gets slippery when it's wet
If you dig on what you got
'Cause what you got can sho' nuff mean a lot
If you aint takin' care of business
This you must expect
Love gets slippery when it's wet
You know hangin' loose
Can be outta sight
But hangin' loose
No it just ain't right
You see slippin'a tippin'
Havin' fun ain't no good
Leavin' homework undone
You've got keep your thing together
If you dig on what you've got
'Cause what you've got can sho nuff mean a lot
If you ain't takin' care of business
This you can expect
Love gets slippery when it's wet
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
25th Sep 2022 8:50am
Hey there, Jazz!
You're ability to instantly connect your poetry impressions to music is truly awesome and an impressive use of your sense memory recall.... I love Lionel Richie but sadly can't speak to many Commodores songs... I do dig the lyrics and see the relation, completely.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece and found that musical 'accompaniment'... 🎶
Love seeing you visit 🦋
Thank you so much, my dear
🌹 💙
B
You're ability to instantly connect your poetry impressions to music is truly awesome and an impressive use of your sense memory recall.... I love Lionel Richie but sadly can't speak to many Commodores songs... I do dig the lyrics and see the relation, completely.
I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece and found that musical 'accompaniment'... 🎶
Love seeing you visit 🦋
Thank you so much, my dear
🌹 💙
B
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
25th Sep 2022 3:22pm
My parents had no substantial talent with music but it was on all time. My brother in high school was in a band and played trombone. The would often practice in our living room because of the high ceiling.
Then I got into music and some of that intro included my brother’s music.
Then I got into music and some of that intro included my brother’s music.
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Re. Slippery When Wet
27th Sep 2022 11:30am
Wow,
this is such a vivid hot poem.
Makes me so curious, what this explosion of female sensation feels, myself!
aaa!
Love
H
this is such a vivid hot poem.
Makes me so curious, what this explosion of female sensation feels, myself!
aaa!
Love
H
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
28th Sep 2022 00:40am
Thanks for the read and the kind words, Tim
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this one.
🌹B
I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this one.
🌹B
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
6th Oct 2022 9:21pm
Thanks for stopping by to check this one out, Steve. It's nice to know you found a bit of something here....
I appreciate you!
Hope all is well.
-B
I appreciate you!
Hope all is well.
-B
Re. Slippery When Wet
10th Oct 2022 1:43am
Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
As I certainly hoped it would!
I'm truly thrilled you felt my sincerity in the way I tried to evoke my heady desire... to have it palpably fluttering and flying all around you, makes me smile in tremendous pride and humble satisfaction.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, my new friend.
Much obliged,
🌹 💙
B
I'm truly thrilled you felt my sincerity in the way I tried to evoke my heady desire... to have it palpably fluttering and flying all around you, makes me smile in tremendous pride and humble satisfaction.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, my new friend.
Much obliged,
🌹 💙
B
Re. Slippery When Wet
4th Nov 2022 8:43pm
wish I could have seen as my mouth was watering to see more juicy and sweet
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
4th Nov 2022 9:33pm
I agree, DC... It was definitely juicy and sweet, indeed.
Thank you for stopping by!
Thank you for stopping by!
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4th Nov 2022 9:44pm
Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Dec 2022 8:39pm
Yeah...had a couple of these where I didn't wake up...OMFG!
Hope the same for you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Hope the same for you.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Slippery When Wet
17th Dec 2022 9:49pm
I have forced myself back to sleep many times just to try and slip back in where I left off!! *wink..
Glad you enjoyed, dear kitty!!
OMFG is right.... purrrrr!!!
🌹 💙 💙
Glad you enjoyed, dear kitty!!
OMFG is right.... purrrrr!!!
🌹 💙 💙