Sanctity

This is a beautiful piece of erotica and we love how you incorporated nature into it. There is a reason where couples vacation at the beach. The sites and sounds are an aphrodisiac in themselves, tight work Lady

Thank you so much, dearest Me 😊🥀

Super erotic read, I loved it. Well done
Love and light
Ron xx

I'm so glad you loved it... I was wondering if I should post it... Thanks for your kind support, dear Ron 😊🌹

Wow, art and love poem
Super erotic and lovely painting
Very impressive

BIG LIKE

Thanks a lot, dear PS. So happy that you liked both my poem as well as art work. It's such a big honour getting such great response from an awesome artist 😊😊😊🌹

Dear ID,

Very eloquent write. Your analogous approach between love and nature was great. Your artwork is equally great. I enjoyed its support of your poem. Elegant, and lovely. H🌷

Thanks a bunch, dear Honoria. Love your very encouraging words of appreciation. I'm all over the moon now. 😊😊😊

Wow! Thank you so much dear PW. 😊🥀🥀🥀

I agree with I IS ME's comment that the sounds and sights of the beach can be an aphrodisiac (hence the popularity of seaside honeymoons and marital holidays) and your poem fits into the atmosphere.

Thanks a lot, dear Solomon. 😊🌹🌹🌹

Lovey use of ocean/salt/wet metaphor, which grows stronger with each repetition until in the end a tsunami washes over the landscape of love.

Thanks a lot for sharing your lovely thoughts on this piece. I very much appreciate you stopping by. Much thanks 😊🥀

I love how the erotic wording was completely related to the sea life. What a beautiful way to look at it. Thanks for sharing this.

So glad you liked this piece of mine😊
Thank you so much for stopping by n leaving kind comments🥀 I'm really honoured by the reading list add 😊

Just wow InDreamz, an erotic masterpiece. The art is gorgeous and compliments it so perfectly. It's hard to even think of a comment that could express the beauty of your words. Your words flow like the ocean as far as the eye can see and deeper than seems possible. The sea theme is so beautiful. I could smell the purity of the salt in the air. The purest love that brings the most amazing intimacy you could ever experience. Hear the waves crashing and feel the sand caressing the feet and bodies. The cold water turning to steam as it embraces hot bodies, experiencing every contrast of sensations imaginable. The whispering song of the breath. Constructing and deconstructing, that truly represents this incredible coming together of bodies and soul. You can be anything together, go anywhere... Drowning in each other forever. I am totally in awe of the astounding beauty of this. It is truly magnificent.

Sorry for the late reponse but i needed time to let that incredibly fascinating review by you to sink in... I read.. reread.... If there is a way I would add your comments to my reading list.... You are not only gorgeous but highly intelligent... You so get me... my thoughts... My poetry.... I'm so just in awe of you... Your analysis is more beautiful than my poem is....
Thank you so much, amazing Kristina ❤ Such high praise coming from a poetess of your calibre is a great honour for me🥀Your each word means a lot to me... Thanks a tonne, sweet poetess🥰

Your response was definitely worth the wait. :) It is a gift in itself especially if I could put a smile on your beautiful face during a difficult time. 'I would add your comments to my reading list' I absolutely love that. I have never thought of that, it's such a cool idea. But I disagree, my analysis is not more beautiful than the poem and it only exists because of it. :)

You are so kind n sweet, dearest Kristina.
*hugs* 😊🥀

Hoi hoi
From the first letter to the last: lovely and moving poetry.
Beautiful art work too!
Oh…, what can I say that hasn’t been said already?
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus

Thank you graciously for your fantastic review... So grateful to you 🌹
Very much appreciate you gracing my page with your kind presence. 😊

That was great.  Romance and the sea.  Erotic and spiritual, natural without vulgar.

Wow! So wonderful to see this piece added to your reading list! That's certainly a great honour! Thank you so much for your fantastic review... I'm so over the moon now... Much thanks ❤

Every time I read a poem that I wrote, it makes me travel with my imagination to represent all the seasons and try to imagine the dynamics of each line.
Read your poem, I wrote these lines :
"It's under the softness of your hand
That my body woke up this morning.
It's under the warmth of your fingers
That my den have found this excitement.
It's under the warmth of your tongue,
That my prick has taken on this mango taste.
It's under the stiffness of my manhood,
That pleasure sprung from your femininity.”

A kiss for you queen of sweet poetry

Great to know that my poem prompted you to  pen   something so poetic....

Thank you so much for your sweet words, dear poet 🌹

I am honored to read your poems, which put me in a state of spiritual ecstasy
I wait for a new poem from you every day.
I have published poems, some of which I wrote old and some new
I am honored that you had the time to read it and give your opinion on what I wrote
Greetings to you, Queen of Poems

Tastefully written and lovely like all your work I've read so far.

Thanks a lot, dear poetess 💕
It's been so kind of you to explore my work and leave such encouraging feedback. Thanks a lot 🙏🌹❤

Pretty images.

Thanks a lot, 13 😊

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely incredible 👏 and very passionately expressed beautiful ink spill queen 👸!!

Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖

Beautiful. The wording and the message is breathtaking. Fantastic!

Sounds like it was a magical night.. I'll think of this poem next time I go by the ocean.

Oh I'm flattered ....thank you graciously for reading my work.much appreciated 😊

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Gorgeous piece, and your art is amazing, so complimentary.  I love the way you start this poem... "There was something sacred about the sex.." because it sets the tone of your piece thematically and also establishes a strong recurrent alliteration that you use throughout.  The ocean and lovemaking are frequently used analogously in poetry, but you've brought freshness and novelty to that association.  You've captured the essence of the emotional connection that is so often missing with 'love making' - it's a masterful piece of work.

Beautiful artwork and poetry. Hugs and love, Oral
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Wow 💥💥💥❤️

Thanks ❤️

Have just reread this poem today. Favourite chunks:

skin on skin    
we were two beautiful beings    
sculpting love    
with our limbs    

as we went devouring each other    
the sweetness  of our lips and mouth    
tasted salt    
salt - reminiscent of the sea    
together You and Me    

Thank you so much for exploring my work. I very much appreciate it 🙏🌹

I think I read this one of yours before. I didn't review it perhaps, but I think I read it. I really enjoyed the imagery interwoven into the type of sex you limn within. The ending ended it so well, "just like the sea, by the sea". Very poetic poem and rich in feeling. Again, I think I read this one before. But that shows that it lingers on in my mind. tyfs as always  

Thanks a lot dear for a beautiful review . I highly appreciate it ❤️