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Senses on Fire
Flowers
Talking quietly
Direct
Cut to the chase
Dominant
Amped
Senses on fire
Sir on the scene
Exposed
Graphic
Mercy
Tender
After the show
Talking quietly
Direct
Cut to the chase
Dominant
Amped
Senses on fire
Sir on the scene
Exposed
Graphic
Mercy
Tender
After the show
Author's Note
Gouache Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Senses on Fire
29th Aug 2022 6:19pm
WOW write, holy crap! 🔥🔥🔥
Horny art
Standing ovation
It's a keeper
❤️❤️❤️k
Horny art
Standing ovation
It's a keeper
❤️❤️❤️k
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Re: Re. Senses on Fire
Digging this comment k
BIG
DESIRE
You feel it
What more can I ask?
BIG THANKS K
❤❤
BIG
DESIRE
You feel it
What more can I ask?
BIG THANKS K
❤❤
Re. Senses on Fire
29th Aug 2022 6:20pm
There is something in the pic that makes us think of a tiger which would match the piece. Tight work dude
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29th Aug 2022 6:26pm
Re. Senses on Fire
29th Aug 2022 9:03pm
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29th Aug 2022 10:29pm
Re. Senses on Fire
29th Aug 2022 9:56pm
Quite the poem, Sir…and the painting, just WOW.
Call me crazy, but in your painting I see orange paws holding a red kitten…ahem. That kitten is sure in for a treat!
Love the amped up energy and tenderness in this. Exquisite. I want more.
Call me crazy, but in your painting I see orange paws holding a red kitten…ahem. That kitten is sure in for a treat!
Love the amped up energy and tenderness in this. Exquisite. I want more.
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29th Aug 2022 10:33pm
I'm glad you want more.
That's music to my ears !!
Amazing what people see in my paintings
Glad the fervor and tenderness shown through
Was hoping for that
A little tender mercies here, if you wil
More to come
Thx Her Mary
That's music to my ears !!
Amazing what people see in my paintings
Glad the fervor and tenderness shown through
Was hoping for that
A little tender mercies here, if you wil
More to come
Thx Her Mary
Re. Senses on Fire
30th Aug 2022 1:52am
I agree with Me. I got a tiger vibe with this because of the stripes I see.
The art pulled me in that direction accompanied with your words.
Cut to the chase!! Exposed, It's all there.
Enjoyed this!!
The art pulled me in that direction accompanied with your words.
Cut to the chase!! Exposed, It's all there.
Enjoyed this!!
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Re: Re. Senses on Fire
30th Aug 2022 2:11am
No messing around Adel,
Right to the heart of it
BIG Thanks for the visit and comment
You know what I'm gonna say next
STAY TUNED
THX A
Right to the heart of it
BIG Thanks for the visit and comment
You know what I'm gonna say next
STAY TUNED
THX A
Re. Senses on Fire
30th Aug 2022 2:15am
Flowers are talking loudly to me.
I like direct, dominant, and amped.
Sir setting senses on fire.
That's my kind of show.
The best performer for the chamber.
Nice to see there is aftercare too.
This painting is definitely on fire.
Got the tiger vibe too. Beautiful.
I like direct, dominant, and amped.
Sir setting senses on fire.
That's my kind of show.
The best performer for the chamber.
Nice to see there is aftercare too.
This painting is definitely on fire.
Got the tiger vibe too. Beautiful.
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Re: Re. Senses on Fire
30th Aug 2022 2:19am
Don't need a lot of words
Painting has the psychology
Tiger stripes yes
A lot to embrace
Direct
Call me
Thx Kx
Painting has the psychology
Tiger stripes yes
A lot to embrace
Direct
Call me
Thx Kx
Re. Senses on Fire
30th Aug 2022 9:05am
Dear PS,
For me, there is a ton of sensual heat and energy in the poem that plays out in staccato like fashion. Like it has to be said quickly so it all comes out and nothing is left unsaid. Then you back it up with the art. Seals the deal better than a handshake. Awesome! H🌷
For me, there is a ton of sensual heat and energy in the poem that plays out in staccato like fashion. Like it has to be said quickly so it all comes out and nothing is left unsaid. Then you back it up with the art. Seals the deal better than a handshake. Awesome! H🌷
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30th Aug 2022 12:51pm
Dear H,
It's a style, a lot of message with few words.
I like to employ it.
The painting evolved a lot, started one way and became a larger overlay project. I sat with it unfinished for several weeks trying to figure out the next move. Then it tue orange came to me. I was gratified by the result and reaction to it.
Stat tuned
Thx H
🤠❤
It's a style, a lot of message with few words.
I like to employ it.
The painting evolved a lot, started one way and became a larger overlay project. I sat with it unfinished for several weeks trying to figure out the next move. Then it tue orange came to me. I was gratified by the result and reaction to it.
Stat tuned
Thx H
🤠❤
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30th Aug 2022 12:52pm
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Re: Re. Senses on Fire
30th Aug 2022 1:01pm
Good Day Sms,
It looks like I lucked out with both poem and painting.
That's a good feeling...
Words came pretty easiy in Poetspeak world but the painting was a labor of love with alot of deliberation. Best ones take time..
Like with women, you can't rush them, time and listening wins the day sometimes... Other times we have to send in Sir !
Many thanks brother
It looks like I lucked out with both poem and painting.
That's a good feeling...
Words came pretty easiy in Poetspeak world but the painting was a labor of love with alot of deliberation. Best ones take time..
Like with women, you can't rush them, time and listening wins the day sometimes... Other times we have to send in Sir !
Many thanks brother
Re. Senses on Fire
31st Aug 2022 2:09am
She wants you. You go all night long and give her orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
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31st Aug 2022 2:12am
Re. Senses on Fire
6th Sep 2022 6:02pm
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6th Sep 2022 6:10pm
It's been a very productive few weeks, I must admit.
I'm gratified that you like them and say so.
Helps me to merge at it ....
BIG THANKS WALLY
I'm gratified that you like them and say so.
Helps me to merge at it ....
BIG THANKS WALLY